RISHBALA STORY * SILENT LOVER* updated part 4@pg16 on 13/2/15 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Nicely written
I love the way the plot goes through.

Please add me for pm too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
hi sweta i absolutely loved this story my dear plz keep updating it regularly i love regular updates and i m loving this story it's awesome and u r great writer keep it up do pm me the updates 👍🏼!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
lovely update... can understand madhu's turmoil... she is been through so much and trusting ppl is next to impossible for her... she was thinking of sulthan and life with him... when she comes to know his real motive again she will be shattered...
This rishab is real mystery... eager to know why is he behind madhu...
thnx for the pm... continue soon pls...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 4

Rishab picked up madhu in his arms and ran to his jeep..He settled her on the passenger side...and jumped on the driver's side..

He patted her cheek...for the last time and drove off..

" Dam..Me i should have taken her to the docs..maybe its the drug.." He cursed himself..

He tucked her hair neatly..glancing her...intently.." u will be alright madhu I promise.."

He drove frantically towards the hospital...

MAdhu listlessly blinked her lashes..She stirred a bit..sitting straight On the seat...Trying to figure out her surroundings

Rishab saw her movement..and sighed in relief.." madhu..are u okay..." He brushed her hair in worry...He halted the jeep..

MAdhu shoved his hand..recognizing his voice..Rishab took back his hands and reached out for the bottle of water..

He passed it to her..

She whimpered slightly..and grasped the bottle..she was dehydrated..

rishab shook his head gently..at her attitude..Madhu deliberately took enough time..To drink water..while running her eyes all over the jeep ..It was a good time for escape!!

She muddled over her thoughts..and decided to give it a try..She is MADHU she wont give in so easily..

She wiped her lips..from the back of her hand..and surpassed the bottle to rishab..

" U r okay ??" he asked her tenderly..

His voice irked..her further..His presence..was torturing her..But nevertheless she decided to use it..

" I..I want some more water." She muttered without glancing him..

" uhmm...madhu u ll have to wait..we r miles away from the next city..Ill drive as fast as i can.." rishab responded..thoughtfully

She clenched her jaws now staring him in anger..

" i want now..just get me water...please.." She said quivering..a bit

" okay i guess i have some..let me..check." He whispered calmly..

She nodded..swallowing thickly..rubbing her hands..

Rishab bend down..to find other bottle of water..in the compartments..when a all of a sudden he was barrelled with something sharp..and pointed..

"ahh.." he hissed..gripping his head...and raised a little to find geet smirking..

" tch tch tch..Sorry mr.kidnapper cum psycho...U really underestimated me.." she stroked the hem of the wooden object circular in shape that was place behind their seats..

Rishab squeezed his eyes...As she hit him another shot on his head..causing more blood to dribble down..

He clasped her hand in his hand..shaking his head for no... Madhu moved violently pushing him off the seat...

" go to hell.." she muttered...as hopped on to the driver's seat driving off..!!

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" Dont worry I will find that s**t...i will hand her over to u Sir..She is urs..belive me trust me..Sultan joh bolta hai woh karta hai..U have my word.."

" Ah..." Sultan smashed his cell on the ground in rage..

" I m not going to leave u madhubala..kaha tak bhago gi..tum.." He whispered deviously...tightening his jaws..Brushing his hair backwards..

His men entered..

" Sir..uska baap bhi ghar mai..hi behosh..hai..par saman gayab shayd..sahayad..." His voice trailed off..Finding his boss red in fury..

" bolo..." Sultan grabbed his collar lifting him..to his level..

" woh..shayad..bhag..gayi.." the guy spat..frightfully

" Nahiii.." Sultan threw the guy..

" woh nahi bhag sakti...she cant run away from me..." he fisted his hands...controlling his anger

" agar tum ne bhag ne ki koshsih ki hai..Toh no one can save u from me madhubala.." Sultan proclaimed...

" jao..dhundo use..Find that s**t...Go.." he ordered..

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Madhu drove the jeep recklessly ...clutching the wheels with her trembling hands..

She kept spinning her head ..backwards..unsure of rishab ..

She reached a mile...ahead when the jeep broke down..

" what the hell.." she climbed down the jeep...And paced in front to break open the of the jeep...

She gulped down heavily biting her lip..she explored her surroundings..and found herself In the middle of dark, dense forest..

Sweat rolled down her forehead..

" are madam..hum help kar dete hai..."

Madhu frowned and turned around...to find a car full of mens..They were total 5 and all drunken..

She gripped her fist...shaking her head..

"I will manage.." She managed to speak out boldly ...

She turned around and concentrated back...on the jeep..

In next moment..a guy hovered her placing his hands a centimetre away from her..

" what u doing...just move away.." she stepped behind gluing her herself to the frontside of the jeep..

The men smiled slyly..tossing the empty bottle of alchol...the others cheered..

" oye drama mat kar..Hume pata hai tu MADHUBALA hai...BAR DANCER.." He roared inching close to her..

" dekho,,just move..or else.." She raised her hand to slap him..but the guy clasped it...2 other gusy came on either sides..holding her..

They held her hands...tightly as she cried out for help..

They all laughed at her powerlessness..

The guy who had hovered her before ran his finger from her forehead...to her chin..sensuously ..

Madhu clichd her eyes..in abhorrence..she loathed herself..

" aaj toh bada mazza ayega...tu clients nahi leti na..." he spoke roughly holding her chin.. She shook her face..repelling his touch..

He gripped it tighter.." aaj tujhe batauna..clients lena bhi chayie toh humare jaise...madhubala.." and leaned closer..

She closed her eyes in anticipation..But his revulsion touch did not ensued..

Oddly she heard faint noises and a strong pull..which released her hands out their hold..

She snapped open her eyes...and stood rooted to the spot..

It was rishab...All drenched in his blood kicking the guy who touched her..One of them was already knocked down on the ground...

The rest tackled him from various sides...but rishab was merciless breaking bones of the first guy..

She shuddered...with the intensity of his punches..

She was witnessing a crazy wild person..causing her to jump out of her skin..

he himself was injured but still was beating the shit of the that guy..mumbling something which she barely heard...For her it all seemed such a maze !!

" ahhh..." One last punch and the guy stumbled in unconsciousness..

Rishab panted heavily wiping the blood from his lower lip...and spun his head in madhu's direction..

She juddered..in response...and fell on ground..with a cry..

In spilt second he was besides groping her foot...

" where is it paining...??" he questioned her examining her foot gently..by running his hands..

Madhu blinked..back her tears..Unaware of the emotions she felt..She hated this guy who had turned her life upside down..

But yet she did not fail to notice the concern in his eyes.. those eyes which were blazing in anger had melted down..and altered into anxiety..

" i..I m..okay.." she bit it out ..ignoring the pain she was suffering..

Rishab paused his actions and upcasting his eyes.. to glimpse her...

He just kept looking in her eyes..searching for something..and then looked away nodding..

Rishab raised himself..dusting clutching his head..faintly moaning..

Madhu bit her lip...hearing his moan..

She glanced downwards cursing her guts..the guy wasn't that terrible . Though she wasn't convinced about him..yet he deserved a thanks..for saving her..What a IRONY she was running away from him...any here he saves her yet again!!

" lets go.."

Madhu lifted up her lashes...staring his extended hand..

She placed her hand in his...and rishab helped her to stand..

Rishab held her from shoulders guiding her to jeep..

She wordlessly progressed with him.. He placed her on the seat..and this time..to her surprise She tied her hands with the rope and pinned it..to the dashborad

" what ..ah what's dis." she blurted ..

rishab chose not to answer and swiftly came in front of the jeep repairing it..

Madhu struggled Once again..." heyyy u ..whats his name...ya...rishab..m talking to u .."

She rolled her eyes in annoyance..pissed off with his attitude..

After Rishab was done..he dusted his hands..and came to driver's seat..

Madhu banged her hand on the dashboard infuriated with rishab's behaviour..

Rishab ignited the engine..without glancing her..

" u seem fine..we will head to our next destination...and this time.."

He turned side ways...looking her intently

" try controlling ur urges...it will save ur and my time.." he replied tightly..making her scrunch her brows in sheer anger..

" I..i..whoaaa..." she screamed...startled..as he started the jeep.. hastily..blurring her voice..

Madhu twisted her lips..closing her eyes...her mind wasn't in his favour but her heart told her to believe and trust this stranger...

Deceived by her own thoughts..she preferred to be mum... and voice out her questions...choosing a proper perfect time..depending on the mood of her captor !!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
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Superb update
Our hero was in action
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Edited by anish17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Superb update.
Glad she didn't run to sultan n RK rescued her before that.
Who is RK? This question is killing us too...
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
very nice update
madhu should know the real face of sultan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Still the suspense, who is rk and what is the relationship he has, Pls continue can't wait to read what happen next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
awesome update loved RK ahaan My true hero 👏⭐️ poor RK he's helping saving madhu even after being injured bye her and she's always rude and hurting him 😵woah unbelievable anyways i want madhu to realize what a useless selfish man that sullu is😡 thanks for pm and do update soon dear i cant wait 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update madhu should know dat true face of that sullu n hope she understand rk an belive him

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