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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone,
Here is the second and final installment of my return gift, i wrote this os, a few months back, at the time of our OS competition, for the surprise pack, but couldn't complete it at that time. And i like to dedicate it to Meenji aunty, as its her b'day today.

PS : Will heavily fail at logic, just wrote to meet all the 5 situation given for the contest, and kind of rushed at the end. Read it at ur risk


Love Anyways



Madhu came running near the big mansion with the thought that people living is such big mansion wil have big heart and wil help her and let her stay in their place atleast for this night, she turned back and found the gangsters out of sight, releived madhu , ran towards the mansion and pressed the bell and waited for some one to open it, an elderly person was at the door and madhu explained, how she was chased by the gangsters and how she missed the address where she has to reach, and seeing her condition, the poor man let her in and asked her to wait at the living hall, after few mins he came and asked her the room which he cleaned and kept required things for her to stay and introduced himself as Ramu kaka,the care taker of the house, she smiled at him and thanked him and went
inside the room.

Hearing a knock on the door, she opened the door in a confusion, as who it could be at this time,and she found the ramu kaka there, he came with a plate of food for her, she just grabbed it just like that, as she was very very hungry after what had happened the whole day. He took the plate and asked her to rest and was about to leave, he asked her not to get out of the room at night and he left.

Madhu was confused as why not to leave the room, as there may be any chance of ghost, she cursed her fate for missing the address, which was in her baggage, and before collecting that gangster fiasco started, she started to run, run and finally reached here, she was thinking of how her life changed within a day, when she heard some one shout or to say talking aloud, she was sure that it was not ramu kaka's voice, so out of curiosity she came out of her room and advanced towards the source of the voice.

She reached near a room and opened the door silently, there she saw a handsome man holding whiskey bottle in one hand as lilking ke talking to some one, but no one seems to exist there, she silently moved near him and found out that he was talking to a girl who didn't exist in the room, she smiled at his mono-acting and stood behind him and watched his acting skills, and suddenly the person rolled around and faced madhu, both were shocked, madhu's legs started to tremble out of fear, his chocolate brown eyes were filled with anger, he was at the edge of his anger,as this girl disturbed his romantic time with her dream girl, who is viisble only to his eyes, he asked "Who are u?" Madhu opened her mouth to speak, but hardly any sound came out, he raised his voice, but there
was no reply from her side.

He lost his temper, and threw the wine bottle towards her, madhu closed her eyes tightly and just moved a little and the bottle just swayed through her cheeks and the next moment she found it lying it on the floor into 100s of pieces, she was about to cry seeing his anger, she cursed her fate for making her go through all this, and before anything could happen, ramu kaka came as her saviour, and he spoke some thing in his ears and he nodded, and the next moment ramu kaka took her out of the place and left her in the room in which she was there previously, he asked her to sleep and not to get out of the room. Madhu heard the loud shout more and more but she didn't dared to take a step outside the room.

Morning madhu got up and went to take a bath, it was her usual practice to get up early in the mornings, and here as a usual practice, ramu kaka switched off the AC in rK's room,so that he wil get up due to sweating, as RK wil never get up that much easily and no one dared to wake him up, RK tried to turn on the AC, he searched for the remote, on not finding it, he went to the guest room and switched on the AC and slept there, he heard a door cracking sound and turned to the source and found a beautiful girl dressed up in anarkali, with her hair left open, she came to the nearby mirror and combed her hair, while RK gazed at her, and he was happy that finally he saw the face of his dream girl, and he looked at her with so much passion, he looked at her doe shaped eyes, button nose,
puply lips, he smiled how soft it would be under his lips and he closed his eyes imagining that, but his imagination was disturbed again with a sound of the scream, and he opened his eyes to see his dream girl shouting on seeing him, but he couldn't find why she was screaming, and the next moment Ramu kaka rushed in to solve the matter.

Ramu kaka came near him and told "Rishu baba, sterday this girl came to our place, she has missed her address to reach, so i allowed her to stay her for the night, i will get her cleared out of our house today, so just let her til that pls" and he just nodded and went out of the room and ramu kaka also left the room, throughout this, madhu was fully checking out him, as he was just in his black vest, and track pant, madhu couldn't move her eyes beyond him, She came out of her thoughts only on hearing the door sound, which RK closed on leaving her room.

Madhu helped ramu kaka in household works and he promised to take her to the nearby police station, as the area was very very less populated, and after breakfast work, madhu and ramu kaka went to police station and madhu gave in the details of her missing luggage and her US address, and
the police men asked madhu to stay with ramu kaka until they find any details about her sister house, for meeting whom she came back to India. Ramu kaka took her back and when they entered the house, madhu found another guy along with the sexy one whom she met in the morning. Madhu followed ramu kaka without giving any attention to the guys, but she felt both their eyes on her.

"So, who is this new chick, i have not seen her here before" Said sultan, RK's friend. RK told him about madhu, exactly what he had heard from ramu kaka in the morning, then he came to kitchen and asked ramu kaka about her, and ramu kaka told him some thing which madhu could not hear, as their talks were more like murmuring, and she stood a little distant from them. Since madhu had to stay there til, she get any information abt her sister address, she decided to work there in the mansion helping ramu kaka.

She went to the living room with the snacks plate in her had and kept it on the table and turned to leave, when she heard "Well Ms.Madhu?" she turned around hearing her name and found the new guy staring at her and the sexy guy was missing, so it must be the new guy, who called her name, she just had a smile and turned towards him not knowing what to say, sultan was a carefree person, and very friendly one, and instantly he made madhu as his friend, and they both became best buddies soon.

Rk was irked with sultan's frequent visit after madhu's arrival and more than that, sultan and madhu's budding relationship troubled him more, the face which he had accepted for his dream girl, smiling and lit up seeing sultan, but he never seen any such thing for him, he was not able to take this, he was planning to stop sultan frequent visit or to pack up madhu,but the second option made him feel bad, he was worried that he wil not be able to see his dream girl face everyday when he wakes up and before he goes to bed, but he was sure, one day surely madhu gonna leave his place, so he decided to speak with madhu before that.

He waited for her in her room, as she was busy helping ramu kaka in after luch works, and he waited there patiently, it was already an hour now, he decided to have a look on her and came to kitchen, but she was not there, but then he heard her voice and found her in garden spending time with sultan, once he reached, they both got up and RK faced sultan and said "Have u completed all the preparation work for tomorrow event?" Sultan nodded in a NO, then Rk replied back "Then what the hell u r doing here?" Both sultan and madhu was taken back with his sudden anger. Sultan left
silently telling madhu that he would meet her later.

Rk turned towards madhu and said "You will not talk to him , any more" pointing to sultan retreating back, madhu was stunned seeing his audacity to order her. She faced him and said "Excuse me, who are u to say this? What rights do u have to say to whom i can talk or not?" His anger rose up and he said "Who am I? right , who am I to say this?" He paused, he was irritated to the core with the way she was talking and more than that what she told has insulted him more." But this is my house, MY HOUSE, and u know what is ur place here, so just do as i say or " he pointed to the door, madhu felt insulted, and she ran to the room and cried for some time, then she decided to leave this house, she went to ramu kaka who was busy in kitchen and said aloud, so that RK who was sitting in living room could hear her "Ramu kaka, thank u for everything, i am debted to u for all the help u did, but now i need to leave, i can't stay at a place, where i don't have any self-respect,so am leaving"

RK stunned hearing this, he just wanted her to obey him, or in frank he want her to avoid sultan and not this one, he rushed to his room and thought of all possibilites to stop her, but unluckily he didn't get any idea, finally he came out to plead her not to leave him, but he was not convinced with this thought, as he thought she was no one to him, that he could go for pleading, he just crossed the kitchen and found ramu kaka missing, so he knew even he would be there. He was frustated and angry on himself for taking up that tone with her, he moved further and his eyes landed on the knife in the dining table and he slit his wrist with it and stood there seeing the blood coming out of it.

Ramu kaka who convinced madhu to wait for few mins, so that he could come with her and drop her at some safe place, he rushed to kitchen and found Rk standing with slitted wrist and he shouted "Rishu baba, what have u done, madhu beta, come fast, bring the first aid box" Madhu came running hearing the sound and was shocked to see RK at that stage, and ramu kaka cleaned his wound and bandaged it, while madhu stood there staring at him, once ramu kaka left, RK went near her and bend down and told "You wil not go anywhere, u wil do as i say" while his lips caressing her earlobes, madhu stood there shocked out of her wits.
The wound was deep and blood was continuously oozing out, so ramu kaka compelled him to come to doctor, but rk was rk, he stayed adamant and finally agreed to come to doctor with madhu's company.Madhu didn't even cared to look at his face, she remained silent, while all the time, she
didn't went inside the doctor cabin with him, she waited outside and they both started back to home, on reaching home, madhu left to her room quickly, and when RK tried to talk to her, she just left the place, finally RK got her in the living room, he trapped her, by holding her elbow through his and cleared his throat to make her look into him.

She just stayed there without any reply, while RK asked "Why are u avoiding me?" Madhu just glared at him as a reply, when RK repeated the same question, she replied "Ask that question to yourself, as u know the answer very well" and madhu tried to leave, while he trapped her with the nearby wall and said "You are my dream girl" madhu was shocked listening to him while he explained, how he had a dream girl, and how he missed her face everytime, and seeing her on the first morning here, he
decided that her dream girl should have a face like her.

Madhu was feeling sad for RK that how he imagines everything himself, and also she feel irritated with his behaviour and his insecurities towards her everytime she talks to sultan. She really felt helpless.Ramu kaka consoled her saying that he was not that bad as she think, but she was not in mood to listen, when she heard sultan voice and turns back and found him standing before her, it seems like he was standing there from before, while Ramu kaka was talking to her. Sultan started from his part to talk about RK, as how good he was only excpet those times, when he was not in good mood or like that.

Madhu was not interested to listen all their blabberings of RK being so good, but her heart was saying something opposite to her, and she started to move, and then she stood stil hearing the word love from Sultan. She turned around and went near Sultan and asked "Are u mad, to talk about love in such a short span, what u guys know about me to love me "Sultan smiled a little and said "It takes a moment to fall in love, and exactly that was what happened with RK, he is just lil mad and classic, he always dream about his dream girl and he started to imagine her staying around him to wash off his loneliness, and when he met u, he imagined u as his dream girl" Madhu turned aside and said "Cut the crap" and she stepped aside when Ramu kaka said "When i say RK is the guy with whom ur
sister has fixed ur engagement, and for which u had visited India" Madhu turned around shocked.

She was getting shocking news one by one, and she was not able to digest it all at the same time, seeing her in confusion, ramu kaka explained how police came back with her sister address last day and RK was not ready to send her without checking the truth behind, and then how he went in person to check the people in that address and there ur sister was first shocked seeing RK and then when he told madhu was with him, and ramu kaka also informed her that her sister and jeeju are coming today to take her back. She felt happy that she is going to meet her sister today.

She wanted to thank RK for the steps he had taken for her, but apart from that he wanted to go away from him, so she went in search of him, but didn't found him, so she went back to her room and found a parcel,she opened the parcel and found a black net saree, and found a note with it, and its written

To my dream girl

Atleast this saree can be with u to remind that u have met a person who is so badly and madly in love with u, i heard ur convo with sultan, and am sorry they all forced u to accept my love,but i don't want to force u in this relation, u r free to go, ur family wil arrive shortly to take u back.

With Love
RK
Love u forever

Madhu felt a pinch at her heart, was she abandoning him unnecessarily, before she could think further her sister and jeeju came in and she left shortly with them.

It was 2 months now, after she had returned back to her sister house, she had told her sister how wierd she found RK and they have left the proposal, and madhu had strictly told them that she don't want to get married any soon, and they agreed with her. Madhu started doing her Masters and she use to spend time alone, most the times she use to think about RK, how he was speaking to her dream girl and thinks her in that place, madhu felt a pair of eyes on her and before she could turn back, the person use to disappear, and this is not the first time this is happening. She just shrugged and started to move, when a small girl from roadside came near and handed over a piece of paper and ran off. Madhu opened the letter hesitantly and it read as follows

Coming again to win your love

Yours
Ever loving ...


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ARMB thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me 1st yayyy!!! First let me Dance 😉
Coming back to the Update... it was a nice Os... Rk being Rk he is soo possesive and madhu being madhu she wont budge N except his junoon se bara love... but jo Rk ka hai woo us ka hi rehta N he will come back to win her love... :-)
Edited by ARMB - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What an os
I love every bit of it👏
Di m not going to throw Tomatoes 😛
But a Wish😉
PLz a next part How RK will make His madhu HIs...😳😳😳😳😳
Plz PLz pLZ plz pretty plzzz
Fabulous Update😊
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow it was superb one !! Last one coming to win your love again was too good !! Write the next part also!! I want to know what rk does to win her love !thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ahann di wat a start
loved it hayee my kundra boy is awesome
but ur bala so dumb how can one leave such a hot property anyways show effect hai uspar
dumbness jaati hi nahi lol
just kidding loved the concept
plss write another part too
n plss update feel my love
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A great OS Uma di.
What a meeting and the hidden truth behind it all.😆
I do wonder if Sultan wrote that note.🤣 Or perhaps it was Rama kaka.🤣
I don't think there is any need for a second part. The reader is left to think. And I am thinking in the revenge track here. Sultan wrote that to avenge RK for taking his prosperous future wife Madhubala away from him.🤣 Poor RK his dream girl will never be his. 😆 Keep on dreaming possessive and obsessive loverboy.🤣
Madhu will then realize she loves RK and runs away from the mandap marrying Sultan, only to meet an accident where she wakes up, imagines RK to be her husband.🤣 Okay the alternative I thought of is far way worse, than this gentle one.😆 The story would end up to a horror story.🤣
Thanks for the OS and for the PM Uma di.
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mindblowing OS!!! I love this possessive RK!!! lastly that note please make it TS dii!!! eagerly waiting to read moreee!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os 😃

after long time i saw Rk possession and i loved it 😃

so loved it so much 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os love it 😳
Tfs for pm 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS.
RK is RK. But liked that he did not want to force her.
nicely written.
plz write another part.

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