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karamukku

@karamukku

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

Superb brilliant update... Falling short of words to appreciate you...

I was shocked to see such a reaction from Madhu... never expected it this way...But, when thinking from her perspective, it's totally justified... But, I feel very very very bad for RK ... He did so much to rescue her... Even he is injured badly... And now Madhu is calling him a monster and comparing him to tony... Madhu cannot be blamed as she doesn't know these things...So now, the enemies are not outsiders... It's their inner feelings and worries... Can't wait to see how they fight their issues...

Thanks for the pm.

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#572

Hey teekay 😛

Fantabulous update ⭐️👏

We now know that Madhu is not touched by Karan. Doesn't make any difference to me but I am happy that he behaved normal. I loved Roma's dialogues to Madhu. Roma was right, those men are the best clients they can get ( reminded me of a horrible scene from the movie Lakshmi). Ok..now they reached Rishab's farm house in pune. Manav was not there and Madhu panics and screams at Rishab. I didnt expect her to behave normal after this great escape so I am not angry.

Rishab was really angry and unsettled through out the journey. Madhu is yet to know his true feelings for her. She know he cares for her but how can she even expect him to fall in love with her. Their last normal conversation was the pool side conversation. Where she came to know his helplessness even if he want to rescue her. She accepted her fate and walked back to Tony because she did not want to trouble him anymore. She made a plan to escape , silly plan like Rishab said but her ultimate aim was to rescue Manav. She was willing to die. She is still unaware of What happened in Rishab's life in between.

Mukund sold her to Tony and Tony black mailed her using Manav to keep her with him. Then circulated her pics as a commodity. Rk chooses her and bought her as his 'mistress'. She was with him for 3 months as his mistress. Then Rk returned her (Madhu's pov) to Tony. Karran bought her. Now again Rk bought her permenantly as WHAT?? His mistress?? Or the love of his life??? I am sure Madhu is not even going to think about the latter. Willingly or unwillingly, forced or not Madhu is a high class escort. How can a call girl like her think that someone love them?? Especially someone like Rk who is from a well reputed known background. Madhu still thinks (may be) that Rk bought her permenantly as his mistress. Thats bothering her If I am not wrong. She no more wants to be someone's mistress, she wants to be free or die.

I hope Rk understands whats going through her. I want him to confess and convince his love before its too late.

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Twinkle

@twinklev20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

Awesome update...👏...and intense tooo...👏... as always...👏

Loved the way you portrayed Madhu's inner turmoil when in the car...👏...and I equally loved the way you explained the scene at the end of update when Madhu is shouting at RK...

THOUGH THE ENTIRE STORY IS EXCELLENT, BUT THE BEST LINES OF THE DAY I FELT WERE:
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Her forbearance had reached its limit. Her patience and optimism had dissipated. She had given up on everything, even Manav, and chosen to die.

Pehli aandhi mein ghar bikhra, doosri mein khwab lut gaye

Teesra to toofan tha, jeene ki wajah bhi le gaya

Khudgarz lootera saanson ka, aakhir kaar aaya to magar

Bin kuch liye bas hum ko khud ki tabaahi ka ilzaam de gaya

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but instead of understanding Madhu's concern for her brother, RK got confused regarding him being accepted by madhu anymore...😕...but then even he is more hurt than Madhu in every way...😭 😭 😭

hope they both speak up and clear the situation...😊

but plsss get RK some medical help asap...

Edited by twinklev20 - 10 years ago

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Qurat-ul-Ain

@ainanwer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

please don't take misunderstandings take place between rishbala

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: teekay

I have one in mind for a while...a love triangle...but I don't think I am going to ever be able to write it. Well, not unless I end up unemployed.

Love triangle you mean a guy and two girls!!!

😛 Teekay you are not going to end up jobless. I will pray to god to keep you busy in your life always 😆

Frankly speaking your idea of a love triangle is making me shiver. I am scared dear.. this was the one you said difficult to write, right? Well I can understand your feelings. Dont try to..if u dont want to. But you can write other light stories. When u said love triangle , I was thinking about Ankahee. There was no proper triangle but still you cant even imagine how painful was that to me. Pls dont stop writing teekay.. I am sure you can come up with another comfortable concept.. but still if you choose to write that painful love triangle i will definitely read..and cry..

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Anish

@anish17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#576

superb update

waiting for next part

thanks for the pm

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#577

Fabulous update. Insecurities ,inner turmoils made madhu accused Rk.She is totally broken, can't gather herself anymore. But Rk don't deserve such treatment. He was tormented mentally n physically to save madhu n she called him monster n rapist.plz made them speak their feelings n end their misery. Waiting for next part.

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Bon_Vivant

@Bon_Vivant

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Posted: 10 years ago

#578

Awesome update.thanks for the pm

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Tanya Kaur

@muzikk93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#579

Madhu's in hysterics. .. why madhu why? Shouldve had the patience to let rk speak for himself instead of jumping to ridiculous conclusions😭 I feel really really bad for rk... he's got the whole thing wrong. I hope he quits thinking that madhu doesn't like him.. I'm being irrational right?😆 Ahh can't wait for the next update