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The news channels n newspaper were flooded with only one headline "Superstar Rk Meets with
a serious accident last night after Madhubala leaves him at the wedding altar".The
media was surrounding the gates of city hospital to know wat was happening inside but rks
security covered the whole hospital to avoid any more problems .Bittuji was making calls after
calls to top doctors of the world N radhaji was sitting outside the OT crying for her son who
was now on verge of dying .She prayed to god to do last mercy on them n save him this time .
The doctor came out with worried face N bittuji rushed to him "Doctor doctor
how is chief"plss save him i beg u , Doctor holded bittujis folded hands n said "we r
trying our level best mr.sharma but rks condition is so critical that we cant say anything n
this is the third time in a year we he is admitted over here after getting shot n then being
beaten up brutually , he already knew that he was weak his body was not in a position to take
up any more trauma n it seems he had went through lot of stress last few days n top of that he
had hit his head badly , there r chances that he might go to coma or even get a memory loss
but still its all in gods hand now By the way it will be better if u cld get madhubalaji
here since the time rk has come here he is taking her name in unconcious state so maybe shd
cld help us ".Anger ran in bittujis veins hearing her name N he shouted " no she is
not coming over here she is the reason y chief Here i wont let her come here ,
i have called the best surgeon ms. Rishika kapoor over here she will handle
chiefs case "n he went out to fight his tears.
Flashback
Rk apologized
to all the malliks n madhu n declared his love to her n the whole mallik family laughed
at him n madhu declared that she never came back to him she was just here to spoil his life
to show him that he never deserved love .U thought i came to marry you naa mr. Rishabh
kundra i played the same game with u , U think i ll forgive u no never i ll never forgive
you n let me tell u i m going to marry mukund soon u breaked my marriage with him n now i m
leaving u n marrying him "Shock was written all over rks face he begged her did everything
he cld to make her understand that he loves her but they all just ignored his pleadings n left
frm there.Rk breakdown n cries for several hours n then finally wen his tears died he got up n
went away in his car only to meet with a major accident.Flashback ends.Bittuji
recalled everything n cried Madhu i considered u above my chief u knew he loves u he
accepted his faults n wanted to correct them he begged u but u just destroyed him fourth time
n in such a way that he can never return frm it ever un his life now , i wont forgive u if
something happens to him i thought u will understand that his life was like that only thats y
he forgot to trust himself n his heart but u just did the same wat others did to him
u will regret doung this to him but it will be too late For you to come back urself destroyed ur happiness n now god will only punish u for wat
u did u laughed on his fourth heartbreak but this time destiny will show u wat u lost by
not taking up the chance.

At chawl

The whole mallik family was shocked they never
expected this , madhu was sitting numb just luking at the tv which was flashing rks photo
every now n then , tears escaped her eyes recallung everything she did yday , in her anger
she forgot that rk was broken already frm inside he wont be able to bear the fouth betrayal
n still she did it .Suddenly she got up n started runnung to gate Only to be
stopped by trishna ''Where r u going madhu ?Didu i want to meet rk i want him he
cant leave me like this i want to see him plss let me go i know i did wrong yday but i was
so blinded in my hatred that i forgot That revenge is never going to get me any
happiness i love him didu n i want to see him i ll beg him i ll do everything but plss
let me go to him , she said sobbing.Enough madhu u already did wat u wanted to do
now wats there to go n see , i know he did wrong with u but he truely loved u n he apologized
to u infront of chawl ppl n then yday too infront of media but u n maa didnt listened to me
n carried on with this revenge plan along with that liser mukund who left you wen we needed
someones support the most n that time it was rk who might have came in our lives by his own
motive but he did helped us n saved mallik n did everything for us.How did u forgot
wat all He did for our family , u cld have given him a chance instead of betraying him like that
n maa called him monster n heartless but r u ppl less than him if he didnt listened to his
heart did u listened u too got blinded by ur ego n revenge n u did wat he did to to u infact
more worse bcoz u knew how his life was but still u carried on with ur plan.I thought i was
most selfish but now u look me more selfish to me yday seeing rk begging you i realised wat
a fool u r to let him go away his eyes spoke the volume of love he had for u n u simply
destroyed it in one go , i feel disgusted with u today madhu .''Plss didu dnt say like
that i love him i know i made a mistake but plss let me go n see him he needs me ''
"madhu brokedown n padmini , mallik n roma came to console her n trishna went inside in
anger.Maa mallik roma plss take me to rk i cant lose him nothing shd happen to him plss
maa i want to see him .

At hospital

Mr. Sharma tell me everything that has happened
every single detail it seems there r things which were eating him up frm long n his brain is
stressed up n he doesnt to wake up said dr. Rishika kapoor who was now incharge of rks case
.Bittuji was abt to speak wen he saw the malliks entering n his expressions changed to hate
n disgust. Rishika too saw that n turned into their direction .They reached bittuji n he
spoke with anger" now wat do you want is there anything left to do with him ""Bittuji
plss let me see him once ",pleaded madhu .Let you see him once soThat u cld kill him only this time u know i
was right wen i doubted u wen you mallik shot him but chief was sure enough that u can
never backstab him only if he knew that u were like others too u knew he always considered
u the most righteous person n himself the most wrong person but u breaked the delusion
Congratulations madhu u destroyed rk now go n celebrate with mukund."I dnt know
wat problems u guys have but i need to know wat all has happened with rk to start on his
treatment i need to know abt his mental condition bcoz no medicine is working on him ,rishika
spoke with curiosity n walked back in to OT .Just go away frm here all of u chief doesnt
need you n now u can leave ,Bittuji said sternly n walked back near OT .Radhaji
was sitting like a statue n the bhatias were standing there with fake worry on their faces.
Rishika came out n said ,We r shifting him in icu for now he will be needing other
operation too n till then he will. Be on lufe support system .Mr.sharma plss come with me
n detail me abt him so that i know how exactly i shd handle this case .

After some hours

All the operations were done , but still there was no improvement in rks condition,
it seemed he lost all his hopes to live with the exit of madhu frm his life, on the
other hand his fans were going crazy outside the hospital n were trying hard to know
one news of him but the security has been so tight that they cldnt know anything .
The malliks n kundras were still in hospital praying for his life ,
all for their own purpose if some wanted him for wealth the other wanted him for
their happiness but all forgot that they have been forcing on him their
wants n needs but not love . Madhu herself collided her destiny with rk
by interfering in his matters wen he never wanted but wen he wanted to take a chance
truely she herself gave up on that chance n chose to part ways n now she wanted him
to be with her wen he again lost himself in his pain .
n now it was time for destiny to play its card on that 14year child who still resided
in that guy who was fighting for his life in each second .
The nurse came out hurriedly for the doctor , n the atmosphere once again
got panicked n the families got more worried .
Rishika rushed in the cabin hurriedly n wen she came out
she was more than worried , bittuji rushed to her n she informed him
''his heart has stop beating we r going to give him shock to bring him back ''.
n without waiting for any reply she went inside again .
madhu sinked to the floor with tears flowing frm her eyes ,
everyone became numb , nothing was making sense to them at this point of time .

Madhu woke up suddenly n went to the glass doors through which rk was visible
with a blurred vision she caressed his face through the glass doors n whispered
''plss rk come back to me , i cant live without you pls come back ''.
rishika came out after half an hour n finally in several hours they heard the first news
which made them happy that rk was safe now .Everyone thanked bappa n rishika but
it wasnt the end the most biggest shock was still yet to be revealed with rk losing
his memory .
''Dr. how can he lose his memory , madhu asked with a terrified voice '.'
we cant say how much will he remember or it is partial or permanent
he hit his head very badly n seems he has been under lot of stress lately
which has effected his brains n inner nerves so chances r of amnesia which may result in
him forgetting his whole life or a part of his life , we can only wait till he gains conciousness
rishika informed them n went back to her cabin.
fear gripped madhus heart
wat if he forgets me n our love , how will i live her subconcious asked her .
but there was no answer as she herself invited this misery to herself
if she wld have seen things in a better way n instead of revenging him
she wld have opted for a second chance for her love he wld have been with her
n they wld have been happily married now but she chose the worst n now it
was all destinys call for them .

It was early morning wen rk gain conciousness , everyone became happy
n they all rushed in to see him .he slowly opened his eyes n blinked twice to adjust it
to day light n rishika greeted him gud morning with a smile on her face .
gud morning doctor , he replied in a low voice .
where am i , he asked .
do u remember who u r ?
yes , superstar rishabh kundra , he said with confidence in his voice .
his eyes suddenly went around the whole room n he fumed in anger
bittuji he shouted suddenly n in a second bittuji came near him
y so many ppl r here , dnt u know i hate so much of crowd .
mr. kundra plss relax , they r ur family dnt u know them .
doctor i know only these five ppl , he said pointing to the bhatias n bittuji
who r all rest people , r they my fans .
madhu luked horrified , the thing which she feared has finally come true
her rk has forgotten her , he forgot that she is a part of his life .
she holded trishnas hand who was standing beside her who was equally shocked
with this.
rk was getting irritated with so much of fuss around him , his head started hurting so
rishika adviced all of them to wait out .
madhu breakdown as soon as they came out frm the icu in padminis arms .
maa he forgot me , he forgot us '' she cried .
padmini tried to console her but it was of no use .

at the other side
mr. kundra dnt u know any of them she asked pointing to the pictures of malliks.
no , how many times shd i say u , he blasted her .
plss calm down , u r weak u have been operated twice plss dnt stress urself, she
said in a calm tone.
''how can i not take stress wen u urself r interrupting my privacy'' he snorted .
i need to be alone n plss i dnt know any of them i havent seen them before ,
he shouted n closed his eyes in frustration.
this doctor was definately not going down the throat of rishabh kundra
n he just wanted to go back in his home n have some peace.
ok i ll leave on ur own now u pls relax n dnt worry u will be fine soon.
i want discharge now , he ordered her n before u cld deny me let me
tell u rk doesnt take no for an answer ''he replied in his husky voice .
alright i will n i will not say u no , she said irritated by his tantrums
she had heard abt his attitude but first time she was seeing him
n he was much more than ppl know him .
she came out n informed everyone n went back to her room
to discharge him ofcourse providing the hospital nurse to take his care .

Bittuji , mujhe saari scripts dekhni hai abhi , he ordered straight after reaching home .
but chief u need rest '' but he was cut off by rks voice
bittuji i m fine n i think u need rest more than me
ghar jaaiye aur aram kariye mera dimag jitna kharabh hai usse aur zyada kharab ho gaya to
aapke liye bahut problem ho jaayegi ''.
he started to walk upto his room wen deepali interrupted him
n he gave her a deadly glare which said '' dnt u dare speak a word now''
she backed off with his one look n h started walking upstairs
wen her voice reached his ears ''rk'' n he turned around to see
who it was . his eyes were stuck on her but his face was
devoid of any emotions n feelings ,
bittuji tried to stop her
''rehne dijiye aane dijiye use hum bhi to dekhe kaun hai ye '',
he said in his sexy voice n looked at madhu who was staring lovingly at him .
he came down n looked at her with a smirk on his face
n she recalled the early evil rk .
kya chahiye aapko miss, he asked in his sexy voice .
madhubala , she said in low voice n tried to gauze his reaction on the mention of her name
but his face showed no emtions nothing , but his heart felt a sudden pang of pain
which he avoided to show infront of her .
to main kya karoon agar tum madhubala ho to , he said in irritated voice.
in first place tum iss building mein aayi kaise
aur secondly aayi ho bhi to kyun aaayi ho
i dnt think main tumhe jaanta bhi hoon , he said with attitude
n she felt helpless .
main tumhe humare bare mein batane aayi thi , she said with low voice.
humare baare mein he asked with raised brows n looked at bittuji who was
looking at everything but at him .
tumahara matlab hai hum ek doosre ko jaante hain
she nooded n then said sif jaante nahi bahut achhi tarah se pehchaante bhi hai .
he was getting confused with her words n bittuji interrupted
n angrily started scolding madhu but rk stopped him
enough , chillana band kariye bittuji main abhi bhi yahi hoon , he said in finality
n looked towards madhu who had tears in her eyes
dekho jo koi bhi ho tum rona band karo aur saaf saaf bolo
kya rishta hai humara .
she started narrating him everything n with each thing
his temper was rising more n more .
bas ek shabd aur nahi , he shouted n holded his head in his hands
which was hurting like anything with all the revealations all of a sudden.
n he went upstairs n closed himself in the room .
No this cant happen , he shouted n breaked everything in his room.
Bittuji who was scolding madhu rushed upstairs
to his room along with madhu who was crying profusely
rk rk plss open the door let me explain u everything
plsss listen to me once we love each other a lot
plss believe me , she kept on repeating the words
bittuji also shouted plss chief listen once everything then take ur decision
plss chief listen once '' he pleaded but it was of no use
he didnt opened the door n soon the sound of breaking things vanished .
After some time he opened the door n everyone was standing there
the bhatias also had came hearing his shoutings n madhu had called
her family too who were now worried like hell.
everything was now in his hands only .
madhu looked at him with tearful eyes n went near him
n tried to touch his face but he jerked her hand off
his eyes were blood shot red n anger was filling his face .
he walked downstairs n sat on sofa waiting for everyone
to gather around ,one look at his face
n it was clear how mad he was at everyone n at
himself .
''Ap sab ke liye to bahut khushi ki baat honi chahiye ki mujhe kuch yaad hi nahi
to phir ye dukh kaisa aap sab ke chehro par haan kis baat se dar rahe aaplog
ki main phir se aapki beti se badla loonga usse chaar phere ki shaadi karoonga use torture karoonga etc, etc .''
fikar mat kajiye main aisa kuch nahi karne waala hoon , he said pointing towards the whole
mallik family n madhu .
''aur badmaash company of bhatias aap sab yahan se jaa sakte hai
kyunki rk ko apni zindgi ke faisle lena aire gaire logon ke saamne pasand nahi ,
so have a bad nite n bad dreamsss.''he said with his charming voice.
rk ek baar meri baat to suno, madhu came near him n said with
tears in her eyes .
''sabse pehli baat ye rona dhona band karo '',
aur doosri baat meri baat abhi poori nahi huyi
isliye beech mein bolne ki zarurat nahi
ye tumahara ghar nahi ye mera superstar rk ka ghar hai
yahan wahi hoga jo main chahoonga , is that clear madhubala
ahannn !!!!!!!!!!!
n for a moment madhu remembered the old rk who use to speak in same way.
The lawyer came with some papers
n everyone looked at him stunned .
''mr. kundra jo aapne kaha tha sab ho gaya hai bas ab
aap ispar sign kar dijiye aur uske baad madhubala aur aapke saare rishte
khatam ''.
he took the papers in his hand n checked everything n madhu looked at him stunned.
''rk tum ye kya kar rahe ho tum aisa kar sakte ho ''.
kyun nahi kar sakta , tumhi ne kaha tha na ki maine tumse zabardasti shaadi ki
tumhe hurt kiya tumhe takleef di tumhare pyaar ka mazaak udaya n etc, etc
to lo main tumhe har cheez se azaad karta hoon
wo 40 lakh dene ki koi zarurat nahi
aaj se tum azaad ho apni zindgi jee sakti ho '' n he signed the papers
n finished their half wedding contract.
''aur haan rahi baat mere tumse pyaar karne ki
to iss baat ko bhi main bhool chuka hoon
aur jaisa ki tumne kaha ki tum mujhe chor kar jaa chuki thi
mujhse badla lekar mujhe neecha dikha kar tumne mujhe tod diya tha
to pyaar ka to sawaal hi nahi aata ab ''.
''dua karoonga ki ab hum zindgi mein dubara kabhi na mile
alvida madhubala .''
n he walked off back to his room leaving everyone stunned
n shocked with his new avtar.



P.s Okay now throw tomatoes n eggs watever u want .
this was the most stupidest os i ever wrote
but i just dnt know y i never cld get out that
memory loss n hospital out of my mind .
n to be honest i always wanted something like
this n how rk wld have reacted if he lose his memory
n he wld know their history , so its just a dream os for me .
n let me tell u there wont be any other part for now atleast cant say for future n
the response i ll get i ll see wat i can do n basically i feel
its better to leave somethings incomplete .
they r better off without each other on this phase of their life.
Hope u guys will like it n plss do give ur opinions .




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varshajoshi17 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yayyy first to comment
Superb os but frankly speaking i need a hAppy ending so i request u to write one more part sorry if u feel bad 😊
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS Neha
I didn't expect that ending though
But I liked it regardless
Don't worry I don't have anything to throw at you
I like tomatoes 😆
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastic os, neha baby!!
i hope u r happy now after sending ur Rk to hospital LOL!!
ending was really unexpected but madhu deserves that for ditching Rk & planning to marry that mukku makki LOL!! how could she think like that?? i'm so happy that u butchered madhu's character bcos in serial they will show her as mahaan & only damage our Rk's role so glad to read something different LOL!! haha...there is my right kamina...muahh...did the right job baby...by show her out of ur mansion & also in ur life!! great!!
i dont think this story needs a second part as kavya always says all stories doesn't need a happy ending & i feel this one is perfect dear!! but if u decide to read one more part also i'm glad to read it!!
thanks for the m dear but sorry for the short comment as i couldn't type more in one hand as i got my other hand cracked in a minor accident LOL!!

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u wrote with quite a different concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome os neha
Thanks for the pm
Loved RK as always but not madhu she take revenge frm my RK n make his condition worst but it was just an sweet n simple but emotional update loved it
Keep on writing more dear
Edited by 989859 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I first this accident was rks plan to make madhu realize that she loves him but this totally different !! It was just awsome though i expected that rk will remember in last and there will be happy ending !!its okay u can write one more part where tk will get some memories abt madhu and after that they will reunite !!superb n different os !!thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great OS Neha.
And no I won't throw tomatoes at you.😆
You know this OS really shows one thing.😆
How much you like RK.🤣
You wrote it so we pity his state and justify his actions.😆
And to h*** with the rest.😆
Well I do feel like it. And I really liked this OS. But again RK made a visit to the hospital.
I guess next one will be in jail.🤣
I forgot about that Little thing. The OS also shows how much you like him to end up in the hospital.😆
I have no problem with that, just with those Bhatia faking their emotions.🤣
Thanks for the OS and for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome Neha, I just loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb OS, Neha! Instead if RK, I felt it to be you who took revenge from Madhubala... 🤣 And yeah..m I don't want any other part... Let it be like this... Not every story needs happy ending...

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