Obsession-Rishbala Sulbala FF last part pg103 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Looks interesting. Pls continue soon. Thank you for the pm dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful Indeed

The whole mandir scene was sweet

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Obsession Part 2


I thank all of u 4 commenting on this FF

I thank Sydell a lot for the surprise banner she made for me.




Engagement function..
Sultan and Rishab came.Shamsher brought Madhubala and

Muskaan .



They exchange rings.
SULTAN:Madhubala,I feel happy that you are my fiancee.Soon you are going to be my wife.I am so lucky.
Madhubala blushes.


Rishab:Muskaan..I am thrilled.I am engaged.I never thought I would get engaged so soon.Very soon we will get married.
She giggles.

Mus:Rishab...you are talking as if engagement and wedding are all big adventures.

RISHAB:Getting a pretty girl as my wife is not lesser than an adventure.



She blushes.



RISHAB:I never thought that the bubbly naughty girl like you can blush.

Muskaan started kicking him in a funny manner.

They both laugh.


Shamsher:Though the engagement of both my daughters are on the same day,the wedding won't be on the same day.
All the faces becomes dull.
Shamsher:The astrologer said that Rishab and Muskaan's wedding should happen only later.So Sultan and Madhubala's wedding should be done first.
Rishab's face is dull.
Rishab whispers:Muskaan..i have to wait more to get you in my life.I can't imagine.
Mus:Why?

RISHAB:It's very difficult to wait for you.
She smiles:Why is it difficult?

RISHAB:Because I don't want to be away from you even for a moment.
She blushes.


Madhu looks dull.
Sultan:Why are you sad Madhu?

Madhu:I wanted mine and Muskaan's wedding to happen on the same time.But it's impossible.
Sul:Don't worry.Very soon Muskaan will also be with you.Right?
She smiles.
Sul:I feel you are still worried.But I promise... I will give you all happiness after marriage.
She smiles.
Sul: I heard girls like shopping and outing the most.I will take you for both.
Madhu:To be frank I am not fond of shopping.
Sul:Ok...but you like outings.Right?I heard girls like to go to beach and cinema theatres.I will take you for both.
Madhu:No beach please.I am scared of the waves.
Sul:Then leave it.I will take you to other places and films.
She smiles.

On the previous day of Sultan-Madhubala's wedding..Rishab throws a bachelor's party.Black is the colour of the party.All have worn black clothes.
All are having disco.
SULTAN:Rishab..what was the need of all these things?You know that I am not comfortable with partying.
RISHAB:Oh come on bro.Dance and have fun.This is the last chance.Once Madhu enters your life you won't be able to party like this.
SULTAN:That's ok.I will be happy if Madhu is against me partying as I hate partying.
Rishab laughs:Funny!
They are shocked to see Muskaan entering the hall in a black outfit.
RISHAB:Muskaan!
SULTAN:You are happy to see your lady.
Rishab smiles.
Mus:Hi guys.
Rish:How come you are here?This is bachelor's party and you are a girl.
Mus:Don't say that I am just a girl.
RISHAB:Ya...how could I forget that sometimes you are pretty much like boy.Sometimes I even doubt whether you are a boy or a girl.
Mus:Oh...just stop it Rishab.You are always teasing me.Look at Sultan.He is not teasing me.







Sultan smiles.

RISHAB:That is because you are Sultan's sister in law.But you are my girl.

Mus:But Sultan does'nt tease Madhubala.He respects Madhubala.He does'nt make fun of her.I respect him for that.You learn manners from him.Don't ridicule guests.

Rishab laughs off.

SULTAN:Rishab..Muskaan is right.You should not tease her like this.You are crossing the limit.

Rishab just smiles.

Mus:Sultan...thanks a lot for supporting me.Madhu is a lucky girl to get a man like you in her life.

Rishab and Sultan smiled.

RISHAB:That means you are not lucky to have me?

Muskaan makes funny expressions to tease Rishab.They laugh.

Mus:By the way..tell me..do you have any problem if i attend this party?I am bored of the traditional sangeet mehendi function at home.I just want to have fun.That's why I came here.

Rishab smiles:I have no problem dear.Infact I am happy that you are here.I wished you were here.Surprisingly you are in front of me.Like you even I am bored of these traditional functions.That's why I conducted this party.

SULTAN:Muskaan is a perfect match for you.Both of you love partying.Carry on.
Mus:Hey Sultan..you also join us.
SULTAN:No..no..i don't know disco.
Mus:Join us.Automatically you will dance.
RISHAB:Muskaan is right bro.Come...dance..
Rishab and Muskaan pull Sultan.They push him to the dance floor.

The song 'Moochhon ko thoda round ghumake
Anna ke jaisa chashma lagake
Coconut me lassi milake
Aa jaao sare mood banake (x2)

All the Rajini fans - Thalaivar
Don't miss the chance - Thalaivar
All the Rajini fans - Thalaivar
Don't miss the chance - Do This!

Lungi dance, lungi dance...'(Chennai Express)

is going on.They dance.
After the song gets over also Rishab didn't leave Muskaan.He keeps looking at her eyes.They share an eye lock.
Seeing them like that Sultan smiles and moves away.They break the eye lock.
RISHAB:How was the party?
Mus:Cool.After a long time i enjoyed a lot.I danced with full heart.It was a rocking party.
RISHAB:Muskaan..I really enjoyed dancing with you.I am so happy that will you be there with me to dance the rest of the life.
Muskaan smiles.


Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Lovely update dear...but I'm very much excited to read further parts...as I want to know hw muskaan ends up wid sultan and madhu wid Rk...this story since I have read the prologue was intresting and making me wait...! :) Plzz continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Lovely update
First Madhu's marriage with Sultan and
Then Muskaan with Rishab
What's going to happen
Muskaan is after Sultan always praising him
And the bachelor's party went rocking
Waiting for the wedding day
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Aww such a lovely update
Madhu and Muskaan wedding on the diff date that's sad but Madhu wanted to make her wedding along with Muskaan and like the way Sultan was trying ways to make Madhu happy and finally he found a way to take her out for movies
Well the bachelor party idea was nice Sultan is so shy and like the convo of Muskaan and Sultan and the dance of Rishkaan was superb nice they shared a eyelock too Sultan felt nice seeing them together
Nice update dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Wonderful update
Pls pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Superb update i wonder how will rk n madhu vl end up together
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Lovely update, loved it, waiting for the next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
I liked the party and your idea of the pictures works very well with the story. Engagement done, but Sultan and Madhubala will marry first, can't wait for the wedding and please don't kill Sultan. Its quite interesting how the obsession is going to unravel in your story, who will be showing obsession is it Muskan for Sultan? Perhaps each one for their spouse. So lots to look forward to.
Edited by .Verity. - 10 years ago

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