RISHBALA STORY * SILENT LOVER* updated part 4@pg16 on 13/2/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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u got the name of the title
its so nice SILENT LOVER
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that was intense! I could just feel the tension and emotions.

Loved it. Please continue.
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Congrats for the new story dear,...
So RK is fllowing this Madhu...who life is quite miserable...

she might have lost her hope on men...but how his junoon is gonna make this a love story...lets see.

Do update and PM me...plzzz
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WOW!!!!!!!!!! Good start love the possessiveness of rk continue make it a bit longer pls
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ill be updating in few hours...!!!

Thank u for ur lovely comments!!

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will wait for ur update dear..
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Amazing story pls cont eagerly waiting
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I m soo soorry for being late...i was suppose to update this long back but due to my lappy i couldnt..Guys once again sorryy!!

And thank u for ur comments...It made me overwhelmed!!!
One more thing since m new to this forum..i have no idea whom to ask for a banner..if u guys could help me with it...plz do so!!!


Part 1

Madhu quickly changed her dress in to..a pair of causal jeans and top walked out of her washroom..

Standing in front of the mirror...she wiped her face removing her make up..

" hello...".a deep manly voice came out..


Perplexed with the voice she spun to see the owner ...

There he was sitting comfortably on the sofa . Her eyes widen and fear engulfed her body as she now faced the piercing gaze ..which followed her since a month..There was a ghost of smile on.his perfectly m shaped lips...

He was dressed in black shirt and jeans...black seem to compliment him...Royalty dripping from his face..

Her palms grew sweaty...as she stood before him in trepidation

She blinked her eyes..rapidly pushing back her fear and regaining her composure...

" hello Madhu malik " he repeated himself

" what the hell are u doin here...and..h..how do u knw my name."she retorted facing him..with confidently ..Yet terrified within

she was shocked as she dint revealed her name to anyone ..for all she was Madhubala the famous bar dancer..

" the 1st question is obvious I dont..wish to answer that...".he said causally...his eyes had glint and a small smile adorned his lips..

" but the second one..." he gave a crooked smile." ..I knw all about u..joh tumhe bhi nahi pata.".

" look..just leave mY room..now..u r not allowed in here..just get out...i dont care what u knw..about. me dosent matter anyway.."she growled at him...For a moment she did panic seeing ..but she gathered her wits... shielding herself ..proving she isn't a weak girl...and she had faced much worse than this..

Rishab smiled slyly ..stood to his feet..and started taking steps towards her..

" no one..ever talks to me like that..".

" beautiful ..no one...".he whispered in his..deep seducing voice..

she swallowed ..slightly ..blinking her lashes in fear..as he took steps to her...

"I like..that .."he said pointing his finger to her." ..u seem a bit scared ha..but I like ur guarded look better.." he said thoughtfully wiping the drop of sweat from her forehead ..from his index finger

she squeezed her eyes tight ..trembling inside... clasping his hand she shoved it..aside ...

" how dare u touch me..and who said..m scared of you..no way.."she muttered..looking direct in his eyes..

next she knew she was pin to the table..while he was next to her...wrapping his hand through her stomach ..yet not touching

Rishab locked her gaze with his..staring deep in her eyes..

she couldn't bear the his intense gaze..it sent shivers down her spine..

silently she tore her eyes off him..looking away..

" what u want..and why the hell are u following me.."

He smirked yet again..stepping backwards..creating space between them..

" I want to talk to u..and want u to.come with.me ."he said..firmly

the confidence evident in his voice..she abruptly turned to face him...Not surprised with his words.

" but I have no intentions to talk to u..and neither I wana go with u..so done now..plz leave.."

RK chuckled..what makes u think I will listen.to u..uhhh..

Madhu made fist of her hands..this man was certainly not easy to handle..it wasnt a first time..a man barged in her room..previously too..there have have been many such mens..but she could easily..pry them off..with the help of manager..now..since this man was able to reach here..she knew the manager couldnt stop him..

the audacity of this man frightened her...She was already living a dreadful life..and this guy was adding to her misery..

but this time she wont let anything affect her..she was determined to leave all this..and no way..she would let her destiny ruin it..

she gave him a icy glare..parting her lips to speak..

ohh..ya..sorry I forgot he said..slapping his forehead

She narrowed her brows...

what is ur rate..huh..??how much will u take..just to talk to me..? he asked..raising his..brows..

Madhu bit her lips..to Control her anger...she gave a faint smile to Rishab...

oops sorry mr. I dance here..and. that's all.I may look like a wh**e in such revealing dresses but..m not a wh**e...and neither m I interested..to be ur mistress....she said the last part gritting her teeth..

yes she dint feel anything ..those words..dint made her feel disgusted anymore...as she was numb to them long back..

well...I dint..mean that ..and..mistress

yes..so may I please req u to leave my room right now... she said loudly..cutting him off..

shhs..dont scream...I will...leave when I want...and now..I dont..wana leave..before i m done talking to u .he said coming closer to her..he could read her eyes..they did flicker in fright for a moment and then back to blank..

before Rishab could say anything ..he was barreled..with a sharp object straight in his..knuckles ..

owe..he yelped in.pain..as Madhu pushed him..off her body

She smirked at him...pointing her finger at him

I m.not weak...I knw how to protect my self..

Rishab hissed throwing his head backwards ..ah..

blood trickled down from his..knuckles.

there wasnt a pinch a regret on her face.

at least u could have heard me out..phir kar deti joh karna hai..I..just. ..want ..u to come with me and i mean that..I will get u anyway

I dint care what u want..she screamed..do not follow me..ever again..samjhe mai kamzor ni hu mai..samjhe ..Mai tumhari property nahi hu...

Rishab got up..somehow ..

madhu braised herself in a protective manner ..

I dont..want to harm u..come with me...or else i will have to force u...he said dangerously ..his eyes blazing ..

no way .Try it mr. do wat ever u want to do..she once again...slit her sharp blade through his thigh..and kicked him hard

ahh..Rishab shut his eyes ..stumbling down on the floor.

Madhu dont u run..u cant run away from me..come with me...

Rishab said..raising his hand..shaking his.head for a no..

madhu dint listen to..him...smirking at his plight..she collected her stuffs and ran out...

Rishab banged his hand..on the ground..

uhh..dam..he panted ..I cant let u go away madhu..I cant..ah..u have to come with me...chahe mujhe uske liye kuch bhi karna pade.

madhu came back home..only to meet two furious eyes of her step father..

Where the hell were u...mere paise layi ho ya nahi. he asked eagerly

Madhu dint react to him..just placed her bag on the table..and stepped ahead but rajendre came in her way..holding her shoulders

uhh. leave me..u..uh..she struggled...

eeh ladki... joh puch raha hu uska jawab de..he shook her really hard..holding her chin in his hand..

mujhe paise nahi..mile..kal milenge...new job hai..isliyeee ..she spoke in disgust...still struggling with him

he left her..abruptly making her slump on the ground...

phir paise nhi ayi..u bitch..what the he'll..ia going on..this ia ur third job...kahi kuch aur chakar toh nahi chalu hai...na tera. ..he asked infuriated knotting his brows..

ah...she rubbed her elbow..not bothering to answer..

he stormed to her..once again..holding her hair..

mere sawal ka jawab..de..u wh**e..

ah..nai..nai..she squeezed her eyes...

inspire of..all.this..she shed no tear..

I told u na..new job hai..dats y..they will give payment tom..

rajendre laughed ..and then cupped her face..

she glared him..

thik hai..meri beti..aaj nahitoh kal hi sahi..i will get my money..

Madhu shrugged his hands..

he laughed..

chal ab..ja aur apni us..maa ko dekh le...

pani k liye taras rai hai..lagta..hai..

She looked him in horror

maaa..she ran inside in padmini's room..where she lied..on the bed..with tears in her eyes..

.maaa...madhu gasped ...as she witnessed the scene in front of her..

her mother was breathing heavily..and the room was in a mess..maybe she tried really hard to..grab the water..from the nearby table..

maa..madhu reached her...grabbing the glass of water from the aide..and making her drink..

padmini..gulped down the water..

Madhu wiped ...padmini's lips..from her...palms and settled her properly on the bed..

Padmini stared madhu in gratitude ..Breathing normally

meri beti..mere wajah se kya haal hogaya h..tumhara .. Padmini blinked her lashes.

she was bed ridden since last 3 yrs...and her daughter had to take over her responsibility of feeding Rajendre's wishes.

MAdhu wiped Padmini's tears..understanding her unspoken words ..


maaa m..fine..aap apna dhayan rakho..na..maine pani ka glass us wale tablepar rakha tha..na..aap bhi na

padmini blinked her lashes once again..

Kya karu mai inti lachar hogayi hu...meri zindagi mai kuch ni bacha ab..but tu..teri

kya halat hogayi hai..tumhari beta..kashe is narak se azadi mil jati..hume..

Madhu was inflicted to live this life because of her her..padmini can never forgive herself...for dragging madhu into this..

Madhu smiled and hugged padmini..shaking her head

dont worry ma. hum..yaha se bahar zarrur niklenge..I havent stopped hoping ...

MAdhu lovingly brushed padmini's hairs...

The strong Madhu malik or madhubala could handle anything but not the tears in her maa's eyes...She was vulnerable only in front of her. At this age she had seen the reality of this mean world..but before her maa she was her innocent daughter...

hum yaha se niklenge maa..bas ek baar..sultan wapas aa jaye..and we get married..phir hum is darinde ko chod kar ek naye duniye mi..chale jayenge...

she smiled with tears in her eyes...

this time..babaji..wont snatch her happiness ..

MAdhu closed her eyes...praying for sultan to come back.!!


So how was this...I wanted to show that MADHU is trapped in here but she isnt weak..personally i dint wanted to show a weak girl here..!!!

Hope u guys like the update please please please comment...likes and comment and equally counted..hence just likes arent enough!!




In this forum...my other on going story is...first kiss story which my frnd vandy is writing for me...

Hugs to u baby 😳

FIRST KISS STORY

and her and mine combined story..

THE VENGEANCE LOVER

Sorry for mistakes!!

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SORRY FOR MISTAKES!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice story luv this madhu
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wow, this Madhu is fantastic. I did not expect her to fight back like that!
Impressive.


Are RK's motives more than what they seem? I think he has other reasons for following her. And if he does, he better speak faster next time!!!

So Madhu is waiting for Sultan?? Hmm, interesting. will he come to rescue Madhu or will that be RK????

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