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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: rishbalafan9
Very beautiful story dii. ..and the end part is fabulous. ...😊👏
do write more. ..❤️😊

Naina you have read this.😛Thanks so much dear.🤗So happy that you loved it.😃Ya sure,i'll try my best.😳

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rishbalafan9

@rishbalafan9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: RM14
Naina you have read this.😛Thanks so much dear.🤗So happy that you loved it.😃Ya sure,i'll try my best.😳

welcome dii..🤗..
i can sense the super best writer for future in you...😊

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: rishbalafan9

welcome dii..🤗..
i can sense the super best writer for future in you...😊

Dear Naina, ❤️so sweet of you to say this,😳and have faith in me,😊it feels great to have friends like you ⭐️ my dear.🤗 🤗

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Awesome story

malik appointed rk to remove madhu's sadness and rk did it

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: heemasomani
Awesome story
malik appointed rk to remove madhu's sadness and rk did it

Thanks so much Heema.😳

I am so glad that you liked it.😃

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Superb OS !! Nicely written !!
Loved the story of RK and Ms beauty !! Madhu was depressed with the fact that her mother choose her over her life and died the same day after her birth. RK made her come over her gloominess... they love each other chupke chupke and confessed their love in front of Mr Malik .They both got married.
Deepti you are a wonderful writer .loved your style you should write more.
Would love to read...
Thanks for the link... 🤗

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana
Superb OS !! Nicely written !!
Loved the story of RK and Ms beauty !! Madhu was depressed with the fact that her mother choose her over her life and died the same day after her birth. RK made her come over her gloominess... they love each other chupke chupke and confessed their love in front of Mr Malik .They both got married.
Deepti you are a wonderful writer .loved your style you should write more.
Would love to read...
Thanks for the link... 🤗

Thanks so much Nikki.😳

So happy that you read it and loved it.😃

Amazing, you read it yest.itself,its my pleasure to send you link.😛

Thanks for the appreciation dear,❤️ i'll try my best.🤗

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: RM14
Thanks so much Nikki.😳
So happy that you read it and loved it.😃
Amazing, you read it yest.itself,its my pleasure to send you link.😛
Thanks for the appreciation dear,❤️ i'll try my best.🤗

I loved it truly !!
Thanks for giving me link 😊
I am a fast reader...loves to read and ready to read 😆
PM me if you find something interesting ..
Thanks a lot for such a nice read Deepti 😊

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana

I loved it truly !!
Thanks for giving me link 😊
I am a fast reader...loves to read and ready to read 😆
PM me if you find something interesting ..
Thanks a lot for such a nice read Deepti 😊

Welcome,🤗my pleasure dear Nikki. 🤗 😳 Its great that you are just like me,😆ready to read and fast reader,😛i love to read books and crazy reader,in IF i started reading recently but if i found something intresting,surely will pm you dear.😃

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Rochelle

@-Roch-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

*UNRES*

I just realized that I'm too late to comment on your story! But better later than never 😆 Congratulations on your first story 🤗 It doesn't seem like it's your first story, with the way you have pen downed it like an experienced writer 😳 Loved the plot.

RK was searching for a job & Malik offered him to help him to plan the birthday of his only daughter Madhu. The past story was heart wrenching 😭 Madhu's mom died after giving birth to her. Madhu used to think that she is responsible for her mom's death after overhearing the conversation between her father & her aunt 🤔 Trishna introduced Madhu to RK & both of them became friends. Madhu came to see RK's dad in the hospital & she was about to slip! RK held her on time 😳 OMG I just imagined that unique RK pose while reading those lines

Finally the much awaited birthday came & RK had done is job perfectly 👍🏼 Finally Madhu realized that she was wrong. The dad & daughter re-united ❤️ It was emotional. RK confessed his feelings for Madhu Madhu too loves him. Malik blessed both of them 😳 He proposed her & she accepted. Aww they hugged ❤️ They became one 😳 & RK fulfilled her dream of starting a career in arts & crafts. He surprised her by gifting her a design studio, how sweet of him ❤️ & they lived happy ever after! What a perfect story! 👏

Please please I've got a request! I want an epilogue 😳 will you be able to post? I would be much grateful if you could do

Thanks a lot for sending my the link & letting me to read this awesome piece of writing! 🤗 Keep on writing more 😳

Edited by -Roch- - 10 years ago