Two Brothers - season 1

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sweetlove147

@sweetlove147

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

loved it nice start plz continue soon n plz pm me

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susan7

@susan7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

amazing update..read all parts

feel bad 4 RK

plz continue soon

thanx 4 d pm

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Read chapters1-11

Maan and Rk with supernatural powers

Their bond is so protective towards each other

Why is Sameera and Vicky Shaw after

Maan and Rk

They r trying to know their past

Deepali is such a innocent princess

aware of the Prince desire of being the king

Madhu is so helping to Maan to rescue

Anaaya but Geet is suspecting them

Thanks for the PM

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Read all the parts...

Firstly i would like to say you are very fab writer... All the parts are written beautifully...

As the story is about two brothers, their bonding is shown very beautifully... both are denied of their parents love and meet in certain circumstances to become each others strength... both love each other madly...

Maan is not only good brother but great friend also... for his best friend he is ignoring his love... madhu is kind person... she could see RK's pain when Mr Shaw asked him about his parents death... madhu's day dreaming about RK while they on the way to his house was funny and cute too...

The line which said RK is walking disaster, i felt very bad... hope RK will be able to keep his temper on check and do not bring any danger to himself and maan...

Both RK and Maan had painful past... hope they will be able to move on in life...

Vicky is such a cruel man... i think he came to know everything about RK and he wants to destroy him...

Very interesting story... looking forward to the next parts...

Thnx for the pm...continue soon...😊

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

WOW!! outstanding dear...waiting for next n thanx 4 pm

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vishti4eva

@vishti4eva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

thanks fr the pm.read it all in one go.as am a rishabala fan waiting more fr rk madhubala scenes.do update soon and please send me a pm

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Nice character sketch, and prologue...waiting to read the story... :))

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Hey guys ch 12 is updated...hope u like it...If not , then please leave the thread without a comment , but don't crib for Rishbala or maaneet scenes...When I will think it's necessary , I will add them...IT'S NOT A LOVE STORY...Hope u remember it...If u don't want pm , then mention it in ur comment or just send me a pm...

Thank u

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Oh this vicky want to kill RK... i think he knows about RK's true identity... Though RK is saved he is unconscious... hope he will be fine... maan and RK has to be careful and should try to know about Vicky..

Wonderful update😊 continue soon