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What an update👏

sorry for not commenting on last 3 parts well I m commenting for them now
for Part 23 A & B
U have penned RKs side of story well its amusing me that RK is suffering for others welfare and Madhu for his own brother, u know its one thing to be helpless being a puny and a total other thing to be helpless being a powerful one.
for Part 24
I felt glade that somehow Madhu is aware of the fact that RK is also helpless like her. They both are showing themselves indifferent so that the other one can face the situation more bravely. Their convo at pool was heart touching...
USKI AANKHON KO KABHI GHOR SE DEKHA HAI FARAZ
RONY WALON KI TARAH JAGNY WALON JAISI
for Part 25
Their lovemaking was passionate but more painful. I cried for them both and then RKs confession made me smile. I am hopeful for Madhu and joyous for both of them. Now that RK is adamant I know he will definitely find a way.
for ALL
u have such power over words dear that I feel like I have witnessed these characters and story myself. great work. keep it up and haan congratz for new thread... loving this story

Awesome update...loved the way rishab confessed his love for her :)

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Excellent update teekay ⭐️

First of all I was not expecting a hot update from u, but as you said that was much needed in this situation. Let me tell you the update was quite steamy and you wrote it beautifully with out even a pinch of vulgarity. The update starts from the pool side where Madhu sits and Rishab went back to his room. Madhu took initiative this time and Rk gave in. I felt sorry for both of them. Rishab for the first time felt like he is wanted.. I can clearly understand his situation. He holds himself responsible for Madhu's miseries. But I am not agreeing with him, his lawyer was right. He cant save everbody ,he is not god. Finally he came to a conclusion that he loves Madhu. He is no more confused, he dont want to let her go, he dont want her to be touched by other man.. I hope its not too late.

My Madhu, sweet little madhu. I dont know whats going on in her little brain. Her bold avtar with RK scared me. She seemed determined, she dont want to be anyone's burden or obligation. I felt like she made peace with the fact of her life and which leads to her bold actions. Now I think Rk will ask Madhu to stay back. But I have a feeling that Madhu will refuse to stay with him. She will go back to tony and then to the next client.

I am really sorry teekay, you gave a positive update but still I am hoping for the worst. Pls dont hate me for saying this, but I think Madhu have to go back . Her staying with him may put him in danger so she have to go bac to that hell only to be saved by him later.

Next part jaldi dena cant wait to read. Curiosity killing me..

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Beautiful... I never cried for any of your chapters but while reading this I felt like crying not because it is emotional but it is simply beautiful... for me first time they made love which is so pure and filled with love only love...

Madhu wanted to be herself one last time and show her love to Rishabh before she became mitasha... that was so heartbreaking...

Loved Rishabh's inner thoughts about madhu and finally realization...at the end of the update I was smiling reading his confession and determination to protect her... determined to fight with the destiny... loved the update to the core...

About your writing... its fab, marvelous, superb... actually falling short of words to praise you...😊

Eagerly waiting for the next part... thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: shriyakadge

Read ur warning and ignored the chapter :/ My exms r coming up in some 8 days :/ so listened to u n didnt read it :P I m going to make sure tht after i finish my exms, reading the left out updates will b the first task i will do :P

Originally posted by: Kawan

for the first time Madhudid what her heart wanted...
leaving all her fears and truths...
just drowned herself in rk's love...
want to absorve all the love for the rest of life...


and that moment RK realized that their nothing without Madhu...
vowed to protect her no matter what...

wonderful update..
loved it...
one of the bested update... :)))))

Originally posted by: coolashu

Wow...awesome update :) the internal battle within him as to what the heart wants to what the mind thinks was amazing before Madhu came into the room. The love making was written with so much passion... simply loved it. Then his realization that she was his soul mate was so well written that I am smiling like an idiot reading the last part. 'His soul knew", "I love you Madhu, Not just one time. Every time. Forever" and 'If destiny wanted to separate them now, she would have to play dirty' - my favorite lines. After long time, it feels that everything is hopefully going to be right :) :)