rishbala ss' the monster'(teaser pg no 4 & no pms)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue


Madhu
I looked at him .he was completely suitable for my purpose
I again looked at the innocent face of the boy whom I was going to target
As my new prey
He was tall n well built completely compatible n young solo can be mended as soon as possible
He was the only son of his parents but what can I do..I want him..jeez I don't care abt others I just want to make myself happy
I took my mobile n called"Karan I got him.be prepared .u know what to do"
He replied"yes "I smirked n called off.
I was standing and looking at him for a while now
As always keep the details of my prey
His name was rishabh .he was a college student.a good son of his parents .he studies doctor n does part time job for his parents..living a bright life
But soon was gonna be dragged to darkness
I took a fleeting glance of him n left the college
Rishabh
I looked at the girl who was giving me mysterious look. A look which was dark n threatening.
I was playing basketball when silky nugded him n said"look a chick is a looking at you"
I followed his gaze n found a girl watching me .before I course see her face properly
I was haunted by her eyes.the mysterious eyes which I used to dream often n which threatened to destroy perfect world
Before I cud recover from her gaze..she went off
After spending some time in library I went for hotel motel where I worked as a waiter..today i was my salary day ..I was going to buy new specs for my mom.
After completing my work.when I was on my way home I felt someone hit my head.instantly I fell unconscious
Madhu
I looked at the poor boy who unconscious without knowing what was going to happen to him
I turned my head n called Karen"its time to wake the baby n say the reality"
Karen chucked n threw water on him.on the force of water.he jerked awake
He looked at me wide eyed .I drew his chin up so that we both were face to face.
Looking at his innocent eyes I was lost .but I I,mediately regained my position"this is your new world..your gonna listen to me.do as I say or I will destroy your loved ones. "
I was going back when I heard his cry"please leave me what did I do?"
I held his jaw tightly n said"u have not some anything.but whoever enters my world can never go back"
Then I stood up n said"welcome to hell..my hell..where I m or master n or devil n everything"



Note
I m discontinuing other stories as I lost my track with it.if I cud regain my phase with any story I wud continue it..but this story will be completed very soon
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My_VivJaan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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glad to see you back Christy 🤗
it's so diff and intriguing concept... seeing title I thought RK is monster or something but it's totally reverse madhu is evil.. wat she is in real... eager to know...
cntnue soon...
congrats for New story!!!
m first yipppeee!!!!!
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the New story
Very new concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome back
so happy to see u
congo for new story
loved the prologue
nice banner
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome back.love your stories,eagerly waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for new story
interesting prologue

I was goimg to tell u to cont ur strories but read ur note so not going to tell u that but pls if u can comp those stories pls do that
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happy to see u Christy 🤗
loved the prologue
continue soon

PLZ try 2 complete lustful desires
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back christy..!! I love it all works...it's a surprise that u started a story...wen I thought u won't be back soon :) anyways congozz on ur new story...intresting start...and concept :) plz update soon :) very eager to read further !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back christy.🤗
Congrats for the new story.
Loved the prologue.
So madhu is the monster.Good.
Eager to know more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back dear. I love ur stores very much. I am very happy. That's u back a new story. Please update soon.

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