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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tulika.Vdian

Very nice and yeah want happy ending...
Happy diwali...

Thanks dear and diwali wishes to u.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Abt note.

Even though i like happy ending but only with RISHBALA together ❤️
.Being a diehard RM pankhi I dnt like them being paired with someone else n my answer is same. If its RISHBALA together in d end then im happy otherwise big no.
But dats my pov n liking as u asked. Its completely ur story dear n u can end it a way u like.😃

Anyways it wil be Rishbala so no worries yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shasha1989

it's a lovely update ..but i'm really confused yaar 😉...plz update the next soon & thanks for pm

Thanks dear, wil clear it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharoan

Very interesting...I guess RK married both the twin sisters..After the death of his first wife he married her twin sister...Its very thrilled...please update early..

Welcome back sharoan, seeing u after long time, may be i didn't meet u when u r here, u almost cracked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well guys am back with part 3, i could see the dropping likes, it may be because of me not regular here or some of u not happy with my current writing here, ok that don't stop me from continuing it here.
Thanks to all those who liked and commented on previous chapter


Part 3

Madhubala and Madhuri were the twin sisters, entertaining everyone around them, but in real, they both can go to any extent to make the other one happy, and they lived with their mom in Mumbai, whereas Malik, their dad worked at Delhi, and visit them just once in a month. And that day would be a block buster day for them as the full day they would go for shopping, movie, beach and enjoy to the core.And Madhuri had this habit of taking all medicine beforehand for all her spl occasion, so that her health won't come as a issue, while Madhubala wil not take medicine even if she is on her death bed.

Both Madhubala and Madhuri were complete chatterbox, and would always go high with their mischief, and for this reason padmini would never let her girls go out alone, And during their college days, both the girls started to their NCC camp, as it was a compulsary one from second year, and they had lots of fun and as usual Madhubala was the one punished for all things, as Madhuri was clever enough to escape from all things, but she will not let her sister suffer alone, they would again plan for next mischief, to escape from punishment.The only secret between them is RK. Madhubala was secretly in love with him, whereas there was mutual attraction between Madhuri and RK, but all three are maintaining the secret within their heart.

Madhuri was waiting for RK to come and confess, as they have completed months in look-look session, now she badly want to move to next step, but whenever she try to speak to him, either they wil be surrounded with their friends or Madhubala or RK wil always give a blank look, as he was confused and not able to differentiate btw Madhuri and Madhubala, both madhubala and madhuri were little hesitant to speak about this to other. Finally one day RK was surprised seeing the call me note on his locker Which stated "Call me sharp at 7" with a landline number and below it was signed as Madhu, he smirked and felt lil embrassed that he was so stupid and wasted time, whereas his girl was bold enough to give him her number and he kept it safely in his pocket and reached home and was waiting for the clock to struck 7, as he want to be punctual, atleast for the first time.

His heart was beating at the high speed with every ring and it was finally answered, hearing a soft female voice, he sighed out in happiness and he huskily said "Madhu" and there was silence for some time and again she said "Hello" so he cleared her saying "This is RK ya" and there she was completing blushing hearing his name, and she slowly started to reply to his questions, and they talked for 20 mins and then she cut the call with some lame excuse, as she wanted to know whether its all a dream.

Madhuri found Madhubala different on that day, she was late to home today, after coll, she went to hang out with deepali and now reached home, she didn't question her , she went to refresh, and came back and had her dinner, as she was fully busy with the rehearsal work and costume purchase for the cultural day which was coming within a couple of days.She rested on bed, and thats when it struck her that she asked RK to call her at 7, she smiled remembering how she had mentioned it as madhu, so that she would not get caught, instead she can blame Madhubala, as she was always referred as Madhu at home, she rushed down and asked her mom whether there was any call asking for her, but her mom replied she came back home just before half an hour, so she went to check with Madhubala, and there she was deeply drowned in some book, Madhuri shooked her out of thoughts and asked many questions indirectly to check whether RK has called her, Madhubala hid everything about RK's call, as she knew her sister is a little bond, and she will guess everything with small clues, and she was scared she will tease her and blackmail her with this for all her demands, hence she told she was not in home, as she went out to buy some groceries, Madhuri left her. She thought that this phone idea was so bad and she wanted to meet him in person.

Thats all for now, First diwali wishes to u all, and i wil be back by Friday, so no updates til that, have a haapy and safe diwali, . And since i have made some changes to the track which i have planned while starting, this won't be a TS anymore, so am changing it to SS,don't forget to drop in ur likes and comments

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres yipeee first time first on ur update di party time for me 🥳
So now mystry is little bit solved that they are twin sisters😊
Superb update di n happy diwali 😊
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ARRGGHH!! my net ditched me!😡
i missed my precious 1st spot😭
i thought to make hat trick but flop hogi!!😭

okay coming to the yet another CONFUSING update!!😆
Awesome update dear!! interesting twist!! i'm loving it!!👏
just answer me one question dear, can u confuse us anymore??? i agree we hd predicted many of ur updates even before u update but for that u r taking revenge on us LOL!!😆
okay cool! let me make myself clear...
Madhubala & madhuri are twins!!😛
madhuri & Rk as feeling mutually!!😉
madhubala has one side love on Rk😲
Madhuri left the note to call him but that dumbo forgot it!! can't she rite her name madhuri instead of madhu knowing full well there is one more madhu who is looking the same like her?🥱😆
Rk called at 7 & talked to madhubala thinking it as his madhuri!😳
poor Madhubala mistakes & thinks Rk also loves her!!😭
Madhuri is clever than madhubala but MB is the one to get punishments!!
Madhuri takes her medicines with her but not madhubala! okay! but y medicine thing is specially mentioned?? did madhubala died in any disease?😕
okay! in person Rk loves madhuri but through phone he talks & loves with madhubala!! so he is in love with both?😲 now i wonder eye to eye love is greater or ear to ear love is great ?? LOL🤣
now my doubt is with whom he got married madhuri or madhubala??😕
who is alive & who is dead? madhuri or madhubala? 😕
who is Rk's wife?? i mean 1st wife if he married both the sisters one after the other LOL!!
who is the one sleeping with teddy one side & Rk other side LOL!!🤣
u could have given us a little clue by saying madhuri or madhubala anyone of them sleeping with teddy LOL!!🤣

i think madhubala is dead with giving regards to her lack of taking medicines LOL!!😆 & madhuri is alive & mayu calls her madhu ma as she herself wrote madhu in that note. she likes being called madhu.😉

Rk loved madhubala more bcos he came to know more while they talk but in look he is quite confused ith madhuri & madhubala so i'm going by ear to ear love & logging Rk married MB & she died during pregnancy or some disease & he married Madhuri after all he had mutual feeling for her LOL😆

but contrary to the above i think madhubala is alive after all this is rishbala story & Not Rishri story!!
but if u are going to show Rk living with his deceased wife's memory forever & ever then kill madhubala & show madhuri alive!! or if he is gonna fulfill mayu's wish then kill madhuri & show madhubala alive after all she was his phone lover LOL & unite Rishbala & give happy ending!!😃

if i was in Rk's place i would married both even if there is anymore look alike then i'll marry them too bcos you have same face, same name... then what else one need?? i would enjoyed my life with maatraan sister LOL!!🤣

i guess u'll sleep well after confusing us so much!! but i'm glad that u changes the ts to ss so i can read more from u!! thanks hun!!😛


HAPPY DIWALI DEAR!!🤗
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Confusion cleared.
So RK married Madhuri earlier n she is no more.
Nice update.
HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahaan finally they are twins !!that charulata movie is similar to this !! HAPPY DIWALI!! waiting for ur next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update. waiting for the nxt update.happy diwali

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