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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
I have read ur os twice..its so well-written.specially the ending was so comforting. At last they consumate their marriage and made love..the confession brought tears on my eyes. How they were repeatedly saying ILU to each other...just to make believe their hard time is over.. :) Lovely and beautiful..without any unnecessary drama. U hv just made it so real. That's the most fascinating thing about this OS..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

U r right . Alot is unsaid / ANKAHEE frm RK's side which i guess everybody wants to know 😊
sorry , im going against ur view . But , was his anger bigger than his love for madhu ?
Imean after getting to knw abt such big truth why didnt he ever tried to confront madhu . He knew madhu nvr cheated on him or betrayed him. He knew her love was so pure, true n selfless. He knew she sacrificed her love gfor her sister n still loved him thyen why didnt he ever tried to talk to her . Two n half years is a long time period. He cud have.
I still think he nvr ever loved her truly like she loved him. He moved on easily widout trying to know her truth. He cud hv blackmailed madhu emotionally by pretending to attempt suicide n im sure madhu wud hav disclosed d truth. I mean there r so many ways.
May b u r true abt trish .
But sorry dear, i still hate RK in this story .😛


Fair enough. I suppose I just love him too much and I m biased towards him. I don't know what he thought and believed. I can't even imagine what c he went though when he figured out what must have happened all. those years ago. He had been married to Trish for years and was aware she knew even less than him. He. can't say anything to her, or even to Madhu at that. point because there's no point.
Until he ends up. being married to Madhu and realizes she still loves him. and didn't move on in all these years. I would be crazy imagining what the girl expects. Nobody forced her to do what. she did. Her mahaan ness had terrible consequence. And yet she acts like the victim suffering silently.

Then again, I am biased. So you should stick to your view :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aan-rish

You again made me cry Teekay 😭


This is such an emotional story. For a change here I am with RK. According to me both Madhu and Trishna were at fault. They both were selfish. Trishna because she fall in love with her best friend with out his knowledge. And when she came to know about his liking for another girl, she tried to commit suicide. I find that act extremely selfish. So what if Rishab loved someone, he did not ask her to love him. It was her who fall in love not him. she actually forced herself in to his life by this cheap suicide trick. I hate Trishna😡

And Madhu, ya..she is mahaan. What ever..what have she done? She broke someone's heart who loved her like anything. Sacrificing love is not a crime, infact you need to love someone so much to let them go. But not moving on in your life after this so called sacrifice is a crime. Madhu gave up her love for Trishna but she did not move on.What she did is crying and burning everyday over what she lost. According to me she is at fault. She should have told Trishna about her love. May be things would have been different.

Rishab, the only realistic sane character in this story. He loved a women, but she broke his heart. And forced him to Trishna, his best friend. He married her and eventually started to love her like a normal human being. They even have a baby together. He did a good thing by forgetting his lost love and moved on in his life.

Teekay I have a request to make. You always write stories from Madhu's point of view. May be because you can connect more to her. But I really want to know how Rishab love and emotions works.. I want you to write a story from Rishab's POV. I want to feel his love also.. plus keep writing stuff like "Mein shaayar to nahi"..




Sorry :(

I just wrote it out on impulse without thinking through. Sorry want meant to make people cry.

I m with RK but I don't hate Trish because she didn't commit suicide to show anyone or to black mail RK directly. RK didn't even know about it and the only person who did was Madhu who according to Trish had no impact whatsoever on RK s decision. and anything that happened in the future.

I will think about writing a story exclusively from RK s POV next time I have a story to tell. In ilzaam though I tried to keep it balanced and. give a lot of RK pov.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: teekay


Fair enough. I suppose I just love him too much and I m biased towards him. I don't know what he thought and believed. I can't even imagine what c he went though when he figured out what must have happened all. those years ago. He had been married to Trish for years and was aware she knew even less than him. He. can't say anything to her, or even to Madhu at that. point because there's no point.
Until he ends up. being married to Madhu and realizes she still loves him. and didn't move on in all these years. I would be crazy imagining what the girl expects. Nobody forced her to do what. she did. Her mahaan ness had terrible consequence. And yet she acts like the victim suffering silently.

Then again, I am biased. So you should stick to your view :)

yes, her mahaanness had terrible consequences but only for her not for RK n trish .
Bcz it was she who lost her everything for her only sister's happiness n love .
RK n trish had a blissful married life ,a child n RK even fell in love wid trish too .
Hadnt trish died, he wud hav been living wid her happily n wud hav nvr confronted madhu even after knowing d truth bcz it meant nothing to him at dat time bcz he was happy wid his wife n child . ]😊
so, madhu's mahaanness of saving her sister n giving her love of her life by destroying her own love n life ruined only her life but proved to b good for trish n RK .
May b for a lil time RK was sad n hurt bcz of her betrayal but aftersometime [ i guess with in a year ] he forgot her n married trish n fell in love wid her too n had a baby wid her . 😳
And i completely disagree dat she acts like a victim suffering silently .
she is d only person who suffered most n lost everything bcz of her own mahaanness which she did to save her only sister n give her happiness n love of her life even if it destroyed her own love n life .
yes , nobody told her to do dat . But , she knew her sis wud die widout RK so she sacrificed her own love . May b she knew RK 's love was not true😭 .May b she knew dat he wud forget her n wud fall in love wid trish too😉 n dats wat hppnd😳
madhu shudnt hav done dat . she shud hav told trish everything n let her die.😛
Bcz come wat may ! if sumthing is made for us n belongs to us only then one day it wud definitely come to us only .😊
Hey ! plz dnt get angry. Its jus my pov n i jus cudnt like RK here .
I mean he got everything . He didnt even try to knw d truth n even after knowing truth he didnt even confront madhu n still he was angry ..For wat man!😕
I cudnt understand why was he so much angry wid her. Her mahaanness gave him trish who loved him so much n he too loved her . Her mahaanness gave him a child n a happy married life n family .
Its not like after her betrayal he was a lonely hurt man crying in her memories n wandering here n there like a MAJNOO IN HER LOVE FOR YEARS . so why was he so much angry wid her only ?
why was nt he angry wid himself fr not understanding her properly n trying to know d truth n jus getting married to her elder sis.
Why didnt or why cudnt he wait for madhu ? why cud nt he deny trish's proposal .
His love fr madhu was true n deep , right . Wasnt it? so why he got married to trish jus within a year n moved on easily n now he was angry wid madhu. Like seriously 😕 as if trish was forced on him n she forced herself on him n got pregnant .
okay ! Im fine now 😆uff! such a long essay i hv wrttn.😆😆😆 SORRY
Edited by GOODLUCKANGEL - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Nice os😊 am not sure RK ' love for madhu was true... madhu was too emotional and in pain to confront and share her dilemma to both of her loved ones... you have written it in different way... loved it😊 keep writing😊
Edited by ashitha235 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@GUDLUCKANGEL - 😆 you are hell angry on Rishab right? I can understand your feelings. But fortunately I am not angry with him this time. According to me he act like a normal human being. But I am angry at Madhu for her stupid Mahanta😡. And I hate Trishna for no reason. I agree with u Madhu should have told the truth to her before death. She was too dumb to notice what was happening between her best friend and sister. I hate her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aan-rish

@GUDLUCKANGEL - 😆 you are hell angry on Rishab right? I can understand your feelings. But fortunately I am not angry with him this time. According to me he act like a normal human being. But I am angry at Madhu for her stupid Mahanta😡. And I hate Trishna for no reason. I agree with u Madhu should have told the truth to her before death. She was too dumb to notice what was happening between her best friend and sister. I hate her.

yes, im hell angry on rishabh AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
u can estimate my anger by seeing no of emoticons 😆😆😆😆😆😆
yes even i hate madhu's mahaanta. I t ruined her love n life .she shud hav told trish everything n let her die 😆😆😆
Abt trish , why wont i hate her . stupid melodrama queen . she was madhu's elder sis n cudnt even realise n see hw sad n gloomy madhu had become.
And rishabh . wow!
Fell in love twice n dat too wid her elder sis. Did all d PDA's infront of madhu.
Got married n had a baby wid trish which im sure wasnt result of any drug or forced one 😛😆
Didnt even try to knw d truth behind her changed behaviour n even after knowing d truth didnt ever tried to confront madhu .
And hero was hell angry wid poor girl. For what.😕Angry
His anger wud hav been genuine n justified only if he too wud hav ruined his life like madhu jus bcz of her terrible decision . If he too wud hav been in love wid madhu till now . If he too wud have been crying in her memories till now . But no he was a happily married man who loved his wife n had a child too . He got a proposal which he accep[ted n moved on . He forgot her n fell in love wid her sis. Then why d hell was he so much angry wid her . He shud hav been angry wid himself for not trying eneough to knw d truth n for not fighting for his love.
may b he nvr loved madhu truly .AngryAngryAngryAngry Trust me i cudnt believe it when he said ILU to madhu in d end . 😆
omg ! my hatred for this rk is increasing .😲😆😆😆
Edited by GOODLUCKANGEL - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't know if I should be happy that people feel so strongly about the characters of a silly is I just wrote on impulse. Or I should be sad that people hate my beloved characters with so much passion.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: teekay

I don't know if I should be happy that people feel so strongly about the characters of a silly is I just wrote on impulse. Or I should be sad that people hate my beloved characters with so much passion.


feel happy dear.
u really makes us mad as hell, make us cry buckets & Smile a bit Lol through ur stories.
we r taking our frustrations on ur charaters just bcos we r so connected to them & U make us love them & Hate them a lot!! Its ur success, ur writing makes us feel d true emotions...so be proud & Happy that u could make ur readers love, hate, cry, angry all at once!!

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