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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great second part Neha.

It was fantastic. The possessive RK showed up again. Loved it. Please do write more stories.
And thanks for the PM. But I had time to res before getting it.😆
BTW I am first to comment.🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
UNRES
Yipppee I am second ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Awesome update !!! hate this rohan but i am glad bittuji came on time !!!!
Overall it was awesome
thanx for pm 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Perfect second part to the beautiful story.
loved it. Keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Lovely second part Neha
Loved both parts equally
Keep writing...I love your works 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww such a sweet cute beautiful story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update neha 👏 Tfs for pm 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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suprbbb update
thanks 4pm
do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely and cute end
loved it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh neha baby, i love u so much for giving this beautiful story!! i loved it so so much!! amazingly written!!
Well, as i guessed that creep rohan misbehave with Rk's girl & got his own back!! i was not satisfied with Mohan's & bittuji's slaps but waited for my RK to come & beat the shit out of this lunatic & he did it too!! rohan is such a shame to be said as Rk's brother who's complete gem!! i myself wished to strangle his neck for touching madhu. after all that he did to madhu he had the nerve to come & ask her not to tell anything to Rk but truth can be never hide for long & my Rk cleverly sensed something was wrong with madhu & he authoritatively questioned bittuji & got the info & came immediately to his love to protect her!! glad bittuji came on time with mohan & saved madhu from that f**ker!! but yes, no mother will wish to see her son in jail & that justifies Rk action but at the same time he took a brilliant decision by moving out to Us with madhu & made a cute family with sassy & sasha!! (even i love that's story "it's in his kiss" of lazy's very much & i love the name too) (hmm... shashank, even this name appears in one of my fav story "the accidental wife" of simi & its the name of Rishab's dad. i don't know whether u read that story or not but when i read that name that story came to me)
well, sassy is so adorable & i loved her demand of wanting her brother soon but they knew it's a bby boy within 3 months LOL sorry for asking technical question... anyways, as they wished they were blessed with a baby boy. i never thought u'll take a leap in this story & end in a perfect way!! i loved when Rk says to sassy to take care of her bro & he will take care of his Biwi!! till the end he proved that madhu is his & only his.
"Madhu par haq bas ek hai mera"
u could have inserted the song "tere ishq pe tere waqt pe bas ek hai haq mera" it would have aptly suited the story but still u gave a awesome story to us!! u r writing cute sweet stuffs so please do write more!! i'm loving ur stories a lot dear!!
thanks for the pm!!

P.s i read ur comment to my SS:LSAM. i loved it & i laughed out loud reading it! thnks for iving such a beautiful comment & loving my story!!! i ll let u know when i reply to ur comment & if u wish u can check it then!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

Oh neha baby, i love u so much for giving this beautiful story!! i loved it so so much!! amazingly written!!

Well, as i guessed that creep rohan misbehave with Rk's girl & got his own back!! i was not satisfied with Mohan's & bittuji's slaps but waited for my RK to come & beat the shit out of this lunatic & he did it too!! rohan is such a shame to be said as Rk's brother who's complete gem!! i myself wished to strangle his neck for touching madhu. after all that he did to madhu he had the nerve to come & ask her not to tell anything to Rk but truth can be never hide for long & my Rk cleverly sensed something was wrong with madhu & he authoritatively questioned bittuji & got the info & came immediately to his love to protect her!! glad bittuji came on time with mohan & saved madhu from that f**ker!! but yes, no mother will wish to see her son in jail & that justifies Rk action but at the same time he took a brilliant decision by moving out to Us with madhu & made a cute family with sassy & sasha!! (even i love that's story "it's in his kiss" of lazy's very much & i love the name too) (hmm... shashank, even this name appears in one of my fav story "the accidental wife" of simi & its the name of Rishab's dad. i don't know whether u read that story or not but when i read that name that story came to me)
well, sassy is so adorable & i loved her demand of wanting her brother soon but they knew it's a bby boy within 3 months LOL sorry for asking technical question... anyways, as they wished they were blessed with a baby boy. i never thought u'll take a leap in this story & end in a perfect way!! i loved when Rk says to sassy to take care of her bro & he will take care of his Biwi!! till the end he proved that madhu is his & only his.
"Madhu par haq bas ek hai mera"
u could have inserted the song "tere ishq pe tere waqt pe bas ek hai haq mera" it would have aptly suited the story but still u gave a awesome story to us!! u r writing cute sweet stuffs so please do write more!! i'm loving ur stories a lot dear!!
thanks for the pm!!

P.s i read ur comment to my SS:LSAM. i loved it & i laughed out loud reading it! thnks for iving such a beautiful comment & loving my story!!! i ll let u know when i reply to ur comment & if u wish u can check it then!!

aww dii thanku so much
i m glad u loved it yeah this rk is quite similar to show one as he kept on saying madhu is his n i purposely didnt made bittuji n mohan do much as hero has to revenge for heroine n especially wen its my story rk has to do wat he does the best n
yeah i thought of inserting the song
but actually net was troubling a lot
so i cldnt get the lyrics but u can imagine it very well that the song is playing in bg wen he says that
yeah i read simis story its my fav too n i loved the name there too
but while writing this i had a idea to match up with sassy so i used that n even i have never thought that i wld take up the leap but getting them married was getting too common
so i resorted to different way
lol they didnt knee that it will be boy
sassy just wished that she will get a bro
n as it is said that small children r always close to god n god always hears them so our sassys wish was fulfilled n they had babay boy

i just loved ur story its one of my favs
n glad u laughed on my comment lol

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