Chand chupa badal mein Rishbala SS Last Part pg54 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow even though I remember this story when u wrote it b4 with other characters it stil gets me every time

Madhu is such a selfless character n she cares so much for her best friend
plz don't shoot me for saying this but if Piyas love for Rish was true wouldn't she have felt dif for
his bro I mean even though theyre twins they have dif personalities for sure
nice to see Rish jealous seeing his Madhu paying attention to another guy
as for father his wish is gonna come true soon
looking forward 2u continuing
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin my way
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear

lovely piece of writing.

do update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arey what a suspense ,what is Rk going to say to Madhu.
Shekar has already choose Rk for Madhu but why doesn't he like piya . Pls continue and it was awesome Rk taking Madhu for dinner .thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks a lot Sydell for the surprise banner.
Chand chupa badal mein... The moon hiding behind the clouds Part 10

Special thanks to rima4ever for helping me to find the Rishbala pictures which were extremely hard to search for.
Madhu:Tell me Rishab...
Rishab:I ...I love you Madhu.
Madhu is surprised.She becomes emotional.
Madhu:Rishu...What did you say now?Did I hear anything wrong?

Rishab:Madhu..You heard right.I love you.
She is numb.
Rishab is nervous:Did I tell you anything wrong?If you consider me only as a friend please forgive me.But don't break our friendship.
She cups his face in his arms.
Madhu:Rishu...how could you ever think that I will be angry with you?
He stammers:Madhu...
Her eyes are full of tears:I also love you Rishu.

He becomes emotional.
They see a beautiful show peace on the table.It was a couple.
She takes it in her arms.
Madhu:We are like this beautiful couple Rishu.We will always be together.

Rishab::Thank you Madhu.I can't live without you.
She embraces him emotionally.He embraces her back.
He:Even I can't live without you Madhu.

They forget themselves in that sweet embrace.

Suddenly he realizes that it's his illusion.

Madhu:Rishu...what do you want to tell me?
Rishab:Ah...
Rishab lacks courage to confess his love.
RISHAB:Madhu..me...my Boss liked my work very much.
Madhu smiles:Wow!That's great.Congrats.
He smiles.
MADHU:You have achieved a position now.Then why don't you go back to your family now?They will be very happy to see you as a responsible man.
He loses his mood.
RISHAB:Why are you dragging my parents into it?Yes,my mom will be very happy to see me like this.But dad...no way.

She holds his cheek.
MADHU:Listen Rishu...You are misunderstanding him Rishab.Your dad loves you..he cares for you.He wants to see you happy.

RISHAB:What nonsense!
MADHU:Once he had come to see me.
He is shocked:What?
MADHU:Yes.He knew that you can't be happy if you go back home.So he told me to keep you in my house.So that you will be happy.He is proud of you.
He is confused.
RISHAB becomes emotional:I can't believe this.Dad came to see you?He was supporting me?

MADHU:I'm telling the truth Rishab.If you don't go back to your house it will be a big mistake which can never be corrected.
Rishab is upset.


Madhu rings up Shekhar.
S:Madhu?How is Rishab?
MADHU:Open the door uncle.He is there.
He is surprised:What?
MADHU:I'm sorry Uncle.I broke my promise.I told everything to him.I feel it's the right time to reveal him the truth.He regrets ignoring you.Please forgive him.

S:Madhu..you are great.
She smiles.
Radha,Abhay and Piya come.
S:I will open the door.
Shekhar opens the door.Rishab is standing there.All are surprised.
RADHA:Rishab!
Radha hugs him.
RISHAB:Mom!
Radha cries:I missed you my son.

RISHAB:Missed you too mom.
RADHA:Don't go away again.
Shekhar:Yes Rishab.Please don't go away.I'm sorry.

His eyes are wet.Rishab's eyes are filled up with tears.
RISHAB:Dad!I am sorry.
S:No beta...it's not the time to say sorry'.
Skekhar hugs him.All are happy.
Piya thinks:Good that Rishab got his position back in this family.

Rishab asks Radha:Mom...can I sleep on your lap?I miss sleeping on your lap listening to your lullaby.
Radha becomes so emotional that she hugs him:I too miss it beta.
Rishab lies on her lap.
Rish:Sorry mom.I hurt you a lot by leaving the house.Because of that I had to be away from you for a long time.
Radha wipes his tears:Don't talk about the past now beta.
She sings a lullaby.Rishab slowly falls into sleep.

Radha thinks:God...give a nice future to Rishu please.


Piya looks depressed in her room.
Abhay notices it.
ABHAY:Why do you look sad Piya?Does anything bother you?
PIYA:How can you ask me this question?Ever since you entered into my life through cheating i'm upset.
Abhay becomes upset.
PIYA:Rishab is here now.I can't live with you in Rishab's presense.
ABHAY:Means?
PIYA:I can't live here anymore.I'm fed up.
Abhay is shocked:Piya!
PIYA:Tell me how i will live here?The old sweet memories flash when i see him here.It's so..it's so disturbing.
Abhay understands her situation.But he can't imagine her going.
She packs her bags.

Rishab speaks to Madhu on the phone:Thanks a lot Madhu.If you were not with me,i would'nt have realized the depth of my mistake.Because of you i got my family back.
Madhu smiles:Stop telling Thanks' and make everyone happy.
RISHAB:Sure.
MADHU:Bye Rishab..
RISHAB:Bye.
He cuts the phone with a smile.He walks to the corridor.
There sees Piya who is passing by.Piya feels it difficult to look at his face.He smiles.
RISHAB:How are you?
Piya is silent.
RISHAB:I know that you are happy.I trust Abhay's love for you.Abhay can give you only happiness.His love for you has changed him a lot.He is mature and understanding now.
She tries to smile.

She returns to her room.
Abhay:When are you going?
PIYA:I'm not going.
He is surprised.
ABHAY:You..you are not going?
PIYA:Yes,i'm not going.
ABHAY:Really?
PIYA:Yes.Rishab thinks that i'm happy with you.He is relieved thinking that i'm happy here.I don't want to give him tensions.He will be very upset if i go out of this house.Because of that i can't leave this house.
He is relieved.
She unpacks her bag.He holds her hand.
She stares at him.
ABHAY:I'm happy that you are not leaving this house.Thank you so much Piya.
She removes his hand from her's.
PIYA:Don't touch me.
He is hurt.
PIYA:Why should you care if i stay here or not?
ABHAY:I care..because i love you and i want to see you everyday.
PIYA:Oh stop it.Don't love me like this.I can forgive you.But i can't love you.
He is upset.

ABHAY:At last you forgave me.That's more than enough for me.
Piya's eyes get filled up with tears.He leaves the room.

Piya remembers Rishab's words about Abhay(Abhay can give you only happiness.His love for you has changed him a lot.He is mature and understanding now).

Piya tells in her mind:I am confused about your character.I thought you were a beast.But now you seem to be different from what I thought about you before.Now you are calm and you are loving me like hell.And Rishab says that you have changed for me.I am confused.
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Nice pics
I thought Rishab had really confessed his love
to Madhu
Madhu sent Rishab back to his home
to his parents

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Wen rishab will confess his love to madhu ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 ad pm n terrific update! It was a dream! Madhu sends him home! update soon! well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh dear ! Such nice pics u used for illusion .Rishab has not confessed n he returned home.Very touching welcome. Piya's feeling for abhay starts changing but when will Rk confess his love for madhu.Madhu is selfless n so loving. Thanks for ur regular updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsme updte

Loved it


I was so happy in starting
I thought that they finally confessed
Bt it was a dream

Cnt wait for their real confession



Rishu knows the truth
He came back
His parents so happy

Piya wants to leave bt for rishu sake she didn't go



Update soon
Cnt wait


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the pm
marvelous update
continue soon
u took my name i am honored

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