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Originally posted by: Anntempleton

Yess. I m happy that my 100th post is for your update.
Loved the update. It was really nice part. But at the end Rk herd her but how is he gonna interpret it. Poor soul. I m guessing a misunderstanding on the way. And yes I would love it if they fought like a couple for once. You know without hiding anything! Shouting, yelling and screaming at each other for the love they have. Like... Fighting each other for each other.
Hehe
Hey that is just my view. I love your writings so keep writing. Waiting for next part :)

Originally posted by: Love-Blossoms

Seriously is there any end to rishabs miseries

After last update i thought maybe she will make upto him by telling him her love but naa i was so wrong she is still stick on the fact that he wld have hurt her like seriously is she dumb blind deaf or totally nuts case that she has to assume n accuse him of worst everytime

Wat diff. Is there in her or dipali if dips accused him of being a looser fool then she did same by calling him names n now even talking crap to her bro . abt him

This is wat her love is for him consider him a asshole who wld hurt her bro for his pleasure .

Its better she dnt show her fake worries for him wen she clearly thinks him as a monster atleast his hopes wont get high on her n he wont be hurt frm her actions n words further .

Somehow i knew he will believe her words bcoz surely her words touched his soul n the scar is too deep to be washed away with her love confession or her worries which turn otherwise the next second.

I dnt know abt others but i surely want rk to fly back to london fn be with his sis who truely cares for him bcoz i dnt give a dam abt madhu whether tony gets her or sultan i wont feel a thing for anymore bcoz she has no right to accuse someone who clearly is not responsible for her condition .

N i actually like manav he is really smart kid for seeing through rishab in just span of sometime .

Tk u made madhus life safe n sound with her bro

Will u plss give us rks life safe n sound with his sis n maami

Bcoz clearly i dnt want rm together in this story

They r better off without each other for me but i know u ll unite them but i just want peaceful moments for rk now .

The man has been through enough dnt put him on edge of giving up on his life with all the hurt n blames .

U r grt as writer keep it up .

Originally posted by: memad

nice progression to the story in part 34...glad how madhu realized and apologized to Rishabh after her initial outburst..n then made him eat food through Manav and treat his wounds by tricking him to call doc for her...m sure doc's addressal ' ur wife' for madhu must hv rang bells in Rishbh's mind to reconsider the lost hope he had dismissed earlier...

looks like Rishabh is unaware that Madhu is not touched by Karan n may be that guilt is still killing him...will he know sometime soon that Madhu is not physically abused the way he is thinking...


m happy that finally Madhu is feeling free n safe with Manav...she is right to teach him not to trust strangers blindly...ah, the timing was lil bad...now Rishabh will rethink his decision to propose her...I guess Manav will surely play somebody like cupid in next updates...

m sure readers might be whining about madhu's stupid blabbering or the bad timing of Rishabh's entry...but both Rishbala r matured beings to solve these prolblems by their own..I don't mind these small misunderstandings coming in a way...they help relationships go stronger, build, develop n last long...it allows couple to talk, understand, communicate n resolve...in fact, couples should hv this kind of phase in the relationship..

btw, is Madhu's note with Rishabh or kaka which she had written for Manav? Did he read it? Does he know anything abt Mukund? Will Mukund surface again in the story?

Originally posted by: coolashu

Another Excellent update👏 Beginning was very good with Madhu realizing her mistake and trying to apologize. The part where she asks for a doctor just for his sake and then tucks him into bed shows how much she cares..Rishab's realization that he must confess his love to her and atleast give himself and their relationship a chance was emotional. Too much hope. It just felt for a moment like deja vu where he will confess and she will accept his love .. But then what did you do Teekay.. Another misunderstanding.. God Rishabh has suffered so much in this story. Madhu is right from her view point about advising Manav to be careful with strangers. She was just using Rishab as example.. But then when u see it from Rishab"s point, she just accused him 12 hours ago and now she is asking Manav not to trust him. He should be devasted.. I just hope he does not completely give up on her now. It is now only upto Madhu to confess her love for him.. Please update soon.. Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Another Excellent update teekay 👏

I absolutely loved the update. My heart goes for Rishab. I can understand why Madhu said that to Manav. She did not mean it about Rishab, i think she was more anxious about Manav considering a rich man cool and trust worthy.. Anyways Rishab heard and misunderstood her. Just like she over heard over heard Rk Tony convo and misunderstood him. Its like deja vu. I really wish Madhu to sooth his pain. He really needs her. And Madhu need to take initiative also. But I was wondering how will he react if Madhu tries to sooth him in a familiar manner, he may consider it as an obligation and reject her. I really wish to see a confession from Rishab, he was about to do that but it didn't happen. Madhu also loves him but I dont think she can verbalize it easily. And I am really really glad that Madhu apologize to him for the outburst, and Rishab hiding her actual note to Manav. Its good that Manav didn't get to read that note otherwise his behavior would have been different to both Rk and Madhu. Eagerly waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Im so happy to see madhu n manav happy n safe now. They r at a better n safe place n in good hands now .

But RK is drowning in his guilt , grief n sorrow . He has lost hope now . MU is drifting them apart although they r living together ..

wat if he comes to knw abt madhu's past wid mukund now

[ only love affair ]

. Im sure he wud think dat she stills mukku n wud

try to send her back to him .

Originally posted by: twinklev20

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Thanks a lot, Teekay...for considering my request and getting medical treatment / doctor for my RK...🤗...🥳......love you...🤗...he needed medical treatment...😭

Sorry for my words...😔...but am HATING Madhu's character since last part...😡...😡.😡...more in this part...😡...she is behaving like such a hypocrite....😡...ATLEAST IN HER WORDS...😡...SHE ISSS SPITTING VENOM IN HER WORDS FOR RK...😡.😡.😡

Is she still in her senses...😲...😕...or was she always THANK-LESS...😡

Even after RK having saved her and her brother from such a hell...or almost death...she abused him verbally...😡...and to ask Sorry...it was just a few formal words...😲 😡

Also, the worst part was...what the hell was she telling Manav...😡...i understand Manav is naive...but Madhu's words were clearly bent on making Manav hate RK...😡...is this the way u make a teenager understand the world...OMG...i just hate her in this part...😡

Am feeling sorry for RK...😭...am sure he is MORE HURT THIS TIME WHEN HE heard Madhu's conversation with Manav about him...😭...he must be really HEART-broken...😭...his hopes crashed for sure...😭 😭.😭.😭.😭

BTW, RK was supposed to go to Pune next morning...😲...why is he going now...😲...plsss plsss...hoping he is safe outside...he is already wounded...😭...BOTH PHYSICALLY N EMOTIONALLY...😭..😭..😭...plsss...hoping RK is safe...n remains safe....😭

LOVE UR WRITING SKILLS...👏...SO INTENSE...👏...SO WELL NARRATED...👏...EVERY BIT OF EMOTION ESPECIALLY...👏...IN EVERY PART...👏...EXCELLENT...👏 👏.👏

pls continue soon...

Originally posted by: karamukku

Situation was realistic. Hats off to you. Madhu didn't mean to hurt RK . It was unintentional. But that's what she ended up doing... My poor RK, how much more pain can he take from his lady love... After doing everything he could for her... Even I feel depressed this time... Hope she will heal all this pain one day and bring peace and love in his life...

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: teekay

Find me a publisher who will publish this crap and I will😛😛

Originally posted by: rdave1

I loved the back and forth in RK, he was fighting between his heart and his head in a strange way. Glad he is smart enough to realize why she reacted the way she did. I'm glad he is willing to jump in blind and take a chance on love but the end... I know she wasn't referring to Rishabh when she was explaining to Manav he was just an example but damn. It's like they move 1 step forward and 15 steps back. :(

But at least now we have some hope. :) Great job!