Untitled Love - Final Part updated in pg 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Shriya kadge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

*Unresed*

Am I the only e who is happy? 🤣 I went through all the comments, but everyone is sad!

I knew this was coming. So I am not shocked or something. 😆 And am i sad? Of course not! 🤣

One thing really cracked me up (No, it isnt Madhu's death 😆) Dvd playing Rishbala was hilarious. Who are Rk and madhu then? 🤣

Glad that Madhu went away sorting everything out and giving Rk some good memories :D

Ps. Your knowledge about these scientific things shocked me 🤣

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Boo Bear

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

I'm second! 😈

Edited by Shriya.bk - 10 years ago

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noiseygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

This time m happy with 3rd place ...vinu
u know m not too regular on IF
I read ur update but couldnt comment sorry dear
ok ok m coming to the POINT😆😆
This is really a touching story
Madhu lost her unborn baby 😭
RK is also hurt but he considered Madhu is culprit for this
O god m feeling bad for their babies ,,,,really
hope all will be ok
how could RK do this???

Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago

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noiseygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

m again
Rishbala love each other too much
Why dont they see it????
Hope everything will be ok

Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago

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noiseygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

love u vinu
O vinu...One shri was enough for mee yaar 😉
now u also come with tragic🤢
U know I love happy ending
But i know it every story does nt have a happy ending
SO i accept it
it was really really touching
From the begining to end
and really u just did it gal
m proud of u👏
the way the kids and madhu celebrate rk's bday
and they clear their misunderstading
just awesome
and the last part where u make VD and DD as Rishbala
I just love it😳

Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago

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Chitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

wow awesome update and fabulously written dear👏
felt bad for Rk and the kids that they lost their Madhu
but as said Madhu's love will always be there with them ❤️
I loved the way Madhu surprised Rk on his birthday ⭐️
and loved how u mentioned the whole best Film winning by Rk 👏
and DVD playing the RishBala role thing⭐️ at the end
was truly brilliant and best part of this TS !! 👏
Rk is proud of his wife and so as I proud of Madhu !!👍🏼
loved this TS thanks for pm 😳

Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 10 years ago

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Shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

loved the way madhu surprised rk Rk is proud of his biwi very well written vinu liked the ending it was fantastic

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RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Vinu, its a amazing piece of writing dear, loved it.👏 👏

Though i never wanted Madhu to die but its your wish and its your story.😳

Loved it and mostly loved two things, one-surprise by Madhu to Rk on his b'day and their patch-up and second-the stars of Rk's movie-Vivian and Drashti.⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Its too emotional and beautifully written.👏

How lovely and unique was the surprise was and it was awesome too.⭐️

The kids are damn good.⭐️

Its very sad that Madhu couldn't came back alive , and felt very bad for Rk and kids,but at the same time, its reallity too that in real life everything in life is not as per our wish.

Feeling very bad for the astronauts too who were died in the real mission of Columbia.

Good that Madhu and Rk realized their mistakes ⭐️and understood each other.😳

The titlie'Untitled love'suits perfect here.👏

Great, superb story and great ending too.⭐️

Thanks for this story, and looking forward to get more stories from you Vinu.😃

Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago