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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3



Happy 67th Indian Republic Day . Always feel proud of being an Indian . 😛


P.S. - Before you guys plan to read this chapter further , I have a small announcement to make ... All those who want Rishbala scenes , well a big SORRY to disappoint you guys . Except for the last 4-5 chappy's you will not get any Rishbala scenes , because if you are following this story then you must have understood this by now, that both the protagonists are at different places and so its not possible to have their scenes together all of a sudden . Also since I have planned to write this story as a suspense thriller , there can be updates where you will get both the characters in the same update or anyone character . So if you guys want Rishbala in every update then that's not possible because I cant change my story line else it will kill the suspense element and further updates of the story ... I hope you guys understand my situation .



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"This is not a lie. I always say truth... I told you the truth unlike you, who is telling me lies after lie", Sultan said with a disinterest.


Madhu's face became pale as if all the blood was drained from her face.


"Don't look so shocked. Your dearest husband works for Stockholm Government and not in Stock Exchange. Right??"

Madhu literally freaks out. Now she was getting scared sitting with him. She stands from her seat and presses the button above her head to call the Air Hostess to change her seat when suddenly Sultan says , "I know your life rests in your husband. If you want him well and alive in one single piece then without gaining any attention and creating a fuss, sit down quietly."

Madhu still kept standing looking at the Air Hostess to come quickly when suddenly Sultan from his jacket's pocket takes out one wrist watch and a Taylor swift's music CD

Madhu looks at Sultan with horror stricken face

"I know you must have identified these items. Isn't it. These items belongs to your darling husband, Am I right? Now understand this simple thing very clearly Madhubla!!! It's not difficult for me to get these items from your house so you must have realized that, it's not that difficult also , to kill your husband. My men's are outside your house keeping any eye on Rishabh and waiting for my instructions. The moment you try to act smart with me, I will call my men to finish your dearest husband for once & forever." , Sultan said with a cold voice

Madhu had tears in her eyes.

"Who are you? And how do you know all this??" , Madhu asked with a sob

"I have been keeping an eye on you from past 6 months. Like I said before that this is all a mind game. You really need to use your brain 24*7 to know how your opponent behaves & thinks." , Sultan said to Madhu in a very low voice

Suddenly the Air Hostess comes to their seat.

"Yes sir, what do you need??" and she sees Madhu crying.

"What happened Mam?? Are you OK?", the Air Hostess asked to Madhu in a concerned voice

"Could you get this beautiful lady a glass of water?? You see this beautiful lady has a rough day today so she just got emotional." , Sultan said to the Hostess while looking at Madhu who was trying hard to control her tears from flowing.

"Sure sir."

"Why are you doing this with me Sultan?? I don't even know you" , Madhu said wiping her tears

"Comm'on Mrs.Kundra! Why the hell on earth you will know a terrorist? It's just that , to achieve our aim we need you and your husband . Now do as I say or else you know my men who are outside your house will not take a second to kill your husband."

"First let me speak to Rishabh so that I can know that he is safe and sound and you dint harm him , only then I will do what you want me to do" , Madhu said with a confidence meeting Sultan's eye

"Of course Madhu! You have to speak to your husband only to get my work done" , Sultan said with a soft laugh


"Call your husband NOW who must be in the living room playing PS2"

She looks shocked at him

"Oh... don't look so shocked at me . Like I said before that I have been keeping an eye on you from 6 months , so it's obvious that I will know everything about you and your husband . Now comm'on quickly call him before this turbulent weather disrupts the in-flight call services." , Sultan says while looking ahead at the passengers

"Why are you doing this with me" , Madhu says crying.


"Common Madhu I will leave you scot free after the work is done . You will go your way and I will go my way. Now without doing more drama call your Rishabh and convince him to shift Russia's President from Sheraton Hotel to your Grand Hotel ." , Sultan says to Madhu in a soft audible voice


Now everything was making sense to Madhu . Now she slowly understood that why this deadly man took her and Rishabh as bait . Now she was able to join the dots clearly. She looks damn shocked at Sultan who was looking at the passengers to see, if they both attracted any attention.


"What??? Why are you looking at me like this???" , Sultan says to Madhu while turning his head towards Madhu


"What are you trying to do with Russia's President??"


"Ohh... So you joined the dots ... Bravo ..."




I hope you are enjoying the mystery and suspense with each passing chapters . 😉😉 Stay tuned to know what happens next ...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent job ishu
Hmmm so dat sadakchap is using rk n madhu to reach da president
Amazing keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting update Sin Babe!👏
Loved it... 😛
Yeah i can understand... In this crucial life or death situation u cant bring in romance sequences... Haha...😆
But just wish to see Rk's side story...i m mean what he is doing other than playing psp...😆
U know what? I m liking this sultan... Yes... He perfectly fits to play a terrorist role... 👍🏼
Continue soon dear!😳
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update. Enjoying the suspense.continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb part.
So Sultan kept tabs for 6 months. But how come RK's hme is bugged. Was he not careful enough?
Eager to read next. The story is moving on beautifully.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all d 3 parts in one go. Fab story! I'm loving d suspence element.
Looking forward to d next part...
Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE : Before reading the next chapter which I shall most probably post tomorrow , I just want to ask all those Regular readers who read and really take that effort of commenting AND all those silent readers who are so damn busy , that they have the time on earth to read the update BUT don't have the time to comment on stories . Well I will not say all those speeches that your comments encourages writers and blah blah blah because at the end of the day same thing will happen . Only those handful of section will reply & others will just ignore this note . Allright my question was that - "Are my stories that bad that you dont feel like commenting ??" Oh no... I will not change my style of writing for anyone . I am just asking this because if you feel the way my stories are written or depicted is that bad or not enthralling to attract you guys , then I will just stop writing for this forum ?? I mean I have other good works to do so I should focus on that rather than writing and entertaining you guys . So just tell me , like SERIOUSLY tell me , "where am I lacking in presenting my stories to you that you guys are really are not intrested in commenting ???" P.S. - I am not feeling sad or discouraged because of your no comments on my stories . But I have noticed this that except for 2-3 writers in this forum , no other writers have that much of comments , ALTHOUGH the views on reading the story of such writers on whose stories there are less comments is enormously humongous . See we writers feel proud whether you comment or not because that's what distinguishes us from readers that we are writers and we are extra creative than readers but still as a writer I guess even you should have that ethic of encouraging writers . And I really want to know that "where am I lacking in giving you guys a superb update ??" Just tell me . I like brutally honest people so just tell me else I shall quit writing for this forum and can write for my pleasure . P.P.S - I am really not feeling sad about you guys not commenting but this is I am saying on behalf of all those writers on whose stories there lakhs of views but only less than 100 comments . Be responsible guys and always try to do good things . I will update the next part probably by tomorrow . Good Night .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my darling... You are not lacking anyway in giving super perfect updates...
U really r one creative writer... I adore the fact that you will never give away the suspense of the story... U keep your readers on the edge of their seats... So please do write... & yeah its really disheartening when our efforts go waste... We really do have lots of better jobs to do than write a story for hours & post here... We write for our pleasure & also to entertain the readers & they shld know the courtesy to comment on our hard work...
Myself being a writer I can understand u so well & i agree with u too... seriously, why cant silent readers leave a few words? Be it positive or negative?
I wish everyone reads & appreciate the effort of the writers...

Well, you said u like people being brutally honest so i am being one & I will tell where u might lack...
First, i know sending pm is waste of time from our part... But its the only way to reach your stories to the readers... If u find someone not replying then cut them of your pm list...
Second, don't start too many stories at a time... It will confuse the readers as we surely will take time to update all the stories...
Third, dont leave any story unfinished... Readers get the idea that u wont complete this story too like other stories so they might not read your works...
Well these are the place we writers lack... There is nothing to do with your writing... Its perfect... So keep writing... Atleast for your loyal readers like me...

Okay dear... If you stop posting in forum also I want to read your stories... So please write & post it on wattpad or email me personally...

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey buddy. Just read ur story now. Dint see it before. Do u hav it's link in the writers index. If not plss post it there else many ppl wont find it. Im busy with my exams so wont be online frequently till end of march. But plsss do pm me ur updates. Wuld love to read. N by the way awesome story. It is very unique concept
...Seema... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ishu please continue ur work which u r doing brilliantly.
n yes its really v annoying when da views r far more than comments n likes. I can understand.
silent readers should drop few words .if one read da update then wats da harm in writing few words.
u all writers r doing fantastic job by keep this forum n rishbala alive.on our part,v too sholud appreciate ur job.

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