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Posted: 10 years ago
feeling really bad for Trishna..poor girl. I'm kinda happy that Ashok died.😆 Madhu is so smart n commited to her sis n after her death commited to her nieces n nephew. Do continue soon.eager to know how Ashok died.. Trishna must be in labor pain so in next update we'll get to see newborn Lisa..😛
Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i know baby ur busy
when ur free u can update
but try to do
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please forgive me! Due to unavoidable circumstances I will not continue this further! I'm really sorry for it! Thank you so much for staying with me throughout 6 chapters! So basically this is what I was planning for! 😉

Hope you remember the story so far 😆 Please refer to the early parts if you have forgotten! 😕😆


Mr. Ashok Khanna was Madhu's sister's husband. He was actually murdered by his second wife, Dipali. She wanted to frame Madhu for this murder as Madhu went to Mr. Khanna and confronted him on ruining her sister's life. Finally Mr. Khanna realizes his mistakes and tries to amend his mistakes. That becomes a reason for Dipali to kill him off in order to take his property and also to teach a lesson to Madhu.

Trishna dies during childbirth due to complications ( I hope you remember I stopped at the part where Madhu screams after seeing her sister unconscious) Trishna asks Madhu to take the responsibilities of the kids on her death bed. Madhu takes the kids and move to Italy.

By the time, Madhu leaves to Naples ( a City in Italy ) for a conference. Madhu has no alternative other than leaving kids with RK. Well RK manages to win her trust by helping them in certain incidents. So finally he agrees to look after the kids.

RK finds a diary of Madhu and learns about everything. But Madhu has not mentioned anything about Mr. Khanna's murder. So he assumes that she has actually killed him or attempted to kill him on behalf of her sister, as to take revenge from him for making her sister's life a hell.
RK gives information to the agency on Madhu as a culprit. ( He was bound to do that as a part of his job) Dipali gets to know about them as somebody in the agency leaks all the information about Madhu, sent by RK.

Dipali plans to kill the kids as they have a right on their father's property. She hires an Italian detective to spy on Madhu and kids. In the mean time RK & Madhu falls in love for each other. Madhu tells him the truth that kids are not hers. But the eldest kids still don't like RK much. Madhu feels that it is time to think about her self, to get married and start a family but her nieces and nephew is a big responsibility. RK feels guilty for hiding everything from Madhu.

He is stuck between Madhu and his job. Finally he decides to move on. He still haven't solved that mystery. He feels that something is wrong. He gets a call from his boss and asked to return back to India soon as he had been terminated from the mission. RK was shocked to hear it. He goes back to India with a heavy heart. Madhu & RK part ways. Madhu gives a dinner to him before the night of his departure. The eldest kids apologizes him for being a mess. All get emotional. Lisa asks him not to go.

Finally RK arrives to India. He was dismissed from his job. When he inquires about it, his boss says they had been monitoring him as well and has got to know that he had fallen in love with the 'culprit aka Madhu' and it was against on the rules of his job. This is part of Dipali's plan to stop RK on helping Madhu. ( She gets to know all via the Italian detective) RK's best friend Rajiv who works in the same agency tells RK that he has a doubt on Dipali. He had been noticing Dipali's action during the mission. RK gets a feeling that Dipali is behind this.

He plans to find everything about Dipali. His becomes successful! He breaks into her house while she was away and tries to collect evidence. He finds a metal box in the storeroom which was locked. He gets a doubt on it and breaks it. He finds some papers, a diary and few photographs. The photographs were old family photos of Trishna, Mr. Khanna and the eldest kids. He finds a letter where the envelope of it is soaked with blood and it was written by Mr. Khanna. He had poured out all his guilty in the letter. That he had ruined her wife's and children's lives. He was seeking apologize from his kids. He wants to reunite with his kids and divorce Dipali as he has already got an idea on Dipali's intentions.

RK figures out that Dipali has surely murdered him. May be when he had done writing this letter. The blood should be Mr. Khanna's. Now RK wants a proof that the actual killer is Dipali. He once again goes and search Dipali's room but nothing was found. Rajiv helps RK by sending the details of the servant worked at their place while the murder occurred and he was questioned by the agency. RK goes to find that servant. He was dismissed by Dipali few years back. RK threatens him to tell the truth. Finally he blurts out the truth that he had actually seen Dipali shooting Mr. Khanna after a heated argument. It has happened 2 hours after Madhu left confronting him. At those 2 hours Mr. Khanna had wrote that letter and has arranged to write the property to his children.

Dipali had seen the servant and was about to kill him as well but the bullets were over. He pleads for life. Dipali blackmails him that if he ever blurts out the truth, she would harm his family. She asks him to bury the pistol in the garden replace it with another pistol and threatens him to stay numb when the police inquires him. So the replaced pistol was found there near the body. She sends away the servant but sends money every month.

RK goes back to Dipali's house and finds the pistol buried in the garden. (Okay guys this would be kinda illogical as how could RK get in to the house with securities all around but RK knows how to handle! ;) Lol)

Dipali has actually moved from that house. She is living in another apartment in the present. RK storms in to the agency and exposes about Dipali. The boss is shocked how RK had found everything. The person who was leaking everything from the agency calls Dipali and tells about it. Dipali has no option other than leaving the country. She decides to go to Italy and take revenge from Madhu and the kids and later come back and do something to RK as well.

The boss was quite guilty and apologizes RK. RK feels that Madhu and the kids' lives are in danger. He goes back to Italy. Madhu was surprised to see RK back. She hugs him and cries that she wasn't able to forget him and she'd been dying to see him again. RK feels bad. Finally RK decides to expose the truth. Madhu was shocked and heart broken to hear that RK had lied her. Before she gets to know about the truth on Khanna's murder and how RK found it, Ria and Ryan comes back from school and tells them that Lisa was nowhere to found.

The already shattered Madhu panics and searches for Lisa. She accuses RK on kidnapping Lisa. Finally RK holds her tightly blurts out the whole truth. Madhu is hell shocked. By the time Rajiv calls him and tells that they have found out that Dipali has come to Italy. RK figures out that Dipali is behind Lisa's kidnap. RK contacts the agency on this matter and asks out for help. The agency sends to message to the higher detective agencies in Italy to locate Dipali.

The kidnappers call and asks Madhu to ready 90,000 Euros ( Convert this to Indian rupees you'll get the value LOL I don't know how much is equal to 1 Euro :P) and come alone to release Lisa and if she has threatens not to contact police or they would kill Lisa. RK gets the money ready with the help of his agency. Madhu apologizes him for being rude and thank him for saving their lives. RK too apologizes for not telling the truth for her as a spy.

Madhu drives off to the place where the kidnappers had asked her to come. They asked her to keep the money bag at a particular place and come forward. The troupes lead by RK also goes there at the same time. There Dipali appears with Lisa and confronts Madhu. She aims the pistol on Madhu. At the mean time the police manages to shoot the kidnappers and catch them. Lisa is screaming for help. RK finds the place via Lisa's screams. Dipali pushes Lisa and She collapses down after knocking on a heavy object. Madhu screams for help.

Dipali is about to shoot now. RK comes on time and saves Madhu but he was hit by the bullet. Dipali was shocked to see RK. The police comes there and arrests her. RK and Lisa were rushed to the hospital. Madhu is crying her heart out. After a operation the bullet was taken off. RK gains consciousness after 4 days. Lisa has also gotten well. Madhu and the kids come to see RK.

After some time Madhu and RK gets to be alone ;) They hugs each other and cries. Then they shares a passionate kiss ;) (Lol I don't know how would I write all these things! ) Madhu takes RK home to look after him till he gets better. Later RK proposes Madhu when he looks her on a dinner out.

RK and Madhu goes back to India along with the kids and ties the knot with the blessings of their parents. RK helps Madhu to go back to her parents as she had been distant from them for past few years. Mr. Khanna's property was legally given back to the kids.

RK and Madhu goes on a romantic honeymoon as well :P (Imagine all those moments lol) At the end of the story, Madhu gets pregnant with RK's child and everyone is super excited, specially Lisa. Forgot to mention that RK and Madhu asks Ria and Ryan to call them Dad and mom! :D

Madhu gives birth to a son and they lived happily ever after with 4 kids :D

Okay I hope you liked the short synopsis. Not that much short though lol Hope there aren't any loop holes in the story. I'm sorry if the story couldn't reach up to your expectations! :P

Once again sorry for not continuing it but I wanted to reveal the story because I thought it would be unfair to my readers if I just leave the story untold. I don't think I would be able to start a new story here! :P I'm really busy with some issues in my personal life and it's too difficult to handle a story in a forum with all the other work! Thank you for supporting me!


Grazie a tutti ( Thank you everybody!) Le amore e tutto! ( Love you all) 🤗

Regards,
Nisha aka Annabelle.
Edited by ..Annabelle.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm all heart-broken 🥺 but I can understand ur situation. It's really difficult to maintain FFs. Thats why I also have discontinued my Rajbala FF. The sypnosis was amazing n I was imagining all the things..how much thrilling it would be if u actually have wrote them chapter by chapter with all dialogs n details..😭 Well planned story it was.. Anyways thanks for the synopsis n unfolding everything.😳 Good Luck 👍🏼
Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi dear...
I can understand ur situation...even i quit writing for d same reason...life is getting tougher & tougher with studies & other personal issues... So i accept ur decision...in fact its good for u...
Okay...glad u gave a short synopsis of d future story & ended it instead of simply discontinuing... Now we have got an idea how d story would have proceeded & ended... U have written d story so far so brilliantly & loved d synopsis too...it was great though i have guess quite a few thing before hand like ashok kannha being killed by someone but not madhu but somebody deliberately put d blame on madhu...so the somebody is the bitch dipali... & also trishna dying in labor...
Glad that ria & ryan also started calling them dad & mom... Rishbala happily married...they blessed with a beautiful baby boy...then they living happily with four sweet kids was so prefect...good job dear...
Thanks for writing this wonderful story...
All the best for ur future dear...
God bless u...
Love u...
Sudha
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi annabelle
i understand your condition
all the best for your future
thanks for giving the synopsis
we will not have to keep guessing
wish u loads of success
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Posted: 10 years ago
So nice of u
U have revealed the whole story
It's awesome
Got the left over part in a single update
Ria and Rihan accepted Rk
Rk and Madhu blessed with a baby boy
A happy family with 4 kids
Lovely ending
It's ok if u don't have time to write
But when u feel free u start again
Thanks for the pm
Take care
Love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its ohk dear
It was a nice story n thanks that u given us synopsis of ur story
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...the plot is awsomm & thrilling...if it wud have put into a story...it wud been interesting but we understood ur situation...anyways the whole synopsis is something very intresting !! And tq for giving this synopsis without keeping us hanged...all d best for ur future dear !!

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