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LOVE IS LOVE - SEQUEL


At Rk's house

RK (quite frustrated) - Dude just utter those 3 words . Your love is not going to eat you up .

Mukku (tensed) - RK ! I hope the love of my life doesn't say NO to me . Because for the first time I have fallen in love with the person whom I love so much and I can't take a rejection from my Love .

RK - Chill dude . Why are you getting so tensed up . Mukku you are a very great person and your love will not deny your proposal and trust me it will be definitely a YES to your romantic proposal . Now comm'on dude just say those 3 words , I am getting pissed off now .

Mukku (shyly) - OK . Well I...Ummm... I...Love...

RK (now getting slightly angry) - Comm'on Mukku just say I Love You . If you are going to blush this much in front of me then how are you gonna say it in front of the person to whom you are going to propose ?

(Well RK , Mukku and Sullu were college besties . Whole college knew about these 3's friendship . But Mukku was more of a bestie to RK rather than Sullu)

Suddenly RK got a call interrupting his and Mukku's talk . RK blushed seeing the Caller ID .

RK - Just excuse me Mukku . I need to attend this call.

Mukku (getting slight jealous) - Whose call is it that RK is so damn blushing ??

RK - Hey Sullu Gullu watsup . So finally you got the time to call your Love haan ?

Sullu - Hey Rishu . Sorry jaan . I was stuck up with this damn project that I dint realize that I need to call and talk to the love of my life . But while doing the work suddenly my hand touched upon the photo frame of our's kept on my table and then I remembered that I need to call you or else you are going to be angry on me . Sorry Love , please forgive your Sullu this time . Next time pakka promise I will call you up without any delay .

RK - No . You are not going to be forgiven only by saying Sorry . I need something else .

Sullu - Ohh com'on Rishu . Let me come back from office , then very soon we will do family planning and we will do it tonight only . *winks*

RK (blushing but faking annoyance) - No . Dumbo I am not talking about kids.

Sullu (getting confused) - Then ? Then what do you want ?

RK - Sullu ! Can you get me loads of chocolates from any nearby shop . And also jhalak dikhla jaa CD . I want to watch Vivian and Drashti's performance .

Sullu (chuckling) - Uhh seriously Rishu you scared me . Fine My Love . Your wish is my command . But I will get these things only when you say those 3 magical , romantic words to me .

RK (blushing like a teenage) - Seriously Sullu . Fine . I Love You .

Sullu (quite happy and ecstatic) - I Love You Too Rishu *kissing on phone* . I am coming home in half an hour . Bye

And with this RK disconnects phone and turns back to see Mukku with tears in his eyes .

RK (shocked to see him standing there) - Mukku !Uummm actually ...

Mukku (cutting him off) - So Sullu loves you ?

RK (blushing) - Yeah and even I love him .

Muuku (quite shocked with this revelation) - You too . You din't even think that what will happen to me and how I will live without you ?

RK (Confused) - Why will I think about you and you will not be able to live without me ?? What does that mean ?

Mukku (loosing his temper) - Rishu this proposal practice I was doing was to propose you .

RK (shocked) - What?

Mukku - Yeah . That's why I was blushing looking at your handsome face .

RK starts to leave from there .

Mukku - Rishu . I have always loved you from the day 1 of the college . Your handsome Greek looking face , your well maintained physique , your silky shiny jet black hairs , your style of bajaoing everyone . Uff I just couldn't

RK (cutting his sentence in between) - Stop . Just stop Mukku . No more words from your mouth or else I will forget that you are my frend . Mukku , I love Sullu .

Mukku (with pain) - And what about my love Rishu ? Even I love you . You are like a drug to me RK without whom I cant live and neither I can die .

RK (trying to explain him) - But I don't love you Mukku . I have always seen you as my friend . Stop ruining our friendship Mukku . How could you fall for me Mukku ??

Mukku - Rishu ! Love is love . It just happened and now I cant stop myself from falling for you more and more . Just come to me . I will always keep you happy . You will never ever regret your decision of coming to me .

RK (now loosing his control) - Whats wrong with you Mukku . I told you that I and Sullu love each other very much and we are going to married next month . No Mukku . I love him very much . I can't betray him and I will never ever betray my love . He is my true love .

Mukku - Rishu I love you more than that Sullu . And its not from today . The way you would walk and smile at everyone , the way your hot physique gets revealed while playing football in college ground , the way you would frown when any doubt arises in the chapter ,

RK - You observed so much about me ?

Mukku (happily) - Yes .

RK (quite confused) - But how ?? You used to sit in the last row at last becnh and I used to sit with Sullu at the second bench of first row .

Mukku - My whole concentration was only at you be it in class, lunch or ground . (And the way you play football giving that killer sexy smirk uff. )

RK (sardonically) - That's why you used to fail every test and give retest . Right ?

Mukku (behaving like a psycho) - Yes . But today I will not fail in this test Rishu. Today I will pass this love test . You are mine . And I can't let anyone come between us . You don't know my love Rishu . My love can be very dangerous . You are mine Rishu and only mine .

And with this Mukku menacingly starts coming closer to RK .

RK (getting scared) - What are you doing Mukku . Don't come closer to me or else I will shout .

Mukku - No my love ! I will not give you the chance to shout . You are just mine Rishu . That Sullu also can't come tonight . You will not marry him , but me . And with this he grabs RK's waist with one hand and with his other hand he hold his mouth and slams his lips on RK's lips .

Sultan (shouting angrily) - Mukkuuu...

Mukku (Ignoring Sullu's rage and looking lovingly at RK) - WOW ! Rishu this kiss was so tasty . You taste so good RK . What do you eat My Jaan ??

Sullu (quite outraged with Mukku's audacity) - How dare you kiss MY LOVE . You cheap fellow .

RK cryingly holds Sullu and tells him what all happened . And says "Sullu look what he did to me " .

Sullu (ferociously) - Mukku ! I will not leave you . You bas***d . How dare you try to misbehave and kiss My Jaan .

And with this he punches Mukku black and blue and says - " only I have the right to kiss him , to make him smile , to surprise him , to marry him , to have kids with him "BAS HAQ HAI EK MERA" and keeps on punching Mukku till he is in a insensate condition .

While on the other hand RK called up the police .

Soon police reaches the place and arrests Mukku , and drags him from there .

While going

Mukku (still looking with all the love he can show through his eyes) - RK ! I will come back to claim you . No one can do us apart . Not even death . Till the time I am in jail I will reminisce every second of my jail life with the kiss which we shared few minutes back . I love you Rishu and you are only mine .

Sullu comforts RK who was crying .

RK (crying) - Sullu ...

Sullu (comforting him in his embrace) - Shhh . Don't worry My Love . Nothing will happen . We will marry tomorrow only . Don't think about that kiss . I love you and trust you very much Rishu . No one can separate us . We will marry tomorrow morning OK , and then I will take you to a surprise destination for honeymoon where it will be only you and me and no one else ...


THE END .


OK ! I don't know what I have written and what else to write in this . Eggs tomatoes are welcomed . This was just an attempt to write a funny OS especially , sequel to my previous OS Love is Love . All kinds of comments are welcomed .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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GAYYY... OOPS...YAYYY i m first to comment...😆
What the hell was that?? You have showed MISS. Rk so weak... He couldnt protect himself from that maida flour applied face Mukku... Rk screaming bajao bajao... But mukku kissed him forcefully... What would have happened if sullu didnt come on time?? I cant even imagine... Oh my god... That bloody makki mukku would have raped Rk... Thanks heaven nothing went wrong... 😆

Burn them all... I guess u have burned all women... Only men in ur world... U r so obsessed in writing gay story...
Why the hell ur heros r not finding any heroines??😆

Thanks for writing this hilarious story...

Next what?? Madhu trishna lesbian story ah??
Madhu visiting kundra mansion & rk could assume that his sister trishna's frnd routing on him...later even he could fall in love with her... When he confess his love... Trishna & Madhu can tell they r gonna get married... Lol...
Rk's face will be worth watching when he learns his sister a lesbian... Lol...😆

This is the plot i had in mind to write... I got this idea last yrs august month while chatting with a frnd here but i didn't write... May be i m not that courageous like u...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!🤣 A hilarious OS.
Ii thought mukku was going to rape RK.😲 Thank God! Nothing happened n sullu saved him.🤣

What nxt? Loved story of trishna, madhu n dips.🤣 This time I don't want dips as the vamp.😆
U burnt it.
Keep it up n keep writing such hilarious OSs.
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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god...this was so hilarious...never thought I'd read this...rishabh and sullu were so cute in this...lol..cant stop laughing...
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Haha rk was so weak
It was damn funny
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

GAYYY... OOPS...YAYYY i m first to comment...😆

What the hell was that?? You have showed MISS. Rk so weak... He couldnt protect himself from that maida flour applied face Mukku... Rk screaming bajao bajao... But mukku kissed him forcefully... What would have happened if sullu didnt come on time?? I cant even imagine... Oh my god... That bloody makki mukku would have raped Rk... Thanks heaven nothing went wrong... 😆

Burn them all... I guess u have burned all women... Only men in ur world... U r so obsessed in writing gay story...
Why the hell ur heros r not finding any heroines??😆

Thanks for writing this hilarious story...

Next what?? Madhu trishna lesbian story ah??
Madhu visiting kundra mansion & rk could assume that his sister trishna's frnd routing on him...later even he could fall in love with her... When he confess his love... Trishna & Madhu can tell they r gonna get married... Lol...
Rk's face will be worth watching when he learns his sister a lesbian... Lol...😆

This is the plot i had in mind to write... I got this idea last yrs august month while chatting with a frnd here but i didn't write... May be i m not that courageous like u...😆


Yipeee I knew it that the longest comment on my Love triangle is going to come by Sudha only . 😆😆😳

Yeah I loved showing RK as a weak man (it gives me sadistic pleasure in playing with the characters and reversing their role and attitude 😈😈😈)

🤣 You are offending me . I am not obsessed with gay stories 😆😆 Actually I wanted a lot more to happen than that kiss b/w Mukku & Rk but then I din't knew how else to show their romance . I am taking classes on romance writing genre from you 😳😆


Your plot on Lesbian love is too damn good and after august you are penning it down and I want it to read it 😳😳😳

From my side the story on Gay quota is over🤣🤣🤣

Now you are giving us this Lesbo story 😈😈

Thanks a lot Sudha dear for commenting . God bless you 😳😳
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Loved this hilarious OS



I am glad dear that you enjoyed reading this comic OS . 😆😆😆

Thanks a lot Dear 😳😳
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Originally posted by: silverfire

OMG!🤣 A hilarious OS.

Ii thought mukku was going to rape RK.😲 Thank God! Nothing happened n sullu saved him.🤣

What nxt? Loved story of trishna, madhu n dips.🤣 This time I don't want dips as the vamp.😆
U burnt it.
Keep it up n keep writing such hilarious OSs.
Thanks!


I am glad dear that you enjoyed reading the story 😳

Yep actually I wanted more than kiss b/w Mukku-RK but then I dropped the idea bcz I din't know how else to show and make their romance move forward 😆😆😆

OMG ! NO ways Trishna-Dips-Madz combo story 🤣🤣 I am going to laugh more than you guys if I write this another love-triangle .🤣🤣

Thanks a lot dear for your encouragement . God bless you 😳😳
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Originally posted by: sush03

god...this was so hilarious...never thought I'd read this...rishabh and sullu were so cute in this...lol..cant stop laughing...


Hi Dear !
I am glad that you enjoyed reading it 😆😆

OMG you seriously found RK- Sullu cute ?? 🤣🤣🤣 I had a laugh while writing their characters . 😆😆

Chalo I am happy that you liked their DOSTANA 🤣🤣

Thanks a lot dear . God bless you 😳😳

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