Rajbala FF: Beintehaa (Part 7 Updated )

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sandy

@farayan

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Posted: 10 years ago

I know the topic and the tittle are well nonsense but i realised there are are not so many Rajbala stories in the forum I thought of the story when the show was in progress.😛😛😛 I know i am a newbie as well as a new writer so please tell me if i should continue or not. Anyways here goes the prologue.⭐️🥱 It begins during the karwachauth day when JM is looking at the moon waiting for her beloved raju to come.(till here it is as it is from the show but with a few major changes which you will come to know as the story progresses)

Madhubala slowly turns her gaze to the corridor and her mouth automatically curved a smile her raju came.He comes to her and says "'MADHUBALA...AHAAN"' and opens her vrath as everyone watches him drumstruck. AK comes out of the shock first when RK chides him.

RK: cant thank you enough bro for hitting me with your truck.

AK: HMM... first you were mad now you are finally behaving like a mad.

RK tightens his wrist but has a smirk in his face, turning to madhu he says "'GO TO YOUR ROOM DOLL I WILL JOIN YOU SOON"' .

MADHU: but...

RK: I SAID GO!!!

madhu quickly rushed to her room thanking her PK for sending back her raju but she felt a little awakend was he her raju she thought.

thats the prologue guys pls tell me weather i should continue or not</font>

PS: THERE IS NOT GOING TO BE ANY VILLAGE TRACK OR ANY OF THOSE CHARECTERS.

Iam going to adress VD as RK not RAJA Becouse i dont like the name😉😉

INDEX

PART 1---THE TWIST IN TALE --- PG.3

PART 2-------THE CONFESSION ---PG. 4

Part 3 ---pg.7

part 4------pg.8

part 5____ pg.9

Part 6------pg.10

Part 7 ------pg.11

Edited by farayan - 10 years ago

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sandy

@farayan

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ainanwer
very nice start

Thanx a ton i was afraid the prologue will turn lame😉

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ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting one... would like to read more...

Continue pls...😊

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sandy

@farayan

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Posted: 10 years ago

I know it is dumb but can you guys suggest a good name for the RK in this story but the last name is KUNDRA😛

(its one of the twists RK is going to be MB's cousin 😛😛 aka sallu bhai's son who changed his name to RK lame right)

ANYWAY COME UP with me up with a nice name guys becouse i imagined the whole story in RK'S name😆😆😆 and i dont like the name RAJKUMAR OR RAJA KUSHWAHA keep it cool pls...and stylish

NEXT MASS UPDATE : 14 jan

I will add a spoiler tomorrow😉😉

and a new look for RK , madhu and AK

have a sleepless night

SANDY😉😉😉