TS - SHE IS MINE part 2 posted on page 4 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well i want to say this first, neha is back on the track of writing.. Do write more neha, it feels good to read your writing.. I always like this possessive rk. Cute ending.. I liked the way how daddy and sassy pair up.. Good one.. Waiting eagerly to see your next work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NehaVdian

aww dii thanku so much welcome baby!!
i m glad u loved it yeah this rk is quite similar to show one as he kept on saying madhu is his n i purposely didnt made bittuji n mohan do much as hero has to revenge for heroine n especially wen its my story rk has to do wat he does the best well done! yes, madhu is his so he is the only one to show haq on her & fight for her!! i completely agree with u!! u r as possessive on Rk as Rk LOL!! n yeah i thought of inserting the song i guessed it! how could u forgot the song after giving such a powerful title!!
but actually net was troubling a lot that's fine dear! as u said when he says that line immediately that song went on bg & that's y i mentioned it too.
so i cldnt get the lyrics but u can imagine it very well that the song is playing in bg wen he says that
yeah i read simis story its my fav too n i loved the name there too oh okay!
but while writing this i had a idea to match up with sassy so i used that n even i have never thought that i wld take up the leap but getting them married was getting too common
so i resorted to different way i really liked the idea of showing their happy life after a short leap with their kids instead of ending it just with their marriage.
lol they didnt knee that it will be boy haha... i was just kidding!!
sassy just wished that she will get a bro even i wished for a baby boy for rishbala!!
n as it is said that small children r always close to god n god always hears them so our sassys wish was fulfilled n they had babay boy so u r the God here. becos u only fulfilled her wish rite?

i just loved ur story its one of my favs i'm honored!! thank u so much baby!
n glad u laughed on my comment lol yeah! it was lovely & funny comment!! i read it thrice till now & i'll read it whenever i feel low to make my mood cheerful! thanks!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Beautiful update
Loved rk's protective n possessive sides
If not for his mother rohan would hve been dead
Perfect n cute ending
Loved it
Keep writing dear
Loving ur write ups
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awsome loved RK's possisivness thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Awesome update sautan 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
great ts neha..loved it..
do write more rishbala stories & plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
nice story neha
finally they maried and have a sweet kiddo.
hehhe rohan need more punches.it was really awesome scene
and saharsa...aww cho cute girl
awesome TS neha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1- So gripping plot it is Neha! Rohan as a spoiled elder brat of Kundras and as expected RK being the shining armour... Too good! I liked it how you showed Rishbala relationship... That's was so good!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the TS. Very beautiful.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb part it was Neha! Loved RK throughout and even His villainous bro too... You know why! Lol
Awe! Sassy as Rishbala's baby... All thanks to lazy for this cutest baby character!
Lo ed this TS!

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