Memory Loss Rishbala TS Alternative ending Pg11 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
rishbala with their kid
super ending
do write more and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Aww ors such a emotional scene
Thanks for making rishbala unite
Its so lovely and emotional
Felt sad for Maan but as I have not seen Geet much I would prefer my best couple after Arshi, Rishbala thanks for making it a good end and waiing for ur other updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Awesome TS. lovely ending.thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
This is the alternative ending of this TS.It might be depressing,so take ur own risk 2 read it.
plz write ur fav scene n fav character from this TS
Rishab did not want to accept what Maan said.He did not want to lose Madhu.
R:How can you be so sure that it's your wife?
Maan said after a brief silence:I want to see her.
Rishab got tensed.
R:Ok.
Rishab took Maan home.Maan waited outside.
R:I will call Madhu now.
Rishab went inside.
Maan waited to see her eagerly.

Seeing Madhu inside Rishab lost his control due to tension and caressed her face romantically.
He was scared whether it would be their last intimate moment.
R:I love you Madhu.
Madhu smiled:Love you too Rishu.
Rishab was emotional:You will not leave me ever.Right?
M:No never.

Maan saw this from the door way and his heart was broken.He was reminded of his romantic moment with Geet.

Flash back...
Cuppng her face Maan told Geet:I can't live without you Geet.Promise me that you will never leave me.
G:I promise you that I will never leave you Maan.

Present...

Maan said in his mind:Your broke your promise Geet.

Seeing Maan ,Rishab and Madhu became embarrassed.
Madhu/Geet looked at Maan.
She:Who is this Rishab?
Maan's heart broke again.
Rishab lied:My friend Maan Singh Khurana.
She:I will make tea for your friend now.
She went to kitchen.
Rishab was tensed while looking at Maan to know his reaction.
He stammered:This is not your wife. Right?
Controlling his emotions Maan opened his mouth:
She is not my wife.Sorry for the disturbance.
Rishab was relieved.
Maan left from there shattered.His and Geet's wedding photograph fell off his purse.

Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera
Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina


Geet came from kitchen with tea.
She:Where is your friend?
R:He went back.
G:So soon...?
R:He has an urgent work to do.
She kept the tea on the table.
Suddenly she saw a photograph on the floor and took it in her hands.She was shocked.Her eyes welled up with tears.
Seeing it Rishab was also shocked.Yes,it was Maan-Geet's wedding picture.

G:Tell me the truth Rishab.Who is he?Why did he come here?
Rishab was upset.He stammered.
G:Tell...
Rishab told her everything.She saw vague glimpses of her wedding with Maan in her mind and fainted.She was taken to the hospital.
After some time she opened her eyes.She remembered the terrible bus accident she faced and got scared.Her eyes were full of tears.
Geet cried:Who all are you?
They were shocked.
G:Where is Maan?I want to see my Maan.

Nandini and Rishab were upset.


Savitri and Dev were upset seeing Maan's tears.
D:Why did you sacrifice your Geet bro?

M:Because Geet's happiness is Dr.Rishab Kundra now.And I don't want to snatch their happiness.I want her to be happy always.

Tear drops flowed down from his eyes.



Tu hi hai kinaara tera
Tu hi to sahaara tera
Tu hi hai taraana kal ka
Tu hi to fasaana kal ka
Khud pe yaqeen tu karna
Ban.na tu apna khuda...
Khizaan ki shaam hoon main
Tu hai nayi subah
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina(Aashiqui2).

Suddenly Maan heard a voice from behind.
"No need to sacrifice your Geet".
Maan turned back.He was shocked to see Rishab.
R:Because Geet is Geet and can never be Madhu.She was always yours and her happiness is only you.


Geet came from behind.Her eyes were full of tears.
Maan couldn't believe his eyes.
M:Geet!
G:Maan!
She held his hand:Sorry Maan.
M:No my Geet.

He embraced her.
Savitri and Dev became emotional seeing them together.
Rishab left the place tearfully.Nandini was waiting for him sadly.
He hugged her and cried.:Mom!
Nandini shed tears helplessly.

Some couples are not meant for each other...like Rishab and Madhu.They are destined to be with someone else else.May be God twisted their love story to make them more happier.

The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kaash reciprocal hota, i lyk rishabala more.. Thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
I read this part too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
This one also good yaar..
But Mera bhaii roh raha hai yaar rishab dnt cry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely end!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Lovely Story! Liked it a lot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
There is a happy ending 4 Rishbala also where they unite.plz read n comment

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

kaash reciprocal hota, i lyk rishabala more.. Thanx 4 pm

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