Rajbala FF: Beintehaa (Part 7 Updated ) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
nice updates
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
I DINT GET ANY LIKES😭😭😭
ITS OK
I'LL DISCONTINUE IT
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE
Sorry for the inconvinience guys i should have known it earlier that no one is interested on RAJBALA i know they arent popular and all but i thought that i will post this ff as there arent much os,ts,ss or ffs about rajbala, and not to mention my bad writting and naration skills thanks you all for bearing with me. 😭


THANK YOU ALL😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34


Part 3




A few hours later RK and madhubala reach a small two storied building. After getting down from the car, RK pulls Madhu towards him by holding her waist, making her crash on his chest. She immediately started blushing. Seeing her blush RK grins and tightens his hold on her."Doll there is a small ritual in our household, When the bride enters her sasural for the first time after marriage she is carried into the house by the husband",says RK .Hearing him Madhu who was pink before turns crimson red.Seeing her reaction RK chuckles and lifts her in his arms. Madhu starts blushing uncontrollably. RK carried her till the main door and tells her,"Doll as much as love to carry you in , I can't do so you have to get down". Madhu's face drops hearing that.Seeing her he quickly tells her that the door is locked and he can't teleport them inside, the door has to be opened. Madhu giggles hearing him.

Once they are in, Both RK and Madhu are shocked the house was full of dust,dirt and spiderwebs. " The house was closed for almost a year maybe that's why it is in such a condition." ,RK says.
Madhu nodes in agreement. " Iam tired now we will clean it tommorow. "But where will we slee...", Madhu bit her tongue,"I didn't mean that I was just asking...".
"sssh I understand its okay. we will sleep err in the terrace". Madhu nods her head in agreement.

After reaching the terrace, RK goes into the store room and comes out with a sleeping bag."I am sorry there is only one,I hope we can share", he says grinning. But Madhu was a bit shocked. RK comes to her and cups her face," Dont worry doll I know that you are not ready for intimacy. I'll wait for you". Madhu smiles hearing him. RK kisses her on her forehead and says " Good night doll".

To be continued...
Edited by farayan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Sorry guys I thought of discontinuing but I couldn't get the story out of my mind...I'll update it in Wednesday night. sorry . pls tell me whether it is good or bad.pls comment...sorry if I sound bossy. 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Firstly happy that Ur continuing the story
The update is short and sweet


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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
thanks for continuing the story. The update is too good this rk too understanding...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
was it april fool . I mean i jus read discontinue n now i saw u hav updated .
But wateva it was we r happy to see dat u continued this story.
Thank u .
update was nice . loved it .👍🏼👏
I luv this raju . 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL


was it april fool . I mean i jus read discontinue n now i saw u hav updated .

But wateva it was we r happy to see dat u continued this story.
Thank u .
update was nice . loved it .👍🏼👏
I luv this raju . 😎



Actually I have discontinued this ff as I felt no one liked rajbala. I continued it again as I couldn't get it off my head. Thanks a lot for commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
read all parts in one go...lovely start...😊

but then why so small updates...bigger one pls next time...😳

BTW ...😳...its my first time on IF that I have even read a Rajbala story...😲...😳...😲... and that tooo three parts consecutively...😳...i am myself shocked...😲.😲😲...but ensure u continue it...😊

plsss continue soon...
Edited by twinklev20 - 10 years ago

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