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Originally posted by: rdave1

Well you said anger was better then tears but I'm back to tears again. I swear this feeling of helplessness seeps into my body as I read this. I hurt for them both who deserve some happiness from all this pain they have endured in such a small time yet everything is against them. I keep hoping there is a light at the end of this long dark tunnel yet it just seems to get darker and longer and I feel more helpless.

I am happy that they were reunited but I have a feeling that Rishabh told Karan something to let him see Madhu and it didn't give him enough time to run off with her.

Please save our babies. 😭😭😭

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Rishabh n madhu reunited but for how long? What has RK told Karan? So many unanswered questions.

how come Tony is ready to hand her over without money.something is definitely wrong n your last line scared me more.

Great writing n do update soon.

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Res

Unres

I cried again taru

Brilliant update

U showed madhu's turminol superbly

Please update next part soon

P.s. now i will not come first as tom morng my mom n my sibblings are coming to meet me so i vl b busy for next 10 days but vl comment as soon as i vl get time 😊

Originally posted by: japura900216

As usual briliant update once again.👏God now I'm damn excited for the next part.please please update sooner you can😊And the song "Awari" is perfect for their situation.It's like that song is written for them only.In any case if anyone is interested here is the song with translation.

Teri Baahon Mein Jo Sakoon Tha Mila...
The peace/comfort that I had gotten in Your arms
Maine Dhunda Bahut Par... Phir Na Mila...
I searched for it a lot, but I didn't find it any place else

Duniya Chhoona Chaahe Mujhko Yun
The world wants to touch me in such a way
Jaise Unki Saari Ki Saari Main
As if I completely belong to them
Duniya Dekhe Roop Mera
The world just looks at my beauty
Koi Na Jaane Bechari Main...
They don't know how troubled I am

Haaye Tooti Saari Ki Saari Main
I'm completely broken
Tere Ishq Mein Hui Aawari... Main...
I've become a vagrant/tramp in Your love
Haaye Tooti Saari Ki Saari Main...
I'm completely broken
Tere Ishq Mein Hui Aawari... Main...
I've become a vagrant in Your love

Koi Shaam Bulaaye
Some call me in the evening
Koi Daam Lagaaye
Others put a price on me
Main Bhi Upar Se Hansti...
I smile from the outside
Par Andar Se Haaye...
But I am shocked/saddened by this from inside

Kyun Dard Chuppaye Baithi Hai...
Why are You hiding Your pain?
Kyun Tu Mujhse Kehti Hai
Why are You telling me about this?
Main Toh Khud Hi Bikhra Hua...
As I'm broken myself

Haaye Andar Andar Se Toota Main...
I'm broken from inside
Tere Ishq Mein Khud Hi Se Rootha... Main...
Being in Your love, I'm upset with myself
Haaye Andar Andar Se Toota Main...
I'm broken from inside
Tere Ishq Mein Khud Hi Se Rootha... Main...
Being in Your love, I'm upset with myself

Main Jee Bharke Ro Loon
Let me cry to my heart's content
Teri Baahon Mein So Loon
Let me sleep in Your arms
Aa Phir Se Mujhe Mil
Come and meet me again
Main Tujhse Yeh Bolun
Let me tell You this
Tu Anmol Thi...
You were unique
Pal Pal Bolti Thi...
You used to speak all the time
Aisi Chup Tu Laga Ke Gayi
But now You've become so silent
Saari Khushiyaan Kha Ke Gayi...
You've taken away all the happiness

Haaye Andar Andar Se Toota Main...
I'm broken from inside
Tere Ishq Mein Khud Hi Se Rootha... Main...
Being in Your love, I'm upset with myself

Haaye Teri Hoon Saari Ki Saari Main Ho...
I'm completely Yours
Par Tere Liye Bazaari Main...
But I'm like a courtesan for You

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Fab update... madhu is so broken that she lost all her hope... positivity was her strength but the situation she is facing making her weak... RK and madhu's meeting was such a emotional one...but there are lot of questions as to how RK came into karan's room, how tony's boss agreed to free madhu without demanding any money... ur last line made me think there is something big is waiting for us and i dont dare to guess... otherwise i will end up guessing something stupid like last time😆

will wait for ur updates😊

Love all your twists and turns which always surprise me... the way you write and keep the suspense in the story is simply superb, also love you more for giving such brilliant story😊

Thnx for the pm... continue soon pls

Originally posted by: karamukku

Awesome update with full of surprises ... Loved it... finally they met... But, "May be not" at the end was scary... You left us at the peak of curiosity... A bow for Ur writing talent again... Curious to know karan-RK conversation ...Also, I feel you are going to bring back sultan as a golden hearted don as Tonys boss.. Is he going to be a good guy in this story? Nothings wrong in it, but the name itself creating a negative vibe... And most people hate him... So maybe ur thinking to make him goody good... Just thought like that as you are master in giving surprises...

Thanks for the pm. Plz update soon...

Originally posted by: memad

seriously this s last thing I could imagine for madhu to have...NERVOUS BREAKDOWN...omg, reminds me back to ANKAHEE's madhu..