Obsession-Rishbala Sulbala FF last part pg103 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear. ..now engaged! !! Waiting for d wedding.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
nice update. I m waiting to read how this story will move forward.both couple r happy with each other what next?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Hey nice story

Omg what is hppning
Madhu n rishabh marrying sumone else

Sounds very intrstng


Would love to read it

More


Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
awesome update. loved it.
their engagement is done.
sultan n madhus marriage is first n then muskan n rishab.
rishab throw bachelor's party for sultan.
muskan is praising sultan so much n asking rishab to like him.
what is going to happen. can't wait. plz update next part soon dear. :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Awesome Update

So Madhu is with RK while Muskaan is with Sultan
but Rk enjoyed dancing with Muskaan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear...
So madhu & sultan and rishabh & muskaan thinking are alike...
Well that song selection is awesome...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update.
Can't wait for RK n madhu's wedding.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Obsession Part 3

I thank all of u 4 commenting on this FF

I thank Sydell a lot for the surprise banner she made for me.




Sultan and Madhu's wedding...
Sultan ties mangalsuthra around Madhu's neck.
Madhu felt blessed to be Sultan's wife.


Sultan's and Madhu's room..
Sultan enters the room and sees Madhu in ghoongat.She blushes hearing his foot steps.



He unveils her face.
Madhu feels very shy when he removes her ghoongat. .
Sultan cups her face in his hands.
Sultan:I am so lucky to have you as my life partner.I feel blessed.

She blushes.

SULTAN:I love you Madhu.

MADHU:I love you too Sultan.
They share an eye lock.

Muskaan gets a surprise parcel.She opens it.It's a violet frock.She sees a chip.It's written "With love.. your Rishab.."
Her mobile rings.She attends the call.
"Hi Muskaan..I am Rishab".
Mus:Hi..
RISHAB:Did you get my gift?
Mus:Yes.
RISHAB:How is it?
Mus:Very beautiful.
RISHAB:I want you to wear that and come with me for a date tonight.
Muskaan:Ok...I will come.

Rishab and Muskaan meet outside.Rishab is bowled over by her beauty.
RISHAB:You look very pretty Muskaan.
Mus:Thanks Rishab.




RISHAB:You must have got a lot of compliments for your beauty.So my compliment may not be exciting you.
She simply smiles.
RISHAB:You have won the beauty contest in the college.Right?
Mus:Yes.
Rishab leads her to the car.
They reach a cool isolated place .
Rishab holds her hand and dances.
Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa (x2)

Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun tto nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa...(Aashiqui 2...)


Rishab goes closer to her .Muskaan becomes insecure.
Rishab does'nt realize it.He puts his arms on her shoulder.He is becoming closer and closer to her.He caresses her face with passion.He is in another world where there was only him and his Muskaan and their passionate love.He leans over her to touch her sweetly with his lips.Muskaan becomes nervous and moves away from him.
Mus:Rishab..what are you doing?

He asks in a husky soft voice:Why..?I thought since you are a modern girl you don't mind all this.After all we are going to get married soon.
Mus: But..
RISHAB:But what?
Mus:But..i think this is not needed now.
RISHAB:But why Muskaan?Why are you hesitating?
Mus:Rishab..
RISHAB:Tell me Muskaan..we love each other.Then what's the problem?By the way I won't cross limits before marriage.Though I am modern I don't follow western culture.Just romance Muskaan.

He goes closer to her.Her wet eyes captures his vision.
Rishab becomes becomes serious.
RISHAB:Muskaan?I never thought our intimacy hurts you this much.You are so modern.You love night parties like me.So I thought you won't have hesitation.

Mus:I am a modern girl.But Rishab...In India even the most ultra modern girls can romance only the person they love.They can't have physical intimacy with anyone else.

Rishab could not believe it:What?Muskaan...what did you say?

Mus:I'm sorry Rishab.You are not the person I love.
Rishab is shocked:Muskaan!
Mus:I am sorry Rishab.

Rishab got angry and held her shoulders tight.
RISHAB:Then whom do you love?
She is not able to face Rishab.Lowering her eye balls she says :Sultan!

Rishab is shocked.He can't believe his ears.He was numb for a moment.

R:No,you are fooling me like you always do.But don't use your usual tricks.
She weeps:No,it's true.I don't love you.
Tears dwell in his ears.
RISHAB:Sultan?
Mus:Yes.It was love at first sight.But dad chose Sultan for Madhu.I lost Sultan.
Muskaan cries.Rishab's heart pains.
RISHAB:Then why did'nt you tell me before?
Mus:Because I did'nt want to hurt Madhu and my dad.But i can't cheat you anymore.Because I feel you love me like crazy.Your love is giving me pain as i don't feel the same for you.
Rishab is broken completely.
RISHAB:You broke my heart Muskaan.
Mus:Rishab!
Rishab fumed with anger:You cheated everyone.How will Sultan,Madhu and our parents react if they come to know the truth?I hate you Muskaan.

Muskaan has no answer.She is really shattered.
He walks away with suppressed pain.Muskaan cries.

Rishab is shattered.

He says silently:I loved you madly.But you cheated me.How can I live without you Muskaan?
Rishab heart cries loudly out of pain.
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update, loved it. Me 1st to comment.

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