HUM HAIN DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE RM FF updated 12/05 COMPLETED page-89 - Page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago
@11 omg i cant belive this its all a revenge game by our hero but sad he misunderstood madhu very much 😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
Touching romance is in the air for both them. Soon it's going to be very beautiful when these two realease their passion for each other now it is a dream only pls continue. Thanks for the awesome update love it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc updt..!! Rk imagining bittuji as madhu🥱ab rk tajmahal ki jagah madhumahal nahi bittu-mahal banayega🤣.. Aww.. Rk didnt wait for madhu to come back... He himself brought her back.. Madhu being critic... Thanks for pm :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesomeee update...loved it so much especially when rk woken up n imagine bittuji as madhu at that i was like 😆😆... pls pls pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome .Loved it.
RK went to malik,s place early in d morning jus to take madhu along wid him 😆 n brought her to studio😆

malvika is adding rain to fire😛.pool party. cool!😉😎
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Thanks a lot everyone...Most of you said that this story reminds you of MB...I am really very happy that I am able to remind you of our favourite show...i am very very grateful...as it is my first story and i got such wonderful comments from you all thank you guys😊😊


Part 27

Madhu was busy searching her wardrobe for clothes to wear at the party but she couldn't find a single thing and stood in front of the wardrobe all helpless

Madhu: Suits and only suits...Oh no what am I going to wear at the party (She took a brief sigh)

RK: This! (He kneeled at the side of the wardrobe and brought a box forward)

Madhu: What is it? (while making a confusing face)

RK: Bikini...this is a bikini (He said with a serious look)

Madhu: What...R..RK...You want me to wear this? (With eyes open wide)

RK: So can't you open and see it yourself...what is the use of me bringing this with full packing?

Madhu took it from him and started unwrapping the box while RK was looking at her...she finally opened the box and saw a beautifull floral romper...but she didn't knew that its was a romper

Madhu: This is beauti...(She paused when she picked up the romper and was shocked to see that it was so small).

RK: What happened Biwi...you didn't like it?

Madhu: What is this RK...do you think I will wear this?

RK: Well I don't think but I know that you will wear it.

Madhu: In the whole world you got only this?

RK: No Biwi...i searched for many...but I saw it and I imagined you in this...and the very next moment I decided to buy this one...because you looked the best.

Madhu was speechless listening to this and her heart started running at a fast pace...she started smiling but then she came out of her trance realising RK is still standing in front of her.

Madhu: Okay...I will wear it.

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RK: Come on Biwi get ready fast (He said while wearing a Light Blue Summer blazer)

Madhu looked at him and was all flattered by his dressing sense and his looks...he was donning a funky look which was quite unusual for Madhu as she has only seen him in formal attires whenever going to a party...but this time he looked totally different wearing Khakhi shorts a V-neck T shirt and a summer blazer...He was looking completely stunning in that look and Madhu couldn't stop herself from staring at him...He was setting up his hair when he looked at Madhu and made a confusing look

RK: What happened Biwi...get ready fast.

Madhu: You are looking hoo...(And she stopped herself and realised that hot would be an inappropriate word to use so she cleared her throat and corrected herself) Handsome.

RK looked at her and said "Ahaan...well thanks Biwi"...Madhu smiled and went to bathroom with her romper.

RK was waiting for Madhu in their room and then he heard the sound of the door opening...He looked at the door of the bathroom and saw Madhu peeping outside.

RK: Madhu...in any case you have to come outside...now stop getting nervous and come out.

Madhu: But RK this is too short I can't go like this

RK: Madhu nothing will happen just trust me...I am sure you are looking good..now come fast...Okay okay I will close my eyes and you can look yourself in the mirror is that fine?

Madhu: Okay...close your eyes

RK: Okay I have closed my eyes now come out (He closed his eyes)

Madhu came outside and stood in front of the mirror RK too was standing near her and while Madhu was still making herself comfortable in that romper RK opened his eyes and saw a completely different version of Madhu. She looked beautiful and sexy at the same time...her long open hair could only make her look more and more mesmerizing...He couldn't stop himself but stare her like a hawk. It was jaw dropping for him to see Madhu like this...She was looking more stunning than he had imagine her while buying the dress...suddenly Madhu realised that RK is watching her and she turned towards him but he quickly closed his eyes.

Madhu: RK...did you open your eyes?

RK: No.

Madhu: Sure?

RK: Yes Madhu..now if you are done can I open my eyes?

Madhu: Yes

And RK opened his eyes and saw her standing in front of her with a smile on her face which only complimented her whole look.

RK: You look beautiful

And Madhu blushed more and more while he was unable to take his eyes off his Biwi.

Madhu: Thanks!

RK: Shall we leave?

Madhu: Yes

While they were coming downstairs Madhu was walking behind RK not wanting to come in front of Radhaji in this attire...which was making RK a bit irritated

RK: Madhu what are you doing?

Madhu: I don't want Ma to see me like this.

RK: It doesn't matter Madhu...you are my wife

Madhu: And you are her son...so it does RK.

And RK couldn't speak further and both of them saw Radhaji coming from her room so Madhu hid herself behind RK. Radhaji saw RK standing on the stairs...as he couldn't move or else Radhaji could see Madhu...he was not bothered if she sees her as it's very common to him but he was standing there only for Madhu...Radhaji came towards him.

Radhaji: Rishu are you going somewhere?

RK: (He felt a bit uncomfortable but he replied back) Yes

Radhaji felt happy that his son replied to her...Madhu was nervous but feeling happy that at least she unintentionally made RK talk to her mother...but Radhaji didn't stop here and tried to build up the conversation.

Radhaji: Where are you going?

RK: At a party

Radhaji: Oh Nice...A..a...Where is Madhu...isn't she going with you?

RK couldn't take it more and moved away revealing Madhu to Radhaji...and Radhaji was shocked to see Madhu donning a completely different look.

Radhaji: Madhu...(with eyes opened wide...while Madhu was busy pulling her dress down)

Radhaji: Madhu you look so pretty beta

And Madhu smiled while still feeling shy.

Radhaji: Why are you getting so nervous you are looking very pretty...now enjoy your day okay?

Madhu nodded her head

Radhaji: Okay now I won't stop you both or else you will get.

Madhu: Bye Ma

Radhaji: Bye beta

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Soon they reached at Malvika's house. while they were entering RK saw Madhu pulling her dress.

RK: Biwi you have already brought it till you knees by pulling it so much now stop it or else soon it will be touching your toes.

Suddenly they heard someone

Malvika: Hey RK (She kissed him on his cheeks very lustfully)

Madhu's eyes were open wide seeing Malvika kissing RK's cheeks

RK: Happy Birthday Malvika (He said getting confused on Malvika's behaviour)

Malvika: Hi Madhu (While hugging her too)

Madhu: Happy Birthday

Malvika: Thanks darling...you look so stunning Madhu...But...not more than me...Right RK?

RK was confused as why she is asking him like that but he had to agree at it was her birthday

RK: Yes.

Malvika: Now come on in

She held RK's hand and brought him in while Madhu followed them.

RK: What is this Malvika...Leave me yaar...why are behaving so strange (He whispered)

Malvika: Idiot...you can only romance in reel life or can you even do it in real life?

RK: What do you mean?

Malvika: You will flirt with me.

RK: What no way

Malvika: If you want to know what Madhu feels...then you have to do this.

They were soon at the pool side. Malvika turned around and asked Madhu

Malvika: Hey Babe can I borrow your husband for a dance?

Madhu: You have already borrowed him now why are you asking me (Madhu said in her mind)...Ya sure.

And Malvika pulled RK for a dance and asked the DJ to play a song.

And they danced very intimately only to make Madhu jealous...and their plan was working...she was so angry that her eyes were filled with tears and a tear rolled down her cheeks and Madhu touched it and said to herself (Why am I crying...why am I feeling so bad seeing both of them getting so close...why I can't bear my RK...My RK??...why did i say that...no Madhu you will not cry...you can't fall weak in front of RK) She said wiping her tears. Suddenly a waiter came which was of course sent by Malvika and offered Madhu a drink and Madhu drank it thinking that it's just a mocktail.

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After few minutes

Madhu was walking beside the pool humming the song when suddenly her foot slipped and she was about to tumble into the pool but then RK held her hand and saved her from falling inside the pool. Madhu saw him and smiled showing all her teeth...and she said

Madhu: RK...Finally you came.

RK: (Noticing that she is drunk) Madhu you are drunk?

Madhu: No you Idiot...you know na that don't drink. (Trying to balance herself)

RK: Madhu you are.

Madhu: So what even if I am drunk...You enjoyed yourself na...then let even me enjoy myself na.

RK: Madhu come let's go from here.

Madhu: No I'll not.

RK: Madhu don't behave like a child.

Madhu: I will...what will you do (She said keeping her hands on the waist)

RK: Fine what do want? (He crossed his arms against his chest)

Madhu: Will you dance with me? (Directly looking into his eyes)

RK: Madhu...please everyone is looking at us.

Madhu: Why...you can dance with Malvika but not with your biwi?

RK looked at her. He somewhere felt happy that she said that automatically smiled came on his face and he said

RK: You want do dance?

Madhu nodded her head

RK: Come! (He moved his hand forward and Madhu gave her hand into his)

And they had a slow dance with different songs being played by DJ...and while still dancing madhu said

Madhu: RK you know what...I didn't like when you where dancing with Malvika.

RK: Why?

Madhu: I don't know...It was like something is pinching in my heart.

RK: Madhu if you didn't like it then you could have told me.

Madhu: I don't want to look like an insecure biwi.

RK: Biwi? (He deliberately asked this question from her)

Madhu: Yes I am your Biwi na (And she kept her head on his chest and hugged him) RK don't leave me again like this...I feel so secure with you.

And she was getting unconscious because of the effect of alcohol...so RK picked her up and left the place.

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Soon they reached home and RK brought Madhu in their room...and while still in his arms Madhu asked RK in a baby voice.

Madhu: We are home?

RK: Yes we are. (And he laid down Madhu on the bed and he was about to when Madhu held his hand and said)

Madhu: Please don't go anywhere stay with me na.

RK: Madhu you should take rest now.

Madhu: No first answer my question

RK: Which question?

Madhu sat up and asked her.

Madhu: Why did I feel bad when I saw you and Malvika?

RK: Madhu how would I know that?

Madhu: But you should na...it's you who is doing all this...so you should know.

RK: What am I doing?

She got out of the bed and said

Madhu: I don't know but whatever it is just stop it...(And she looked deep into RK's eyes) You know when I was at Malik's place I missed you so much I couldn't sleep so I read your interview and then somehow I gathered some sleep (And RK remembered that how even he placed Madhu's suit on the so that he could sleep) and that when we were rehearsing for your shot I remembered how we met for the first time...do you remember that? (And RK was only smiling at her) And today when you danced with Malvika I didn't like...(she was blabbering) I am your Biwi na you should have danced with me...and remember that night when I snatched your phone...I didn't snatch it because i wanted you to sleep I wanted you to stop chatting with Malvika...and after that when you fell on me...

Suddenly RK grabbed her and gave a deep kiss on Madhu's lips. Even Madhu didn't stop him in fact she felt a sense of affection in that kiss...soon it turned into a passionate kiss...they were so much engaged in each other but then RK broke the kiss and then Madhu again fell unconscious and kept her head on RK's chest...and he somehow managed to make Madhu lie down again and after changing he came and lied next to Madhu. He saw Madhu who was now into deep sleep and then he remembered their kiss. He was happy but yet worried that what will happen the next day when Madhu will wake up...and how will she react to this.
Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Before your PM only I resd :):) Yipeee FIRST (kyunki kabhi na apne first position se haarne wali ko Ishu kehte hai)... ROFL ... Only RK can come up with sarcastic yet funny answers "what's the use of me bringing with full packing" hehehe ... Awww Radz must be on cloud 9 , 10 , 11 , 12 that her son talked to him , it was a cute scene :) LMAO ... Madz and her mind talk "you have already borrowd my hubby" ... That diaoluge by Madz that "RK you came" reminded me of PKYEK where that Piya was drunk and Abhay saves her from falling (actually that was the 1st scene I had watched in that show so I remembered it hehehe) ... Awww so cute that she felt so secure in Rishu's arm .. That drunk scene was lovely :) This is why I love drinks for simple reason that it lets your inner secrets out (of course for all the good reason especially romantic) ... Oh puhleaseee no more misunderstandings , so make sure that after her hangover Madz act in a sensible way rather than crying or Regretting for pouring her heart out (bcz kisi ko toh pyar ki shuruat karni he hai toh Madz he sahi)... Cutilicious , Romanticilicious and awesome update ... Update ASAP and I mean it hehehe ... Loved the part and a big thanks to Malvika for being such a supportive friend and a darling :) Good work ... Love you :)
Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏 thanks for the pm...good going...malvikas role is nicely sketched ...waiting eagerly for the next...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Yipee 😃 what a beautiful update !!! Super simran
Hey this malavika kapoor is good( exactly opp to what I thought ). When madhu became jealous I too felt the same. When madhu was embarrassed or blushing I was feeling the same. What have you done to me ? It's a beautiful story ( thanks for not giving too much egoistic rk ). As usual madhu was adorable. And please unite the mother - son duo soon.
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Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good part.
Madhu's monologues were funny. She does make a cute drunkard. I am happy she revealed her feelings to rk but i don't think she will acknowledge them sober. Cant wait for next part.

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