Untitled Love - Final Part updated in pg 22

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Even though I was expecting this ending it was hard to read. They had just gotten their lives back and each other back for something so tragic to happen. Beautiful job.

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

great concept dii.. really awesomeee!!!

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

WOW!! outstanding end...loved it dear...

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Tainar

@Tainar

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Damn you made me cry. :'( Beautiful, compelling story. Their fate was cruel in separating our star-crossed lovers but they will reunite in after life. Excellent job!!

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Titli

@afterlife.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

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I really can connect myself to these words "Every love story does not have a happy ending. Some stories end as tragic but some, even though they end up being tragic, there are so many reasons to find happiness with in. " very true and practical they are. And thanks a lot for letting it be like this only vinu. One of my close friends has lost her love in an unfortunate accident few days ago..the whole story reminded me of them. Their story too ended tragically...before time..incomplete. I finally have learned that all the loves in life are actually virtual. Fate makes them virtual.

thanks for pm..

Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago

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-Vinu-

@-Vinu-

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: shriyakadge
*Unresed*
Am I the only e who is happy? 🤣 I went through all the comments, but everyone is sad!
I knew this was coming. So I am not shocked or something. 😆 And am i sad? Of course not! 🤣
One thing really cracked me up (No, it isnt Madhu's death 😆) Dvd playing Rishbala was hilarious. Who are Rk and madhu then? 🤣
Glad that Madhu went away sorting everything out and giving Rk some good memories :D

Ps. Your knowledge about these scientific things shocked me 🤣

Shriyu 🤗 I know that you are over the moon my tragic queen! 🤣Rishbala are two characters 😉 Special & unique! DVD gave life to them 😉😆 Btw I love Astronomy as much as I love horror 🤣 & I suggest you to watch Intersterllar ❤️

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-Vinu-

@-Vinu-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
wow awesome update and fabulously written dear👏
felt bad for Rk and the kids that they lost their Madhu
but as said Madhu's love will always be there with them ❤️
I loved the way Madhu surprised Rk on his birthday ⭐️
and loved how u mentioned the whole best Film winning by Rk 👏
and DVD playing the RishBala role thing⭐️ at the end
was truly brilliant and best part of this TS !! 👏
Rk is proud of his wife and so as I proud of Madhu !!👍🏼
loved this TS thanks for pm 😳

Aww Chittu glad you liked it 😳 Thanks a lot!

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-Vinu-

@-Vinu-

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Wonderful ending!

Thanks 😊

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-Vinu-

@-Vinu-

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: RM14
Vinu, its a amazing piece of writing dear, loved it.👏 👏
Though i never wanted Madhu to die but its your wish and its your story.😳

Loved it and mostly loved two things, one-surprise by Madhu to Rk on his b'day and their patch-up and second-the stars of Rk's movie-Vivian and Drashti.⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Its too emotional and beautifully written.👏

How lovely and unique was the surprise was and it was awesome too.⭐️

The kids are damn good.⭐️

Its very sad that Madhu couldn't came back alive , and felt very bad for Rk and kids,but at the same time, its reallity too that in real life everything in life is not as per our wish.

Feeling very bad for the astronauts too who were died in the real mission of Columbia.

Good that Madhu and Rk realized their mistakes ⭐️and understood each other.😳
The titlie'Untitled love'suits perfect here.👏

Great, superb story and great ending too.⭐️

Thanks for this story, and looking forward to get more stories from you Vinu.😃