RISHBALA STORY * SILENT LOVER* updated part 4@pg16 on 13/2/15 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Great start.
Like Madhu, vulnerable yet strong.
Rishabh seems to be mystery yet.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Sweta,🤗awesome update dear.👏 Loved this strong Madhu,👍🏼wrkng in that bar doesn't degrade her.She's doing this job nt happily bt fr money n knw hw to protect herself,brave girl.😳poor Padmini,is helpless,n Madhu's father,hw mean he is.So she's waiting for Sultan.😊This time Rk didn't caught her bt he'll do sumthng fr sure.😛 Cont. soon.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Interesting. .waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
ya madhu is strong but she has to be more strong too
who this rajendre ?
he is not madhu's father. i think she said her name madhubala malik
where is malik?
why there r stuck with him ?
did madhu love sulu bhai or just friend to her?
too many question or running in my mind

why i feel rk came to take her for some other reason
she misunderstood and did't allow him explain too
i think sooo waiting eagerly to get my answers
thank u for ur pm
i don't know how i missed this update
i did not come to forum for 4 days so i missed it😊
waiting for ur other stories too😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Superb start. I love it. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Why does RK want to just talk to Madhu? And mdhu -- love the fact that she is a fighter! Great update. Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awesome start Sweta...loved it...
Continue soon. ..
Tfs for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

PART 2

Next day padmini's heath defoliated..her condition..Worsened ...Madhu took her to the hospital after fighting with Rajender.

Padmini's was admitted immediately ..The docs took her to operation theater..

madhu slunk on the chair outside the operation theatre

she closed her eyes ...

babaji please maa ko thik kar do..please she whimpered..

she jointed her hands ...silently praying for her maa when a hand pressed her shoulder...

madhu frowned turning her head..

s..sultan...she whispered ..she..threw her hands around him ..hugging him..

sultan..maa...maa..she broke into tears..

shhs...madhu..Sultan wrapped his hands around her patting her head ..dont worry sab thik ho jayega...

Madhu held him more tightly

nodding her head..still crying

2 hours later..

the doctor came out...

Madhu and sultan rushed to him..

doc my maa..how is she... madhu asked in a quivering voice...

m..sorry we tried everything ..but she had given up..her body was paralyzed we couldn't save her...m sorry...

no..no...Madhu shook her head.frantically .nai..she stepped back..

sultan moved to her..nahi..madhu..madhu..listen to me..

her back hit the wall ..tears pooled in her eyes..

mmmaaa she screamed and fell down..

maaa...she cried...her eyes out...sultan reached her side supporting her..

Madhu moaned for the rest of the day later they released padmini's body ...

madhu and sultan did padmini's last rituals ..through out this rajender was nowwhere to be seen..Neither did madhu other about him ...

After completing the rituals she along with sultan were returning back...In his car..

madhu was staring outside the window blankly..her face was impassive..The pain she was bearing from inside was eating her...she lost her maa the sole reason of her living...

Madhu...sultan called out..

She was startled out of her thoughts due to his voice...

She blinked her eyes...and turned to him..

Madhu he said in a soft voice...He reached out for his hand and clasped it in his..Madhu glanced down at their joint hands blankly

I knw what u r going through...tum aunty se kitna pyar karti thi I knw..

But...he paused...Don't get me wrong..i ..i..feel it's the right to leave from here...

She raised her head n looked him puzzled

Sultan cupped her face....dekho..madhu ab tumhe us ghar mai wapas jane ki zarrurt nahi hai..u were constrained to do so coz of her...and now u r unbounded to that...i think u should not return back to that animal...

Tears brimmed in her eyes...

Madhu let them flow..

sultan wiped it...madhu mai tumhe and aunty ko yaha se dur le jana chahata tha...m sorry that m late..and we couldn't save..anuty but..m sure she would want u to move on from ur life...I don't want u to go back.there ...he said hoarsely

Madhu smiled faintly and nodded...

Sultan hugged her smiling widely..I promise I wont let u face any of this..madhu I promise he said brushing her hairs..

Madhu reciprocated the hug... I want to go back there for the last time..that place has my mother's memories and some possessions which I wana take with me...

Okay madhu ..go back and meet me tom...okay..

Sultan said parting her from himself...

MAdhu climbed down the car and strides to her house...

She paused for a sec n turn to him waved him bye.

sultan grinned as she moved inside her house...

He fished out his cell from his pockets...

Sir ji...paise ready rakhna bohot hi...hot sexy ladki ko leke ane wala hu...madubhala ka naam toh suna hi hoga...

Sultan brushed his hairs...laughing..

Are ab kya kare...mere charm age koi bhi ho...phas jati hi hai...

He smiled slyly

Bohot hi jald leke aane wala hu mai meri madhubala ko lekar...

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MAdhu came inside to face a dunked rajender...

ayyyee aa gayi...kaah ti...apne maa k antim sanskar bade dhoom dham se kar rai thi kya... he spoke bitterly

MAdhu scrunched her hands in fist...And without answering moved to her room...but rajender intervened and held her arm pulling her...

Madhu flinched with his touch ...She eyes spitting fire...

yeh ankhe kisi aur ko dikhanaa...ab teri maa nahi hai...islke matlab yeh nahi ki shok hi manate rehna hai... he tighten his hold...digging his nails in her arms..

she squeezed her eyes...and move violently against his hold...she was repulsive to him...dint wish to answer his stupid questions as her mind still wandered around her maa's demise..

She abhorred the awful smell of alcohol coming from his mouth..His grip was hurting her...

She was already broke with her maa s demise this man provoked her more...

She looked him in his eye...and found him smirking at her helplessness...

A sound of gasp filled the room...and rajender landed on the floor...with a thud

ah...u s**t.. he groaned ...he clutched his right hand in pain where she had cut him..

m not a s**t...Dont u dare came any way near me..i m not gona take it anymore... she whispered dangerously..making herself loud and clear to him.. before strolling right inside her room..

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She collected her mother's locket ...and wore it..

Her eyes brimmed with tears...gazing the empty bed..

She wiped them..and packed her bags..

After she was done...She thought of escaping from balcony..so that her so called step father doesn't create another nuisance for her...

She descended down the rope..and jumped..

She grasped her bags adjusting them on her shoulders ready to go...when all of a sudden..she felt someone grabbing her from behind...

A hand swiftly came across her mouth...while she frantically kicked the person to let her go..Unfortuantely nothing worked... ...

His hold on her tighten she was caged in his strong arms...

After a moment she was knocked down due to the chloroform that was used against her mouth and nostrils...

She collapsed on the ground...her eyesight blurring ..before she went into unconscious state...She faintly saw a man...

" sorry I tried explaining u..but u called it this way...MADHU.."

She frowned hearing a similar voice...and finally passed out...

Precap- MADHU KIDNAPPED????

I m sorry for this short update...next one will be a long one..guys!!

I promise...


sorry for mistakes

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sweta

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
superb update...sultan is cheating her...hate that man...
wow rk kidnapped her...
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Emotional update Sweta dear. Madhu lost her mother n that moron Rajendar😡 ws nt leavng her that time too,shameless man n father. Sultan is also a cheater 😲i didn't thought so.Bt i loved strong Madhu,she's no more afraid of Rajendar,n want to get rid of that place,great.👍🏼 Sultan is planning sumthng else,bt RK our hero came n took Madhu wth her,😳wow.He kidnapped her bt its gud fr her nw as Sultan is aftr her. Vry intrestng.😛Updte soon dear Sweta.😃
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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