Rajbala FF: Beintehaa (Part 7 Updated )

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Monics316

@Monics316

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Very nice.

Continue soon.😊

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Would like to read.

do continue.

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Good start .👍🏼But why wont u call him raja😆 if he is raja in ur story

n its a rajbala story not rishbala 😛

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.PassionateLuv.

@.PassionateLuv.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

nice start 😊
U can take raja as rishi kundra( RK) 😃

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sandy

@farayan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

BEINTEHAA

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PART 1

Madhu was totally confused about the turn of events. An hour had passed but raju didnt come to her yet. she started recalling whatever had happened an hour ago, she then remembered raju had called her DOLL not GUDIYA this recollection made her more confused.Just then the door flung open her heart skipped a beat but she relaxed seeing that it was raju. He came to her with a big smile and gave her a bone crushing hug.

Madhu was confused but she responded.After about 5 mins they broke the hug then raju cupped her face and thanked her.

RAJU: Thank you doll for saving me, marrying me, accepting me and loving me. I can never thank you enough.

A lone tear escaped his eye. Madhu wiped it with her fingers.

MADHU: RAJU...

RAJU: Nah...DOLL. Please let me complete. I met with an accident about two years ago and i lost my memory, my identity, my intellect, my life and everything. I was a six year old child stuck in a man's bod everyone teased me and made fun of me. I was stuck in misery untill you came to my life. And after you came the rest is history.

Madhu was in tears hearing him. Raju wiped her tears and continued

RAJU: I LOVE YOU MADHU.

Madhu's art skipped a beat hearing him.

RAJU: I know you loved me as a 6 year old kid but will you love me as a 25 year old man.I promise to always keep you happy and try my level best to fullfill your dreams. I know you need time to accept me so dont worry i can wait for you my whole life.

Hearing his words madhu gave him a bone crushing hug.

MADHU: I think you wont have to wait for long. I LOVE YOU.

RK was on cloud nine hearing her lifted her in air. His face radiated his joy.But suddenly his face dropped and he brought her on ground.

RAJU: Madhu I have to tell you something...

MADHU: What?

RAJU: MY real name is not raju.

I am REHAAN KHAN.

MADHU: KHAN?????

RAJU: Yes I am a muslim.

MADHU took a few steps back.

WILL MADHU ACCEPT HIM NOW????

so, how was it i know it is a little lame but the fun starts from the next part. The last part sounds like my name is khan right i know.

So bear with me for a few updates.

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

congrats for ur NEW AND FIRST FF SANDY

the prologue is very nice

interested to read in the name of RK

I suggest u not to mention any RAJA KHUSWA or RAJU

because every one knows the story is about RAJU and Madhu

so just RK according to me it works

waiting for the update

just now went through the update its just awesome

didn't expect the shock REHAAN KHAN 🤣

WANT TO SEE HOW MADHU WILL REACT FUTHER

Edited by vasavi_sri - 10 years ago

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sandy

@farayan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

BEINTEHAA

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PART 2

Madhu was shocked hearing his relevation. He was a muslim. Suddenly she felt betrayed. She quickly withdrew herself from his embrace. she felt cheated, she took a few steps back. "Madhu..." he called out "listen to me"but she was in no mood to listen to him her eyes were already welled up with tears. Seeing her cry something in him seemed to have broke . A lone tear escaped his eye "I will be waiting in the terrace". saying this he left.

Madhu cried for a long time, finally she got up and ran to the terrace. She saw him starring at the stars. She slowly went near him and back hugged him tightly. "But I still love you", she said.

RK was on cloud nine hearing that and swept her off her feet later he hugged her tight.

"I knew you wont reject me doll", he said with a smirk. All this while madhu was helplessly drooling at him. "I never realised how handsome you look",she said, "Aaahaaan" RK replied.

They both shared along passionate eyelock.

"waah Rab ne kya jodi banayi",said AK, with a mad glint in his face."You might have won this time madhubala but I will get you next time "he said walking away. RK fumed hearing him he was about to pounce at him but madhu caught his hand tight arguing him to stay back.

"Saaab your car is ready". a servent came and informed them. RK smiled hearing him "Get ready doll we are going to our home".

WHAT WILL AK'S NEXT STEP BE?

AND HOW WILL MADHU'S NEW HOME BE????

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sandy

@farayan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Sorry guys for the short update I had actually had a different story in mind for this update it was about the confession and it had more rishbala moments 😭😭😭 but it got deleted by my folly a few seconds before posting😭 all my hardwork went on waste. So I wrote this update in haste. I am sorry if i had disappointed you...

AND GUYS PLEASE DO LIKE AND COMMENT...

Next update will be after part 1 and 2 gets 50+ likes😈😈😈