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shiekha05

@shiekha05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

loved d update dear

n sorry for late comment

vicky seems to be highly dangerous for rk

wanna know why he is doing it n u said d hint will be given in chap 27 n its only 12 now seems dat we have to wait for a long n till den just enjoy d coming chapter n be patient but let me tell one thing dat i don't have such kind of patient in me but nertheless will wait for d coming chapters n enjoy d story a lot

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

tnx 4 pm... :) Readed upto ch-4...brothrs bonding were amazing bt they r poles apart...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Hey guys , I have updated ch 13...Inspite of many readers opened the pm , they didn't comment & I was mad to send them pm thinking that they may be busy...they once finish reading , will comment definitely...Hu na main pagal? 😆...So from now onwards , I will pm to those who commented or requested me that they will comment within 2-3 days...

THOSE WHO DON'T WANT PM , JUST PM ME ONCE MENTIONING THAT ...THOSE HAVING EXAMS OR ARE SICK WILL BE SEND PM PROVIDED THEY PM ME ONCE THE REASON OF THEIR LATE COMMENT...

Teaser

"He will kill me...that wretched little despicable boy will kill me" a voice screamed.

"How can u misplace him...U shouldn't have done that," he screamed again. He took out his sword & tried to kill the guy standing before him with lower head. But a lady ran to the man & stopped him from killing the guy who served the man for the past 12 yrs with loyalty.The lady eyed the guy to leave & comforted the man who was the king of Neotopia.

A little boy of 5 yrs old was standing outside the room in fear. He was trembling & hid himself behind the curtains.

Thank u

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Oh this vicky is such a monster... he has planned everything so brilliantly... poor principle became victim of his cruel game... am sure vicky knows everything about RK... he is here to kill him for the kingdom... he came to know that heir that is RK is still alive...

Madhu is right.. this is just the start... now Maan have to keep an eye on this vicky and should try to find out details about him...RK need to control his emotion as vicky knows his weakness...

It is becoming interesting with each update... superb update😊

Thanks for the pm... waiting for the next part😊

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Vicky is so cruel he is really a monster
hate him
Good that rk is out of danger
Superb update 😛

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zornitsa

@zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Anaya...going into trouble..

Vicky.. Saying.. Though its unexpected... May be ..she is not his target..

Sam...really feeling sorry for her...people.. Who possess.. They don't stand up for you...@hard times..

Guessing.. She going be hurt..a lot..

Nice geet showing authority... On maan...and being support ..

May be ..this bringing them close..

Madhu..prediction... Hmm...

Principal..death..what else..except from Vicky.. Use and throw...

Interesting.. Put all together...

Gr8 update...

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

thanks a tonn for pm me the chapters :) readed ch:5-13...so well written...maan & madhu's frndshp,geet xprncng J wrd..rk had lyf threatning attack all pland by vikram..plz snd me chptr in pm as 2nd link is wrkng bt half of d page is appearing blank.. :))))

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

It was a very well written part. Are Rk -maan going to find out what is haapening anytime soon?
Thank you for Pm :)

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shiekha05

@shiekha05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

hi dear

its lovely update n thanks for d pm

n seeing d teaser it seems vicky is step brother of maan

n to get d whole property n everything he wants to kill rk

as rk don't know anything about his parents dats why he is unaware of whole thing n don't know anything about vicky

hope he gets well soon n both maan n rk get to know about vicky n tackle him

n d line madhu said dat its d beginning n many more is to come

hope it doesn't affect geet n madhu,as d effect of all this started to show in others life d way princi died poor he lost his life without any fault

loved geet part as she is taking care of everyone n taking care of maan

hate vicky a lot n sameera what to say about her love can be so blind she is mad

waiting for further updates soon

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Vicky is so so so cruel yaar a bloody monster in desgise of a man...
his plan is so full proof so true he jus wants to posees...everything...
i am scared dat madhu nd geet wont be pawn to his power...
madhu is so rt..it is jus d start of worst...

thank god
Rk is okay..god he even went thru heart attack...poor guy...
god maan is der as a shield for him...
dey both need to be emotionally strong...
nd b wit each other ..to be together nd safe...
as dat cruel knows der weakness now...

poor Princi..so feelin bad for him...
nd sameera even she is at his mercy...
she is jus his lust ..
it was really again a scary part...
amazing
i jus love ur writn..
wiaitn for next part..
cont soon.

nd teaser...am confused...waiitn for next part..cont soon

Edited by Desire6 - 10 years ago

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