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Posted: 10 years ago


Nice update...
Finally they both united...
Aweee... Feels sad for maan...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update finally sultan n muskaan r back together rk n madhu r so sweet bt felling sad for maan he has such a good heart
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! all happy! Muskaan n Sultan back together! Maan all alone! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update..
Happy for muskan n sultan
update next part soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww thanks for the dedication and yayayay you united sulkaan😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
My new Rishbala ss What does my heart desire? Rishbala SS Part 1 :
Thank you so much for the banner Sydell.

Obsession Part 22
I dedicate this chapter to Sydell who wants Sulkaan romance and Maan-Aarti Jodi.
Most of the readers want Geet for Maan.But that's not possible as Shamsher has only twins;not triplets.So as Sydell suggested I brought Aarti for Maan.

Holi...

Madhu and Muskaan dress up alike.
Mus:Earlier our similar look created a lot of confusions.Let us see them getting confused again.
They both giggle.
Sultan-Rishab came.They were stunned seeing their similar dressing.
Rishab:What the hell!
Mus:Can you recognize us?
Rishab:Sure.
Madhu:This time you can't guess who your woman is.Because we both are completely alike.
Rishab:I am not the same Rishab now.Now I know my Madhu very well and I can't make a mistake n recognizing her.
Madhu smiles.
Muskaan challenges him:Really?Then identify us.
Rishab stands between Madhu and Muskaan.
Slowly he turns his face closer to Madhu's.He looks at her eyes deeply.
Rish:I can recognize you my biwi.
Muskaan-Madhu are surprised.
He colours her passionately.

Rishab:Because when I stand near you itself I can feel your breath.
Looking at him she takes a long breath.

He colours her face more and more with passionate love.

She closes her eyes melting in his passionate touch.

Rishab cups her face in his hands:I told you yesterday that I was waiting to colour you.I fulfilled my own wish.

She looks at his eyes.
M:You fulfilled my wish too Rishab.

She rubs her face on his face and his face becomes red like hers.
They get lost in each other.



Maan and Savitri Devi come for the Holi party as they are invited.
Madhu and Muskaan:Dadimaa...Hi Maan.
They touched Savitri's feet.Muskaan hugs Savitri.

Mus:I'm so happy that you both received our invitation.
Sav:Howcan we not come for your party Muski?
Muskaan smiles.

Maan smiles seeing Rishab-Madhu and Sultan-Muskaan together.Savitri feels sad for Maan.
While walking Maan and a girl bump into each other.
Maan:Sorry.
She:Sorry.
Madhu:Maan...this is Aarti.Our neighbour.
Maan:Hello...
Aarti smiles:Hi...
Sultan Muskaan smears colour on Aryan's cheeks and wish him:Happy Holi Aryan.
Aryan:Happy Holi mumma papa.


Sultan gives a sweet packet to Aryan.
Sul:Holi sweets.


Aryan:Wow!Thank you dad.

Muskaan tastes Holi sweet.
Mus:Wah!
She feeds sweets to Aryan.






Muskaan goes near Sultan and he shows his face to her.

She smears his forehead with Tilak.

He smiles.
Sultan-Aryan go to the compound.
All are playing with colours.
Sultan sees Muskaan coming .
He blossoms.


She comes near him.
Sultan can't take his eyes off her.They share a beautiful eye lock.

She takes colour powder and puts all over his face with a giggle.

Mus:Sultan...hope you are not irritated as you don't like such loudness.
Without saying anything he holds her closer.
They share a passionate eye lock.


Slowly he throws colour on her face with burning passion.


Aryan smiles seeing it.
Aryan:Hey...mumma papa playing holi.





Sultan-Muskaan look at each other passionately.

Sultan:I am not irritated even a bit Muskaan.Because you only coloured me and you can only colour my life.
They keep looking at each other passionately.


Suddenly they break the eye lock hearing the song on back ground.

Do Me A Favor Lets Play Holi ...(Waqt).

They looked at others dancing.


Mus:Sultan,today I won't leave you without dancing.
He smiles nodding his head.
She holds his hand and dances along with others.

Rishab-Madhu,Sultan-Muskaan,Aryan-Sneha dance together.


Aarti goes near Maan:Shall we dance?It's holi.
Maan:Why not?
Savitri sees Maan dancing with Aarti.A smile appeared on her face.
Maan puts colour on her cheeks.
Aar:What did you do?

Maan:You didn't like it.Sorry.


Suddenly she put colour on his face.He held her hand.
Maan:No...

Suddenly they both burst into laughter.
Savitri giggles seeing it.
She says in her mind:This is the beginning of a new friendship.Guess a girl who adores Maan beta has entered his life.




The End

This is the ending.But Obsession continues.I'm going to post the 2nd version of Obsession.
The 1st 12 parts will be as same as the 1st version of Obession.The 2nd version starts from Part 13.
Plz write a detailed comment on the last part.plz write ur fav scene n fav character too.Its my request
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful end for beautiful story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb end
maan ko aarti mil gai
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Posted: 10 years ago
Perfect ending
Loved it to the core


Madhu n muskaan teasing their husbands
The love is in the air
Maan k lia aarti god choice



All in all enjoyed
Wow version 2
Cnt wait
Excited



Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending...
Happy for all of them...
Waiting for O-2

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