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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay first of. YES. YOU MADE IT FUNNY!!! Don't ever doubt it. I laughed hard through and through. 😆
Put me in shame?😲 Well it's a rare thing for me as well. 😆 But it happens. There is a higher possibility of putting me in shame than making me blush. 🤣🤣 At least I know how to be in shame, unlike me and blushing.🤣 I won't ever stop laughing over that one. A girl that doesn't blush.🤣 While in a story there are two guys blushing. 🤣🤣 You don't know how hard I laughed on that one.🤣🤣 Still am, just thinking about it. 🤣🤣 You know I probably get some nice abs on my stomach due to over excessive in laughing these days. If not, my tummy will stay flat. 😆 Reading Bittuji and RK blush.🤣🤣 Just remembering it makes me go in a laughing fit all over again. Luckily no one is around to see me.😆 Now that would be a hard thing to explain, why I am laughing that much.
Oh, by the way I read Kavya di's comment. I searched for it, and luckily I found it on page 6. 😆 After your reply on her comment how could I not read it.😆 Di. An awesome comment. I am glad at least someone pulled her legs. I didn't have time for that one.😆 Sorry Sudha, but it's true.😆
Okay over to the update.
AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!👏👏👏👏
I laughed so hard through it all. 😆
RK blushing, Bittuji making fun of him. The kids. Everything. AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SULLU SULLU SULLU. 😳😆😆 You made my day, hey week with that one. So funny. 😆 Even the kids called him Sullu, Sullu Sullu. They made RK nervous and use that brain of his for a while, thinking if Sullu Sullu Sullu could be their father.😆 I so wished that they would say yes, making RK face go pale, opening his mouth wide open. Then we would see Bittuji coming by and tell him, Chief close your mouth or some flies might get in your mouth.🤣🤣🤣 RK would fume, but tell him. Bittuji I am RK even the flies have to pay to see me.🤣🤣🤣
There were absolutely nothing I didn't love about this TS. It's through and through comedial. The conversations, selfthoughts. Everything. The only person that wasn't that comedial was Madhu. But someone has to be in this story. We can't have all the characters go over excessive in comedy.😆 What would happen if you did? People would fall of their chair, couch, bed or whatever. Rolling on the floor laughing. But might have been something good. People would have less dusting to do. 😆 They already dusted the floor with their clothes.😆
The thing I found strange is how fast Madhu fell in love with RK. She showed absolutely no signs that she was in love with him. So the No from her was expected for me. So for RK to convince her that fast was unexpected. But hey what can one do when one is as handsome and a superstar like he is. Then there is no problem at all.
Now a little request from me. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *blinking really fast, showing my eyelashes while pouting* WRITE ANOTHER COMEDIAL STORY. I just love them.😳
And by the way, the song I thought of for this story. Well it the same as the title We are family. It's not that funny, but the title on this TS made me think about it. Just ignore the sister part. 😆 I thought of posting it on the previous commment of mine. But I decided for posting it on this comment. But I changed my mind yet again, just to make room for a different song. This song popped up in my mind. Don't ask me how. All those none useful cr*p is still stuck in my brain. 😆 Taking up some needful space for other things, like for studies. 😆 Anyway it's a song from the Disney movie Aladdin. It's called a Friend like me. I thought of RK and Bittuji's relation. So in their honour I am posting this song below, with of course some alteration.

Well, Ali Baba had them forty thieves,
Scheherazade had a thousand tales.
But Chief you're in luck, 'cause up your sleeves
You've got a brand of magic never fails

You've got some power in your corner now!
Some heavy ammunition in your camp!
You got some punch, pizzaz, yahoo and how.
See, all you gotta do is call that PA, and I'll say:

Chours:
"Mr. RK, Chief, what will your pleasure be?
Let me take your order, jot it down?"
You ain't never had friend like me

Life is your restaurant and I'm your maitre'd
Come on whisper what it is you want;
You ain't never had friend like me!

Yes sir, we pride ourselves on service.
You're the boss, the king, the shah.
Say what you wish; it's yours, true dish.
How 'bout a little more baklava?

have some of column A try All of column B,
I'm in the mood to help you, dude.
You ain't never had friend like me

Oh my. No no. My my my.
Can your friends do this?
Can your friends do that?
Can your friends pull this
Out their little hat?
Can your friends go poof?
Well looky here.
Can your friends go abracadabra, let her rip,
And then make the sucker disappear?

So don't just sit there slack-jawed, buggy-eyed,
I'm here to answer all your mid-day prayers,
You've got me bona fide certified;
You've got a PA for charge d'affaires.

I've got a powerful urge to help you out,
So what you wish, I really wanna know?
You've got a list that's three miles long, no doubt,
Well all you've gotta do is call like so, and oh ­-

Mr. RK, Chief, have a wish or two or three.
I'm on the job you big nabob!
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend,
You ain't never had a friend like me.
You ain't never had a friend like me

Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Thx for the PM... lovely story... "Daddy-Papa-Dad" --- poor RK... 🤣
Great Story!!! Loved the way RK proposed.. unique way -- "Adopt me!!"... Awww... truely fantastic!!! 👏👏👏
Keep writing and surely PM me if you start any story 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
very nice and sweet love story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
RK's reactions were hilarious
Fist pumping at its finest 🤣
Loved the update sudha...it was sooo sweet...like candy
Beautiful 😳

PS I was imagining RK's expressions all along
My sides hurt from laughing 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
RK is so cute, adopt me.
It was a cute story, loved it.
keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
good story written by exilent writter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
your rk is so cute asking madhu to adopt him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow it was superb n funnt too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
such a cute ending!!! i wish you had another part and didn't end it here :P but thank you for giving us such a wonderful short story 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Lovely update sudha di , but the story is finished feeling sad for it😭
Rk and blushing omg 🤣 can't believe, loved all the 3 kidos and of course how can I miss my bittuji loved him in this.
My madhu got a very handsome husband.

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