Rishbala SS: Shadows of the Past (Chapter 7, Pg. 38) NEW 8-13-15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Beautifully written, the inner turmoil, continue soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: rima4ever
continue soon

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#43

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi
Great start.
Awesome writing.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: madhurish
Amazing start. Loved it.
i felt like i got my right kameena back throught ur story dear.
in serial we have seen madhu fighting for her baby but here she aborted her baby as rk wished & This is so nice to see the other side of d story.
rk is well aware of her turmoil & Trying hard to bring her back in his own way...with his devil may care attitude..
looking forward to read more. Pls update soon dear.
thanks.

Thank you! I do try to give both characters equal amount of love and attention and represent their characters as closely to the original, with my own interpretation of course. 😃 Glad you like the story so far and hope I won't disappoint!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: shalu1786
Nice

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ashitha235
Amazing and wonderful part. Madhu's emotions are etched very beautifully... very good writing, beautifully written...
hope to see RK really understanding his biwi and bringing her back emotionally too..
loved it... continue soon😊

Thank you! RK just needs to listen to his heart and use his brain. Madhu is in pain but she can't keep it bottled up either. Not fair to either of them. Hopefully soon I will knock some sense into both. Thanks for reading! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
Brilliant! Simply brilliant.

You conveyed Madhu's emotions so well. She is broken from the inside but the truth is, she will always put RK first.

And I cannot even hate RK. He does know there is distance between the two and he is picking up on her emotions. I also sense guilt from him too.

But RK hides it deep and Madhu cannot even see it.

RK has a lot of work ahead of him.

I am liking this story a lot. I hated the way the show dealt with the story line. But your version is staying true to the characters we know and love.

Good luck!

They both have a lot of work ahead of them. Both must learn to communicate effectively and work through their issues. Thanks for reading!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: punam2712
CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
VERY WELL WRITTEN
YOU CONVEYED ALL OF MADHU'S PAIN, ANGUISH AND GUILT AND HER RESENTMENT AT RK FOR BEING SO SELF OBSESSED

EVEN RK IS VERY HUMANE
HE KNOWS THERE IS A DISTANCE BETWEEN THEM BUT DOESNT KNOW HOW TO BRIDGE IT
HE TRIES TO BE NORMAL BUT MADHU TAKES IT AS BEING UNCARING

They are both hurt and dealing with pain in their own way and unfortunately ended up erecting a wall between each other. They have a lot to learn and mostly how to communicate effectively. That's a key ingredient for a happy, successful marriage...or so I am told. 😆 Thanks for reading!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Desire6
Amazing concept Tainu...nd all emotions were penned so beautifully...cant wait to read next part.of it...

cont soon..
congo on new story..
waitin
waitin

Thank you dearest!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Selvakumari
Please come back .its been a month nice story we the readers are waiting to experience the next part of the feelings of rk Madhu 😭

Aww! I haven't even realized that it's been a month already. Fear not...I am working diligently on the next chapter. 😳