RishBala FF- You Are My Treasure Part-15(19th Dec)-FinalPart/Completed

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BEEVI

@bevi-najim

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#261

lovely update

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Continue soon waiting for the next update.

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Anish

@anish17

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Wow so awesome update
Balraj is madhu's biological father
Nice twist
Pls update next part soon
Thanks for the pm

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Bunny

@vivian.drashti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#265

I guess there is no difference in the cruelty level by Balraj neither in this story nor in the show . Ewww that's horrible ... Why did he hurt his own flesh and that too with a knife ?? I adore Shammo here that he is a true lover , husband and a father . Poor Madz , that she got shocked hearing about all this dirty secret .. Now what's with this RK's secret ??? If he is not a pirate then ??? Is he an undercover agent who was on the mission to get hold of mafia Ballu and in that process he got to know so many secrets and relations ???? It was an intriguing update .

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Hi dear !! I am a new reader to your story. After seeing the character sketch I was quite intrigued with your story. Guess what within an hour I was hooked up to your wonderful story.

Enough of my talking, coming to your update, the story was so passionate and adventurous. The name balraj made me think that somehow he is connected to madhu. He was so cruel.

I loved RK, whether he is a pirate or a normal man. I don't care. Esp that noodles incident, you made me romantic. I loved the depth of love he had for madhu. After padmini revealed the past he bet balraj. I was like what happened to him, then the reason he gave, how dare he hurt little madhu, OmG I love him.

I liked your madhu, bold proud and stubborn.

I hope there would be no abhay kapoor here after.

Waiting to unveil the mystery !!

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Amazing updt..!!aww.. Rk hitting balraj for hurting baby madhu.. I loved this sequence & also rk & balraj's glaring each other sequence..balraj is obnoxious pig..Padmini's past is quite painful..& rk is not real pirate..who he is then..?? Thanks fr pm😊]

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Fantastic update, loved it, R.K hitting Balraj for hurting baby Madhu, possessive R.K. Padmini's past is painful but loved her MIL who asked her to escape from there, Malik is such a sweet man. If R.K is not a pirate then who is he? Curious to know, please continue soon.

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Interesting concept,
all parts are amazing,
loved this rk and madhu,
padmini's past is so painful,
rk beating balraj for hurting baby madhu liked it,
rk is not a pirate then who is he waiting for the remaining half mystery to unfold

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Tinku16

@Tinku16

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#270

😛wow... most of the adorable writers are back witha bang today...lovely update but really felt literally in the stomach of balraj cuting his new born baby's palm...mean how low a monster can get...the update has made us to wait for the next ...hope to receive the next. ealry...welcome back...

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