Rishbala SS: Shadows of the Past (Chapter 7, Pg. 38) NEW 8-13-15

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wowooo
how do u know that I want to read something like this????
thanks dear
super going
plz plz update soon

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Swati

@PRATHA1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Congrats for the new story👏
Awesome start!
Madhu's feelings are nicely described! RK knows his biwi very well, but pretend to unaware of her feelings!
Waiting for the next update! Please pm me!

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susan7

@susan7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

amazing update Tainar👏

continue soon plz

thanx 4 d pm

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lucygrey21

@lucygrey21

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

nice start.
I love it.
waiting for next part.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Beautifully written, the inner turmoil, continue soon.

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Amazing start. Loved it.

i felt like i got my right kameena back throught ur story dear.

in serial we have seen madhu fighting for her baby but here she aborted her baby as rk wished & This is so nice to see the other side of d story.

rk is well aware of her turmoil & Trying hard to bring her back in his own way...with his devil may care attitude..

looking forward to read more. Pls update soon dear.

thanks.

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Amazing and wonderful part. Madhu's emotions are etched very beautifully... very good writing, beautifully written...

hope to see RK really understanding his biwi and bringing her back emotionally too..

loved it... continue soon😊

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

WOW!! unique concept...beautifully written...loved it

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Mayajh

@Mayajh

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Beautiful start Tainar!!
Emotinal chapter one, Felt bad for both Madhu n RK too..

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Brilliant! Simply brilliant.

You conveyed Madhu's emotions so well. She is broken from the inside but the truth is, she will always put RK first.

And I cannot even hate RK. He does know there is distance between the two and he is picking up on her emotions. I also sense guilt from him too.

But RK hides it deep and Madhu cannot even see it.

RK has a lot of work ahead of him.

I am liking this story a lot. I hated the way the show dealt with the story line. But your version is staying true to the characters we know and love.

Good luck!

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