What does my heart desire? Rishbala SS last part pg36 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG! These two r kids. Salt in tea n sour pudding.😲
What r they going to do in goa now?
Nice update.
Waiting for the honeymoon to Goa.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loving this small fights between Rishbala. ..they dont leave any change to fight😛 now they are going to Goa and surely will fight more or may be they will change a bit and try to understand each other...
lovely update... continue soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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good update.waiting fr hnymoon track
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nice ss story 😊!! oh god this misunderstanding and revenge thing is too much has made both Rk and madhu mad both have lost their minds somewhere behaving worst than kids 🤪specially i m angry on Rk for his stupid plans to torture madhu 😡!! waiting for next update honeymoon track 😉 and do pm me update soon 😊 !!
Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What does my heart desire ? Part 4

This is the Rishbala version of my old SS.Though I remake my old ffs with changes that suit Rishbala this will be the exact copy of my old ss without any change.So I won't pm the updates.(I will pm only when I pm other updates)but will update daily.Those who r interested can read it by themselves.


Madhu is angry with RK:Why did you tell others
that I'm longing for a honeyoon trip?To insult me?
RK:Yes,to insult you.You insulted me before Mandy.Now I made you
understand how hurt you will be when you are insulted before others.But usually
silly girls like you will be longing for a cool honeymoon with
cool and hot guys like me
MADHU:You are sick
RK does'nt care.

RK and Madhu go to Goa.They stay in a guest house.The next day,RK is about to go out.
MADHU:Where are you going?
RK:To the beach.Who won't go to Goa beach?I know that you want to come with me to the beach.But sorry Kali will be there
with me.so I don't need you.You know..she's waiting there for her hot boyfriend
MADHU:You think like Kali I'm hanging around with you?Never.I will go to the beach.but not with you
RK:Thankyou so much
RK goes.Madhu is angry. Madhu goes to beach.She sees RK alone.Madhu
smiles:Where is your hot girlfriend?
RK is embarrassed.
MADHU:Why does she wait for her silly
boyfriend?right?
RK is irritated. RK's mobile rings.
RK:Its Kali.She will reach
here soon
RK talks to Kali:Hi sweetheart
Kali:Sorry RK,I can't come to the beach
RK:What?Don't tell like that.
Kali:My grandmom has come.She is taking me to temples.
RK:When did you start going to temples?
Kali:What to do?I'm forced to accompany her
RK is irritated and swiches off the mobile.
Madhu smiles:What happened?Your hot girlfriend is not willing to come?
He is embarrassed.
MADHU:I knew that she will not come.Because i have
never felt that she loves you.Otherwise she would have waited for you.Poor boy
RK:Enough.She is hospitalised.That's why
MADHU:Oh really?Your love made her physically weak?
Madhu laughs. RK can't tolerate it.
MADHU:Anyways,I'm going to enjoy the waves.You imagine Kali
dancing with you in the waves
Madhu goes to play in the water.RK is angry:Come soon.We have to
go back soon
MADHU:You don't want to enjoy in the water?If no,ok...I won't come out intil I get fed up
RK:Then I will go
MADHU:Ok,go.I will come alone to the guest house.

RK:I will go home
MADHU:Really?Then you will have to answer your
parents' questions
RK is fed up and waits for Madhu.

They go back. Sharada:How was the trip?
RK:It was extremely boring
SloK:Really?I don't believe this.This is bhai's acting
mama.I know what he must have done with bhabhi there
Madhu smiles at RK.RK gets angry.
Sharada:Hold your tongue
Slok.This is the way you talk to your brother and wife ?
S:Sorry...but how can I not ask?How was the honeymoon
bhabhi?
MADHU:It was very sweet
S:Wow!Though bhai lied,bhabhi told us the truth
They laugh.RK is irritated.

Madhu tells Sharada:Mom,I have an offering to God since god
has brought us together,
S:Whats that?
MADHU:RK has to walk to the Shiva Parvati temple.
RK is shocked:What?I can't.Almost 5 km.Never
S:You should'nt tell like that son.God will punish you.By
God's grace only you got a wife like Madhu.You should do it.
RK stares at Madhu.She smiles in a teasing manner.
RK:Why not?But what we both planned is to go
together.Is'nt it Madhu?
Madhu is shocked.
RK:Actually I scolded Madhu for that.That's
why she did'nt tell that she wants to do the
offering.Madhu is longing to do so
S:Why did you scold her?She is such a nice girl.She's the
real devotee of god
RK smiles at Madhu.She is angry.
S:Both of you go.God bless you both
for a long happy married life
Sharada goes.
RK:You thought while I strain,you can sit
simply?No,you will suffer.Its my word.
RK speaks with strong determination.

Both walk till the temple and sweat.Madhu is really tired. RK laughs:This was your
decision... to do this fake offering and now you can't bear it.So funny
Madhu is angry.

The next day,RK gets ready for a party.
Madhu:I'm not
interested to go for a party.So you go alone
RK:No,you have to.Otherwise I will make everyone believe that you are a cheater.
Madhu is irritated:After walking a lot,my legs are paining
RK:Don't find any silly excuse.Don't lie about having pain
MADHU:I'm not lying.
RK is sharp:you have to come.
Finally Madhu gets up and wears a grand salwar kameez.They go for the party. All are dancing in the party. Kali who has
worn a frock comes and shakes his RK's hands:Hi!
RK looks at Madhu's expression.
Madhu thinks:So to show this only
he brought me here
Kali:Why don't we dance together?
RK looks at Madhu:Why
not?
Kali and RK dance together to the song 'Chori..'{Saathiya}.
Karthik looks for his car key.
Kar:Oh!.I had given it to RK
when I went out.Now i have to go out also.Let me go to the
party
Karthik goes to the party hall.He sees Madhu sitting alone.
Kar:Madhu!
Madhu is shocked to see him.
She thinks:My God!
Kar:Where is RK?
Madhu thinks:Wow!This is a nice chance.
Madhu pretends to be dull.
MADHU:He is dancing.
Karthik looks at the people who are dancing.He is shocked to see RK dancing with Kali.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohhh god now rk is gone
Superb update loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...fun filled update...!! It was funny both teasing each other :) and who is this Karthik ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Karthik is RK's brother;Madhu's friend Mandy's husband

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Awesome...fun filled update...!! It was funny both teasing each other :) and who is this Karthik ??

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Superb update
Full of fun
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Super funny and enjoyable update . now Rk is gone . Thanks for pm me.

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