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ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#361

Oh madhu... she still didnt realize she loves Rishabh... u explained her turmoil, pain, her helplessness and her will to escape from that hell... hate everyone at the party...

I was sure RK will find her and come to rescue... i feel tony,his boss and karan cant do anything if RK takes madhu... coz tony was supposed to take madhu in the evening as per the contract but he took her early... may be RK can argue and threaten him for breach of contract... i know am thinking too much.. you might hav planned something else... but cant help with ur stories... it is so interesting that i keep thinking😊

Fab update... already started counting hours for ur next update... thnx for the pm😊

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#362

Heart wrenching update, could feel Madhu's turmoil, the way she was feeling as if she is a piece of meat which everybody wants. You have explained her pain excellently.

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samidsamid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#363

aws updt...u hd written mmadhus emotion so well...its so unbearbl 4 hr to remain in that world...still she is ttrying to act othrwise...finally rk come...thnk god...

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#364

I hope R.K is really come to the party to save Madhu and she is not day dreaming.

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Rksuperstar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#365

Wow, what a heart wrenching update. My poor madhu😭 .Rk please please safe and secure ur madhu. Thanks for pm me.

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

I hope Karan Mathur does not create any problems for them. Want Rishbala to be together,

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Teekay, Continue soon, waiting for the next update.

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Kawan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#368

awesome update...

loved it...

Madhu POV...
her helplessness...
she made a plan to escape with manav...

attend the party with her new client...
and saw RK there...

waiting for their confrontation...

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manna43

@manna43

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Posted: 10 years ago

#369

Brilliant update.Madhu's anguish ,that lusty Karan n GM or everyone in that party.While I am feeling as helpless as madhu but u bring hope at the end. Will Rk rescue madhu ,want to know as soon as possible.

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jalebi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#370

Nice update...but u shldnt have stopped there... I was praying to see rishab & he came but u ended the update... So a tug of war btn rishab & karan for madhu huh?? Lol... I wish karan is some good friend of rishab & he lets madhu go with him without creating any scene & also assuring that he didnt touch her too...Lol...i m expecting too much i know but what to do my little heart is not able to take anymore pain...all it wants to see is rishbala happy... Lol...

If u wanna make karan a villain then do dear but no sultan...he is so scary... I dont want karan to seek help from sultan...then rishab has to face double trouble...

Pls...pls...update next part soon... I know its gonna be damn interesting as rk has arrive to protect what is his...

Thanks for d pm dear...