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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Roch-

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I just realized that I'm too late to comment on your story! But better later than never 😆 Congratulations on your first story 🤗 It doesn't seem like it's your first story, with the way you have pen downed it like an experienced writer 😳 Loved the plot.

RK was searching for a job & Malik offered him to help him to plan the birthday of his only daughter Madhu. The past story was heart wrenching 😭 Madhu's mom died after giving birth to her. Madhu used to think that she is responsible for her mom's death after overhearing the conversation between her father & her aunt 🤔 Trishna introduced Madhu to RK & both of them became friends. Madhu came to see RK's dad in the hospital & she was about to slip! RK held her on time 😳 OMG I just imagined that unique RK pose while reading those lines

Finally the much awaited birthday came & RK had done is job perfectly 👍🏼 Finally Madhu realized that she was wrong. The dad & daughter re-united ❤️ It was emotional. RK confessed his feelings for Madhu Madhu too loves him. Malik blessed both of them 😳 He proposed her & she accepted. Aww they hugged ❤️ They became one 😳 & RK fulfilled her dream of starting a career in arts & crafts. He surprised her by gifting her a design studio, how sweet of him ❤️ & they lived happy ever after! What a perfect story! 👏


Please please I've got a request! I want an epilogue 😳 will you be able to post? I would be much grateful if you could do

Thanks a lot for sending my the link & letting me to read this awesome piece of writing! 🤗 Keep on writing more 😳

Thanks so much dear Roch for your wishes and for the feedback.🤗
So happy that you loved it.😃
You aren't late as you were not there in the forum that time.😉
Its my pleasure dear,so glad you came and read,
thanks s lot for appreciation and encouragement.😳
About epilogue,surely i 'll think about it,and it would be my pleasure to fulfill your request,
and i 'll try my best.😳
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks so much everyone for the awesome response to this OS,🤗thanks,😳 and now i am here again with its epilouge,😳 though i have not planned any epilouge to this OS😊 but Roch my dear friend wanted an epilogue,😃so here is the epilogue,thanks a lot Roch, coz of you i am posting this and also thanks a lot Sanjh for all your support,love you both ❤️my dear friends..🤗




Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Five years ...five years before Rk -Madhu got married ,time ran so fastly,now they have a son Rahul too as a symbol of their love,

life can't be more blissful than this,a loving ,caring,supportive and perfect hubby,a cute lil kid ,so supportive in laws,

Madhu was thinking today,on a beautiful Sunday morning and it was more beautiful for Madhu as Rk was coming home after four months, he has gone abroad for a business related trip.



Madhu managed everything so well and also her work too,she has one more exhibition in the coming month so she was working on that too,but she was happy that now Rk will also attend that as its postponed now to the date when Rk will also be there,she missed him so much and waiting eagerly for him to come.

Madhu was searching something in the cupboard, suddenly one of Rahul's toy fell on floor,seeing that...

Madhu remembered about their past events of life,

when she was expecting baby and Rk helped her in all ways,he not only took care of her but also did everything that can give her relief,lessen her burden,

aww he was so careful about her,even her small small need,he had taken care off,but he was scared too,as he didn't wanted ,what happened with Madhu,will repeat again,as she lost her mother ,

when she took birth,Madhu all the time tried to convince her ,not to worry as everything is normal but he didn't want to take any chance,and when Rahul came in this world,he was on cloud nine,Madhu was all right but still he did extra care,

she couldn't forget those beautiful moments when they firstly caressed and kissed their new born baby, lovely days and moments.

Rk was in flight but was thinking about Madhu and Rahul,of course mom and dad too,but he was thinking the same,the time when Madhu was expecting,how scared he was that everything should go perfect and he was filled with another kind of joy too at the same time as he was becoming father for the first time,new born Rahul,

Madhu looked more beautiful to him after that,a certain kind of glow was there in her face which made her more beautiful,oh!how much he missed them and why can't this flight go with more speed?he was thinking restlessly.

He landed in India and wanted to go home as soon as possible,Madhu made all dishes of Rk s choice and wanted to surprise him with his fav food.

Rahul came and show Madhu his drawing.

Madhu have a glance and said"Its so good son,keep making more but you haven't ready yet,if dad will come and will see his son not ready to welcome him,than,so go dear."

"Mom you are right, ok I am going to get ready and I have to talk to dad a lot of things and he promised me so many gifts,I'll show him this drawing too."

"Ya sure,be ready and than make drawing,its Sunday so I am not saying anything."

"But mom,I have done my homework why you'll say anything?"

He said so cutely that Madhu smiled and hugged him and kissed him too,he's damn cute child,pampered a lot by everyone,but he's so smart and intelligent,Rk always said that painter son of painter mom.

They were so happy in their world.

Rahul is such a sweet boy with traces of both father and Mother.


Finally, the time came and Rk is back ...to his home sweet home...oh! What a feeling when you are in home,its great,he was warmly welcomed, but before giving anyone much chance,

Rahul almost jumped to come up in Rk's arms, he hugged him tightly and put several kisses on his face,and Rahul also kissed him back,put his arms around his neck and cutely asked,

"Dad, missed you so much,you know I have learn so many things..."


He started telling about what he did and all,and seeing his excitement Rk was so happy,

Rk was so impressed to see his drawings,he was so talented and he felt a proud father.

He gave him his gifts,once he got his gifts,he was busy in opening them,kids will be kids,he thought.

Rk was talking to his parents and also in between Madhu and Rk were talking through eyes, and when she went to her room to took out clothes for Rk,as he has need to fresh up,she just opened cupboard, and suddenly she felt Rishabh's arms around her waist,hugging her tightly,


after so long she felt his touch and now she couldn't control any more and she turned and hugged him tightly, they were craving to meet each other,both were finding peace and love in each other company... Madhu hold Rk more tightly...Rk too was caressing her face, her hair,admiring her lovely wife,whom he missed so much and Madhu too stared Rk and again buried her face in his chest,feeling so secure in his arms.


They stood for few min like that and than Rk felt his shirt wet with Madhu's tears, he cupped her face and and tears of happiness were in her eyes,he said,

"Hey Madhu,

don't be so emotional,now I came na ,I know you missed me and do you how much I missed you my darling? Its just that I am controlling myself."

"Rk ...

"Rk I also know that,we missed each other badly ,and now I don't want you to go anywhere,it sounds kiddish,I know you have so many works but..."

"Madhu .no its not kiddish, I know and I also don't want any more distance, but see this trip wasn't that bad,after this distance our love increased only and we value each other more isn'it?"

"Ya but this distance was killing me now,I have never been away from you so long after our marriage."

"Ok Madhu, and ya I understand,but it was so imp so I had to go,but now I came na so chill,I will compensate for every min,haan...you will say than now stop it Rk...in your usual tone..."He smiled and winked at her,Madhu blushed,"Rk ..."

Rk kissed her forhead and he so tempted to kiss her but when he was just about to kiss her... .heard voice of Radha that some call is there for Rk.

"Oh! no,have to go now but will see you later my love."

Giving her a flying kiss.Madhu catch the flying kiss and smiled.

After having tea ,Rahul asked whether Rk would take him to picnic,as Rk promised him on phone that when he will come,they will go for a picnic, so now he was insisting to go.

How could Rk refused to go so they decided to go to an amusement park.

His parents said ,they will go some other day,Rk,Madhu ,Rahul should enjoy this time.

It was so nice feeling to be with your family,Rk was thinking,Madhu was also so happy and Rahul,he was jumping with joy,he made Rk stopped the car few times and asked for different things ,for some balloons, one time he saw a candyfloss vendor and asked for that,

One time he wanted to click snaps of a herd going on the road,and after enjoying a lot ,

in the middle of the way he slept as he was tired now and also he woke up early in the morning as his dad was coming,

"Rk, Rahul slept, you know he woke up so early today for you."

"Aww my dear son woke up early for me,he is so cute."

Madhu nodded in yes.

"Yes. he is so cutieee,Rk ,that's good ,now he will be fresh when we reach the park."

"Madhu,you look damn gorgeous in this saree."

"I know you love Red so much so I wore it today." Madhu said smiling.

"Ya you look stunning in red always,well red or no red ,I love you in anything."

"Rk...don't drool over me,drive carefully,let me have the pleasure to drool over you this time,my honey." Madhu said punching him playfully and also she cupped and caressed his face.

"Ok Ma'am do what you want, my turn will also came,and I will see you later as while driving nothing much possible for me, but still for now ,I will not leave this chance."

He kissed her quickly, without giving time to Madhu to respond,and said this line naughtily which made Madhu blush more.

They enjoyed a lot,rides,swings,rain dance,had so much fun there,Rahul was super happy and see him happy they were super happy.

Rk thought to take some snaps of three of them so he asked some person there to click snap for them and he took some snaps too.





"Rahul now stand in between us and mom and I will give you a kiss and than uncle will took snap ok."

"Ok dad."

He did the same and when snap was about to be clicked,just before that Rahul ran from there,and as Madhu and Rk was giving him kiss so they remained in such position and snap clicked too,they saw each other and than the person clicking snap,and felt embarrassed, and they could see the person smiling but than they settled themselves and also smiled and said,

"Uff these kids,they can do wonders,thanks so much for clicking snaps sir."

That person went away and they couldn't control and laughed whole heartedly,and when they saw the snap in their camera,they laughed more.


They saw Rahul was asking something from a vendor there.

"Rk how come you have such ideas?"

"Madhu I didn't know that Rahul will ran away like that,but in a way it was good na,but I missed the chance."



"What...miss the chance..."

Rahul came with a before Madhu could say anything.


"Dad-mom, pls I want to take that toy,i love that."

"Ok son,let's go but why you ran away like that?"

"Dad I saw that toy and ran away ,its of my fav cartoon na,oh sorry dad the snap is spoiled na."

"Don't say sorry son,we will click it again."

They brought his fav toy and headed over to eat something. All in all it was an awesome day out and they enjoyed a lot.

Madhu has made a separate room for her paintings in house too apart from the studio,where she kept her recently made / and that paintings on which she have to work.

After completing the household work she came to that room to lock that, and she saw Rk standing there, watching her paintings,and to his surprise he saw many sketches and paintings of him ,and also him with Rahul,with family ,with Madhu ,he asked Madhu and she said, when she missed him more ,she made his sketch or painting,it feels as if Rk is near her and she could pacify herself somehow,

Rk was amazed knowing that and he was in other zone for few min,thinking about that Madhu is the perfect parther, she is amazing and so loving and caring, she always encouraged him and supported him.

"Rk ..Rk..what happened?"


"Hmm...nothing Madhu I was just thinking about you."


"I am with you Rk,what are you saying.'


"Oh I forgot see this Madhu,I just couldn't have the chance to give you your gift."

He handed over her a beautiful dress and Madhu was so happy to see her gift,she thanked him and hugged him and again looked at the dress,and now

Rk tempted more to be close to Madhu.

He cupped her face and saw her beautiful eyes filled with love ,and Madhu also was looking into his deep brown eyes,

they shared an intense eyelock and than Madhu hugged him tightly,feeling all the warmth and love of her love and Rk was too feeling the same,

hugging her with equal passion,


Rk lifted her face and started kissing Madhu, she too respond equally and put her arms around his neck and her fingers moving in his hair ,soon they were kissing each other passionately,like they will never going to end this... but...than .they heard voice of Rahul.

"Mom, mom,where are you?"Rahul shouted on top of his lungs,where kids hate to drink milk,Rahul loved milk and didn't slept without drinking milk.

They broke their kiss and saw each other,though they were in no mood to be separated for a min even , yet Madhu settled herself and said,

"Oh! Rk,i forgot to give milk to Rahul."


and was about to go when Rk again hold her hand,and put his face near her ear lobe and said in husky voice,


"Ok so you are going again sweetheart ,leaving me na, than he made a baby face,and he looked so cute ,what about me Madhu?"


Madhu couldn't resist herself and pulled his cheeks and kissed his cheeks too.


"Oh honey,just wait for few min,how can I leave you ? but what to do,let me handle our son first,and than I will come and handle you my darling husband, don't worry this wait will worth it ,I assure you honey."

She winked and went away smiling releasing her from his grip.

Rk also stood there smiling and watching Madhu.

And than his eyes fell on Madhu's painting where she draw him with Rahul and herself,below the painting he saw, she wrote in her beautiful hand writing,"A bit of you,a bit of me,and our bundle of joy...this is what I call my HAPPY FAMILY."Rk smiled and said "Uh ho not your,OURS happy family."




(The above para @ green is written by Sanjhi.❤️)

He also saw below the quote, a line was written more,"A gift for you my life."

Rk picked a brush and added"Loved it and blessed to have you in my life."


Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay! me first 🥳

Aww Deepti! Thank you so much!🤗 Finally you came up with the much awaited epilogue!

Rishbala married & also blessed with a son named Rahul.😃 RK has gone abroad & coming back. Rahul was excited.😆 He started speaking like a machine telling what he did, learned throughout the days his dad was missing. That's so cute. That is exactly how kids behave specially when a person like dad comes home after ages, so many things to be told. 😳The reunion of hubby & wife after a long time. Both of them were craving to be in each other's arms! That was beautifully penned down.👍🏼 They had a nice family time.


Rahul is so smart! he ran away when his daddy is about to kiss. It looked like he is gonna kiss Madhu! 😉 🤣


Loved the last lines. It was awesome Sanjh! 👏


Overall fantastic epilogue Deepti! 👏Loved it to bits.❤️ Keep writing more! 😃
Edited by -Roch- - 10 years ago
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Aww super cute epilogue deepti 😳
Rishbala blessed with a smartband naughty baby boy Rahul ❤️
And their romantic parts are beautiful ☺️❤️
I never knew my sweety ll write this kind of naughty romantic scenes but its so cute and lovely ❤️
Hehe rahul run away and they kissed each other while taking photo 😉😆 rk enjoyed it 😆
Rk is so loving and caring ❤️ madhu and rahul are blessed to have him in their life ❤️
Beautiful epilogue deepti ❤️
Love it ❤️
Loved last part written by sanju 😳❤️
Thanks for giving us an epilogue 🤗
Thanks for the pm dear 😊
Keep writing more stories 😊
Edited by anish17 - 10 years ago
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Superb epilogue and perfect ending to beautiful story..
Loved it..
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb epilogue
rishabala blessed with rahul
rahul is so cute
madhu gifted rk a painting
very well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely
Both r in love and their family is so cute

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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute epilogue. Rk,madhu n rahul made a perfect family. U wrote every part beautifully. Write more stories. Last part is awesome .
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update
loved the epilogue
you write it superbly
thanks for pm deepi dear ❤️

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