RM FF - Always on my mind #2 (Chap 25 + Epilogue Pg 34) - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update
i felt bad for both rk & madhu
i thought madhu going to do something like that
oo she did
ok i know rk also suffered with her after broke up
but he is the reason here for this mistake so he has too suffer little more for not listening to his heart so let him suffer little more

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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update it was...
Dhoka reached to Khudkushi... What's next Shriya!? 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ainanwer

mind blowing update yes I"m excepting this from madhu's behaviour in last update

hope she will be fine

Thank u so much dear :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shriya.bk

Res

Unres
Yay I'm 2nd !!!
Well coming to the update.

Shri ...shri...shri...what to tell? You always steal my heart in all of your updates.This time also I didn't cry...😆
Now I know that Rk really realised that he is in love with her and was going to tell her that he truly loves her..But it was too late when he entered Madhu's room, he could see blood. Rk I didn't know you get scared of blood.Well I hope Madhu won't die.
Let me tell Madhu a thing suicide isn't the way for a solution.
I just hope that Rk saves her and they live happily.
But I do think it would be the opposite of that.😆

Tfs for pm

Lmao 🤣 IN the nxt update u will surely take ur heart back. The nxt update is terrible. 😆 Lmao. Ur last line. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ni33

unres.
What can I say about this update...🤣
I like sad endings...😆 And I got one...🤣
Like you said in your note, I completely agree.
All I can say is we are nearing the ending. And I laughed at it. Just because they expect her to be fine if they drive her to the hospital...🤣 She is already dead, all they can do there is to procalim her dead...🤣 Then I am waiting for the epilogue...😆
I can't wait for that one.
Thanks for the update and for the PM.

Same pinch . Evn i love sad endings (Do i need to tell u tht? 🤔) 🤣
Lmao. U always laugh di 😡 🤣 Lol. Yeah. But people r still hoping for her to b alright. I mean HOW? Miracle? 😆 Like see...i completely declared her dead in this update...so why r people so unsure? 🤣 Anyways, i guess i have to burst all their bubbles in the next update *Ouch* 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi14

Very superb sad update !! Madhu y u did this yaar !! I thought she will tell rk that she will also take revenge for doing this to her and make rk jealous n all !! But it was just superb update !! Luvd the way u expressed rks feelings !!how was ur exam ???

Haha. Isnt it hatke? 😆 The exm got postponed. Lmao 😆 Lucky me.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: silverfire

Mind blowing update. RK's feelings r beautifully portrayed. How is RK going to make it up now?

Thank u so much :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Painful update.

Madhu should not have done this.

Agree wid u :(
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lathaprasad

plz continue soon & thanks for pm

I will. ANd my pleasure :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Guys, I am here with the last update of this ff :( Uh...This update is a disaster. I know it was supposed to be good. BUt i dont know how all my files got deleted and i had to write this again. And trust me, i was blank :( Anyways, here is the update. Go torture yourself by reading this update 🤣

Chapter 25

Trishna's POV

I pressed the horn as I tried to look outside the window. Impatiently, I got down from the car and tried to look ahead. There seemed to be an accident ahead. I got into the car and looked at dad. "I guess we are going to be stuck here for another hour. There is a traffic jam ahead." I said and dad nodded. I rested my head on the seat and closed my eyes frustrated. Suddenly my phone rang and my eyes shot up. Unknown number> I ignored it as I looked ahead. The phone rang again and I picked it up, curious. "Hello?" I said. "Hello. Trishna its me Rk. Madhu..." He continued speaking and I listened to him in horror. The phone slipped down my hand as tears escaped my eyes. I looked at dad as he stared at me. I quickly told him about di and got down the car. "You drive. I will go to the hospital. Come soon." I said and he nodded vigorously.


Rk's POV

I was sitting there outside the operation theatre with Trishna and Bittuji besides me. Trishna was shocked when she came to know that Madhu committed suicide. When she reached here, Madhu was already in the OT. She looked dejected. It's been 3 hours since we are sitting here.

"She loved you."

I looked beside myself to find Trishna talking to me. Her face was pale, tears running down through her cheeks. That day...when you left her...she looked so lonely...so broken. She loved you so much. She never trusted any one the way she trusted you Rk. She didn't even know that dad..." I looked at her shocked. Did she...did she know? "Yes Rk...i know why you did this...I know you did this to take revenge of your dad's death." she said looking at me.

"Who told you?" I asked confused.

"Dad told me Rk. He told me everything. He told me the reason... the truth behind your dad's murder." She said.

" What truth are you talking about Trishna?" I asked confused.

" Dad...dad didn't kill him Rk. It ...it was someone else...some one else killed your dad. Dad...That day...that day dad received a call Rk...asking him to take all the blame of Mohan Kundra's death on himself. When he rejected to this the man threatened him saying that he would kill everyone in our family. Dad didn't take this seriously. But then that day...that day when dad was out for a meeting some goons shot mom. Dad was left with no other option than taking all the blame over himself. He even went to the jail for a crime that he never committed. Dad told me about the phone calls and the blackmailing just some time ago. Di...di...never knew this Rk...it wasn't her fault..." saying this she broke down and cupped her face.

What...what did I do? Her dad was innocent...and I punished her for nothing at all. But if Malik didn't kill dad then who did? I looked at Trishna who sat besides my holding her forehead. "Then who killed dad?" I asked slowly. "I don't know Rk. I don't know." She said looking down. I was staring blankly at absolutely nothing. I had a sudden urge to go kill myself. I cant believe that I punished Madhu for nothing at all. Malik never killed dad. I closed my eyes as I tried to control my emotions. Suddenly the red light outside the OT went out indicating that the operation was over. I got up from the seat and stood there anxiously. The doctor walked out of the OT. His eyes spoke before he did.

"I am sorry Mr. Kundra...we couln't save her" he patted my shoulder and left from there. My world shattered infront of my eyes.Time stood still and i froze on the spot. I looked at the operation door and without any other thought I opened in and ran inside. There...i saw a figure covered with white sheet laid on the bed. I...i took steps near the figure and sat on the bed beside her. It took more than two minutes to gather the courage and lift the white sheet. I slowly held the sheet by its corner and lifted it to reveal the beautiful face of my love. A tear escaped my eyes and fell on her face. I started shaking her.

"Wake up Madhu...please wake up. I cant live without you Madhu. I am sorry. I wont ever hurt you again Madhu. I wont let you shed even a drop of tear Madu...i promise you Madhu...I will be the best husband in the world. I ...i will marry you...you will marry me na Madhu? Wake up dammit! Wake up! Madhu..."I cried my heart out. My whole body was shaking. My madhu was never going to be back to me. I had lost her forever and ever. I wont be able to see her ever again. I missed her so much.

"I love you Madhu...i love you so much. I ...i know I took forever to realize this madhu...and I am really sorry for that.I ...i don't know what to do Madhu...i don't know how to get you back...I just wish you be happy wherever you are Madhu. I wish you get all the happiness you deserve, I wish you get all the love you deserve. I will come to you one day Madhu. Wait for me. There will be a day where we will be together once again.Our day of LOVE! " I caressed her cheeks and ruffled her hair. This was the last time I was meeting my Madhu, my angel.

A placed a soft kiss on her lips. Our last kiss. I laid my head on her chest and let all the tears out. I looked at her one last time and started to back away looking at her.


Edited by shriyakadge - 10 years ago

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