Untitled Love - Final Part updated in pg 22 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: silverfire

Great story.

Feeling very bad for RK n the kids.
Madhu n RK r soulmates so she will also be with them.
Loved the way madhu surprised RK on his birthday.😳
VD n DD played Rishabala, so cute.☺️
Very true. Even if it was a sad ending , their love story is still intact n alive.👏

Thank u for giving us this awesome story.

Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

Beautiful beautiful ending dear...

Loved it so so much...
Very emotional... Had tears in my eyes... But i expected this ending... I was quite sure madhu wont return back though i wished for her to come back & spend a happy life with her family which she sacrified for her dreams & for which rk & their kids were yearning... But never mind... All love story cant have a happy ending but still the story can be epic one...
Loved madhu's final surprise for rk on his birthday... I found the hidden words even before madhu telling abt it...
Before she leave them she had rectified all her errors... She didnt leave them on a sad note... She made them so happy which they could cherish forever...
I couldnt help but this part reminded me of the dreadful day which took place yrs back... 1st feb of 2003 kalpana chawla & her crew died on space shuttle columbia disaster... Feeling sad but proud for them who lost their life in the mission...
Loved rk's idea of making a movie of their UNTITLED LOVE & making a tribute to his deceased biwi... & vivian & drashti playing the leads was an highlight Lol... To be frank even at the end i expected all this to be a movie where rk & madhu were the leads & tried a different attempt to give tribute to the astronauts... But nah... Madhu was really died & only her memories were left... Loved their kids a lot too... They r very supportive & smart...
Rk & madhu's love will be eternal...
Thanks for penning down this brilliant story vinu dear... Good job...
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Sudha

Aww thanks a lot Sudha di 🤗 Glad you liked it though it was tragic 😆 & yeah I watched those documentaries on that Columbia crash & some interviews of Kalpana Chawla. She is truly a great heroine! Madhu's character was inspired by her. Di, thank you so much for always encouraging me to write more ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm
fabulous update
loved the end
amazing story

Thank you Dia 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks Varsha 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Awesome end

madhu gave surprise to rk
they had video chat
i had expected madhu would die
rk made movie and dedicated it to madhu


Thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Annabelle..

OMG what a brilliant piece of writing Vinu! *Claps* Thumbs up for this! Loved the ending. I really wanted Madhu to come back but as you have mentioned you didnt want this to end as a typical love story. It's okay. I loved the way you ended it. RK dedicating his film to his late wife Madhu <3 & What a wonderful surprise Madhu gave for him. Sooo sweet of her <3 I even followed the hidden message in the letter! Haha that was cute :D so they celebrated the birthday through a video call :)

The best part was our DVD casting as Rishbala <3 I imagined everything while reading this :) Such a lovely story & so different! You have made me interested on this Aero Science topic :D Hehe I'm gonna watch the Columb is disaster on you tube after commenting here :( it's really sad. They are true heroes.

Keep on writing more please :D I love to read your stories <3

Aww thanks a lot for your feedback Nisha 😳 Glad you liked it! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalu1786

awesome ending.

loved it

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

As Madhu's death was expected even wished
It may be the perfect ending but still felt so emotional
The birthday the suprises everything is the
Best memories she has given
She is a real heroine as her children and Rk felt
U had written very well 👏

Wow u made DVD actors in the film

Glad you liked it 😃 Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anish17

beautiful ending vinu

loved birthday surprises
thanks for the pm

Thanks Anish 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ViShti128

Well well i read dis TS 2dy in one go. Wat 2 say?? U literally left me spellbound wid no words. Wat a writing, appreciation, very nice story, amazing, superb wud b jst n understatement. U knw d best appreciation is d one which leaves ppl open mouthed wid no words coz few things r so beautifull dat they dnt even deserved 2 b Xprsd in jst mere words coz they deserve more, n dis one is of dat kind. I lykd d twist which u added @ last. Wen i read d line "the best movie of d year goes to, any guesses" i was lyk YIPPIE!! thinking Madhu was alive. Bt s u say dis 1 is nt an ordinary piece of writing so i accepted it wid heavy heart & also DVD playing d lead wala twist was amazing. Trust me if i wud hv been a director or a producer i wud hv defo made a film wid dis topic n it wud hv defo been an ATBB. And @ last s u portrayed in d story n v ol knw, RishBala n their LOVESTORY was, is and will always remain EPIC!!!!

Thanks a lot for your feedback 😃 glad you liked it 😳

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