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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

At laast... !! RK back to his form...
One bold and dominant Madhu was needed to shake him.out of his dilemma.. and be selfish for himself and for Madhu..
Okay.. so.. u have guts.. you have guts teekay to write all what you wrote.. I applaud you on that.. congrats.. I can understand how cheesy it can getto write it and how more cheesy it can feel to post it.. but then you did it girl..
No i didnt find it vulgar but I was crying for them who wanted to get every possible feeling in every possible millisecond so they could cherish it all their life... Every night when Madhu will have to be with another man.. so she can close her eyes and let the pain subside beneath the memories of this night and whenever Rishabh would be weeping alone in the night he would be able to cherish each memory..
But anyways that wont happen now.. bcz RK has got into his form and wont let Madhu suffer.. I hope so.. plzzz don't make this story anymore realistic and give us a happy ending... Dont leet Madhu go back to that hell


Ohho. Happy ending you will get. At the end, ok.
Story has to be realistic because thats the only way I know how to write.
But RK in his form is good and entertaining and un-miserable, which is what you want, I think😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: silverfire

I knew it! I knew it! Wow... Rishabh has realised at last. He will not let her go now...

One word for the update. RISHABALA😳
Beware destiny, Rishabh is coming!
Feeling very light after reading this update.
Thanks a lot!


You're welcome.😳

I promise your lightness won't disappear in chapter 26!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anish17

wow wow wat a fantastic update dear👏

no words to express my feelings im sooo happy wen rk said i love you 😳
pls pls update next part soon
thanks for the pm
btw congrats for ur goldie promotion


Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

Happy women's day dear...

I saw ur color have changed...congrats for ur goldie promotion... Keep dazzling d forum with ur wonderful stories dear...

Oh my! What an update yaar?? It was just awesome... I loved it...loved every bit of d update... Their love making clearly shows their pain...longing...helplessness...compasion...desire & ...their true LOVE...

finally rk realised the strong feeling he have for madhu is nothing but love...phew!! Now he wont let any harm touch her...he will protect her...waiting eagerly for next update to know how he will tackle d situation?
Thanks for d pm dear...

Good thing at least for once you didn't cry. Your mommy would have beat me up for making you cry all the time😉

He will handle the situation. Trust me I used my brain a lot.😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: stay_on_waves

sorry for not commenting on last 3 parts well I m commenting for them now
for Part 23 A & B
U have penned RKs side of story well its amusing me that RK is suffering for others welfare and Madhu for his own brother, u know its one thing to be helpless being a puny and a total other thing to be helpless being a powerful one.
for Part 24
I felt glade that somehow Madhu is aware of the fact that RK is also helpless like her. They both are showing themselves indifferent so that the other one can face the situation more bravely. Their convo at pool was heart touching...
USKI AANKHON KO KABHI GHOR SE DEKHA HAI FARAZ
RONY WALON KI TARAH JAGNY WALON JAISI
for Part 25
Their lovemaking was passionate but more painful. I cried for them both and then RKs confession made me smile. I am hopeful for Madhu and joyous for both of them. Now that RK is adamant I know he will definitely find a way.
for ALL
u have such power over words dear that I feel like I have witnessed these characters and story myself. great work. keep it up and haan congratz for new thread... loving this story


Thanks for those lines. So beautiful!

I tried so hard for passion, but I think I only write pain 😭
anyway glad to know you're enjoying the story and thank you for your words!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anntempleton

Amazing update. Hmm..Rk realized he loves Madhu. N doesn't want to loose her.
Just hoping that destiny doesn't play dirty with them.
Reading the update it felt as goodbye, a romantic night which will be followed by heartbreaks and tears. I so hope I m wrong.
Lastly once again great update n thank you for pm. Can't wait for next part :)


Destiny is usually not kind in my stories, but here...umm..it's already been terrible for the to of them for no fault!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: noiseygirl

SO rishab did it ...It was fanntastic ...thanks god m not under age taru :P
now what will RK do to save her

I am glad you're of age too, dear😛
You have to read the next chapter to know!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nanor

the update was incredibly beautiful..finally he realised how much he loves her...that intensity of his realization shook me to the core... and i am excited to see that rishabh who is not going to give up on her, and accept defeat but will fight back against every such person who will come between him and her... thanks for this wonderful update👏


Thank you. The realization had to be special...it was important for me that RK fall in love with madhu for nothing more than who she is. Not pity, not protectiveness. It had to be much more fundamental than that. They're true soulmates, despite the pain that binds them.
That's the most important reason why I did not have RK get to know a lot of details about Madhu's past until now. He had to love her, truly, first.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rdave1

Well I must say I definitely wasn't expecting that after how Chapter 24 ended. I will get this out of the way and say sex was hot but that really didn't do much for me. I got so caught up int he emotions behind their actions during sex that I wasn't paying attention to the act itself. There was so much pain and heart break in their actions especially Madhu's. She was trying to take in every ounce of happiness this one last time to remember for the rest of her life. Madhu initiating it and then taking charge and the tears just made Rishabh realize why he couldn't let her go. Now the boy needs to get to work the clock is ticking. I just hope Madhu doesn't disappear early to prevent having RK hand her over to Tony in the end.

Brilliant job. I feel I'm rambling because I was stunned into silence after reading the chapter but now I feel hopeful that there is a light at the end of this long and dark tunnel.

Btw I forgot to say, I love your rambling. It's more honest 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

Ohh My..yes yes yes..RK is back to fight for his Madhu...woww woww...that's incredible...

oke, now coming for the update,for the first time ever I felt so emotional for a love confession through souls and the way u described aaah...i am speechless...

and RK is now determined but will madhu accept his love, coz though her mind is screaming not to leave RIshabh but her emotional imbalances will make her to...go against to it...

God!!!..i am just super curious sweety...love you for this ..muah👏

😃
I love your curiosity.

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