RM TS- LOVE AND STARDOM part 3 posted on pg .1

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Nice start neha, continue it na.

One req, pls add englidh translation along with big hindi dialogues, small small ones I can manage, but for big ones, translation would help me.

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kg15

@kg15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Superb start Neha!!!

My favourite dialogue in the entire prologue was...

Main Sab Theek Kar Doongi!! 🤣

Signature style of Balaji! 🤣

Eagerly waiting for the first part!!!

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..Giovanni..

@..Giovanni..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hi seems like a nice story 😳 but I didn't understand some of the dialogues as I don't know hindi much 😕 I'm not an Indian. Please can you provide an English translate? 😃

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awesome update neha dear.

loved it.

oh poor rk suffered a lot in d past two years but still he is in love with madhu that i could see clearly but worried whether she will betray him again..

haha..u have nicely killed that stone face sullu..lol

glad madhu hit some rock not that stone sullu. If she had hit him then today she wont be standing in front of him.lol..

here u proved u r my long lost sister..even i always wish sullu keeps is mouth shut & U did it perfectly by not giving a single word to him lol

i want right kameena to torture & Humiliate madhu before giving in to her love lol.. yes, that would be d best punishment for hurting rk..

if sultan blackmailed her she should have told rk..at least in serial rk dont know tbat he was alive till d final pace but here this foolhardy brought him home & Talked all nonsense & Walked away. Cant she act to sultan & Brought him to rk & Spill everything truly..gah!! What a madness she did?

well, bygone is bygone..now its time to mend everything & I m eager to see how they get close again in shooting...

sorry for d delay in commenting & Thanks for d pm dear.

nicely written.

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Awesome part n yes no dialogue for sullu was gud idea

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Yaa its better if sultan keeps his mouth shut !! Rk is totally right from his side !! Lets see how madhu makes up for her absence !! Nice update !! Thanks for pm !! Cont soon

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Amazing start.

RK is right this time, its difficult for him to trust madhu now. But madhu is determined to win him back.

very well written.

thanks for the pm n continue soon.

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

awesome update loved it thanks for pm 😃

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Very nice neha, and a big thanks for the english translation, I accept rk is st right at his stand, ppl believe what they witness, but am sure, madhu gonna prove her love soon.

Waiting eagerly for next part, and thanks for pm.

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Awsome update
Its better sultan keeps his mouth shut only
Bcoz of him rishbala had suffered so much
Rk is right on his side n i'm sure like madhu dat she will win rk's trust n love back n bring the old rishab back
Updt sn

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