TS: Madhubala and The old witch (pt 2 updated on pg 7)

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karamukku

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Nice start... Loved the concept...

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Clara20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Awesome start dear...
Waiting for arrival of priance rishab and hope madhu wl nt hate old witch...

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ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Very nice concept...

Padmini sent madhu for her own selfish reasons... but why didnt King ask her about his child... is he that blind? poor madhu was longing for mother's love... but she got that through witch... madhu's innocence melted witch's heart...

very beautifully written... loved this concept...😊

Hope madhu will not be hurt that her granny is a witch and witch gives madhu's hand to noble prince who would keep her happy...

Thnx for the pm... waiting for the next😊

Edited by ashitha235 - 10 years ago

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flowing_river

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

loved witch and madhu's bonding...

padmini is real witch here...even old witch has heart can see madhu's innocence...

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Chitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

awesome TS 👏

interesting story 👍🏼

do update soon 😉

thanks for pm dear 😃

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moumita.madhuk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

thats a reallly MAGICAL begining.. it will be nice if you describe their cloths too,. or just after reading PALANQUIN all I could imagine was DRASHTI with two CHOTIS n AATPOURE SAARE n yes actress LILI CHATTERJEE as old witch.. though later I imagined Radhaji as Old witch., imagining Pallavi as EVIL STEPMOM is hard but not impossible ... and Bittuji as DWARF waa the best part.. anyways, will wait for the next part...Entry of RK...

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Interesting concept do continue soon abd plz pm me too.

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geeta-99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Poor madhu bear so much even her father didn't protect her...
Witch I thought she will teach madhu magic but nonetheless
Waiting for prince rk entry
How he'll gonna meet madhu n what willbe his reaction...

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sudipta (Rusah)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: AR_RK
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Wow!awesome concept.love it 😃
ami littile madhu hisebe Sudi r dp ke imagine krchlam 😆
Padmini was a real witch 😡poor madhu 😔
Waiting for prince rishabhs entry
thank u so much 😳.Love u 🤗
p.s:ami 1st time eto gulo emo use krlam 😆.r ha old witch je eto bhalo hte pare tor story na porle jante partam na 🤣

aww😉😳