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Posted: 10 years ago
What've terrible twist. Could Sultan have done it any other way then kill 3 of them . What a pity. Poor sultan.
Muskaan is a crazy women wicked how could she kill her own sister?
Just hope madhu wakes up and rishab should make a forget everything .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting and Captivating at the same time
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb ending amazing story sultan has sacrifies his life for madhu n rk lov how madhu forgive sultan
Lovely ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
I liked sullu more coz He was true to everyone n what he did for rk was commendable its not easy to kill someone
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Posted: 10 years ago
aah its end.


nevertheless perfect ending rishabala get married.


u hv written it so beautifully that this ff ll remains in our heart till d end.

if possible so write such kind of story more dear.


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Posted: 10 years ago
O M G
talk about ur murder mystery
I was completely shocked
Muskaan turned out to be a complete psycho wanting to kill everyone
Dev was her puppet
n Sultan was behind all three murders I couldn't believe it
talk about a twist in the story
lovely ending though with Rish n Madhu marrying
at least one brother got his happily ever after
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
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Posted: 10 years ago
Madhu is out of coma. After all the sufferings the family will find peace once again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Obsession Epilogue (2nd version).

I had no plan to write an epilogue.But for my sweet friend Sydell I am writing this epilogue as she wants Sultan to remarry after his jail release and Rishbala to have a child.As she wished I chose Aashka Goradia as Sultan's new wife after I paired them in my ss 'Dhoka'.I dedicate this to khwaishfan who wants epilogue.

Thanks 4 the banner Sydell








After 13 years...


Sultan remembers his bitter past.Getting married to Muskaan and ended up killing her when she decided to kill his brother Rishab and his wife Madhubala.12 years of imprisonment and finally released from the jail.Now for his brother Rishab he is getting married again.
Rishab enters the room:Sultan,are you not ready yet?
Sultan doesn't reply.His face exposed his pain.
S:Rishab...I still don't know what am I doing this is right or wrong.I am marrying again only because you forced me to.
R:I know marriage was a bitter experience for you.But you are getting a second chance.Knowing everything about you a girl is loving you with full heart.You are doing the right thing.Nandini is a very nice girl.
S:But I am a killer.I was a prisoner.She deserves some one better.
R:But she loves only you.Don't disappoint you.And don't call yourself a killer as you did it to save our family.Don't hesitate and don't lose a jewel like Nandini.
Sultan's eyes were full of tears.His mother Karti wipes his tears.
K:I always wished to see you happy with your wife and children.But that didn't happen earlier because of some unfortunate events.

But I want to see you leading a happy family life.
His father Srivastav becomes emotional.
Sultan dresses as a bride groom.Karti,Srivastav,Rishab smile.
Karti:Wish evil eyes will not attack my son like before.
Sultan becomes sad.

Rishab enters his bedroom.Madhu is sitting in front of the mirror.
R:Darling biwi,not ready yet?
M:I am ready Rishab.I was dressing up Sneha.So got a little late.


R:Anyways both my biwi and daughter look like a Queen and Princess.
Madhu smiles.
M:Sultan is ready?
R:Physically yes,but mentally...

M:He underwent so much of trauma.It's not easy to adjust with this new situation.Because of Muskaan he became a criminal in front of the society.He faced so much.I am ashamed of the fact that Muskaan is my sister.She didn't even show any mercy to me while trying to kill me.

I hope Nandini gives a new life to our family.
R:Relax Madhu.Everything will be alright.
Sneha came running:Hi dad...you look handsome.
Rishab kissed her cheek:My Sneha is a real Princess.
Sn:Thank you dad.

Nandini came dressed as a bride.She blushes seeing Sultan.Sultan's fingers shivers while tying mangalsutra around her neck.But when he ties it Rishab,Madhu,Karti and Srivastav get relief.
Since he knows that others' happiness lies in his happiness he pretends to be happy.

Karti gives a saree to Nandini.
K:Wear this for tonight.
Nandini blushes.

Room...
Nandini wears the new saree and waits for Sultan.She blushes when Sultan enters the room.
He was sad.He sat on the sofa.Nandini was shattered.She burst into tears.

Hearing her cry he looks at her.He feels sad seeing her tears because of him.
Sul:Nandini...
Nandini wipes her tears.
Sul:Nandini...why did you marry me?I am a criminal.I told you many times even before our marriage.Why are you loving me after knowing my story?

N:After knowing your story my respect and love for you only increased.And love is not on the basis of anyone's history.

That you should understand.

He is silent.
Nandini is in tears.
N:Why don't you tell me frankly that you don't love me.I have no place in your life.You still love your crazy ex-wife.Right?

Nandini tears the flower decoration in anger.
Suddenly Sultan holds her hand.She stares at him.
He wipes her tears.
He cups her face.A small smile appears on his face:You look cute when you are angry.

Slowly she smiles.
Sul:Nandini...your love is the most valuable thing I got in my life.I can never ignore it.I will be the best husband.But it may take some time to heal my scars.

Nandini smiles:I will wait.I love you.
She embraces him.He smiles.

In Rishab-Madhu's room...

Rish:Madhu...I think you resemble Shakuntala.
M:Shakuntala?Who is she?
R:Oh foolish girl...the historical character Shakuntala;Dushyant's wife.
M:O!
R:I feel I am King Dushyant.
M:You are mad.
R:No,I am not.I am Dushyant tonight.So get ready as Shakuntala.
M:Rishab...you...
R:No argument...go.
He pushes her to the dressing room and closes the room.
After some time Madhubala comes out dressed as Shakuntala.She was shy.
He is lost in her:Beautiful.
M:Why did you make me dress like this?
R:Because I can't allow Sultan alone to have suhaag raat.I also want Suhaag raat again.

She blushes:You naughty creature.
He holds her closer.
She was shy.


They share a passionate eye lock.
M:RK!

He carries her in his arms

and places her down.

He pours his love on her.

After 2 years...

Both Madhu and Nandini get admitted in the hospital for delivery.
Madhu cries:Rishab...I can't bear this pain.
He holds her hand:Madhu...you will be alright soon.
The Doctor came:Mrs.Madhubala Rishab Kundra...this is your second delivery.Still scared?Anyways now it's time to move to the labor room.

She is taken to the labor room.
Madhu screams:Rishabbb!
Both Rishab and Sultan were tense.Then the nurse come out with the news.
"Madhu gave birth to a baby boy and Nandini gave birth to a baby girl",
They are very happy.They rushed to their wives and babies.
Rishab and the Doctor show the baby to Madhu.
DR:Did you like your son Madhubala?

Madhu smiles.The doctor leaves.
Rishab touches his son's cheeks.
M:He look exactly like you.
R:But I feel he is the mixture of us.
They laugh.
Sultan becomes emotional seeing the baby.He remembers how he lost his unborn baby years back when Muskaan had miscarriage.He suppresses his pain seeing his baby's cute face.He takes the baby in his arms.
Nandini:Though it's a girl he looks like you.Same grey eyes.
They smile.
Karti,Srivastav are happy hugging their 3 grand children.

The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing epilogue happy dat both rk n sultan got happiness in their n sultan got all d happiness wht he desever
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice .Dushyant -Shakuntala rishabh is so naughty even after 13years of marriage. Thanks for epilogue.

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