my story on RM...... bhai track

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again i'm here with my modified episode from mb. we all know how smart rk used to be. how st butchered his character for another person sake. but we could not accept rk being fooled by bhai. so my modification on this... this starts after rk was in jail for sultan's murder.

bevi-najim, this is for you dear ... as you wished one modified track on this.

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after court trial, rk is in jail and madhu comes to know about sultan being alive and informs rk and joshi. Joshi sends cops with madhu to arrest sultan and sultan fools everyone again. Then bhai kidnaps and threatens madhu to leave rk and come with him... She refuses. mean time all believes that sultan is dead and madhu is confused and what madhu is saying is her hallucination or imagination. Till this point everything is the same as it was in the show.

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One day , Madhu is in rk mansion in their room. All are refused to believe madhu, ...inspector, bittu ji, padmini ... even rk. She feels very sad. Does not know what to do. That time , she gets one ph call.

Bhai... 'kiya huwaa madhu..??! bahut dhuki ho kiya??!! Koyi tumari baat nahi maan rahe hai na??!! yaha tak ki tumara rk bi??!! 😆 . muje patha hai, wo kamina tumara baat par yakin nahi karegaa. Aur karegaa bi kiyu, uskeliye tum sirf ek zind aur haq hai. 😡

ab tumare paas koyi rastha nahi bacha hai. aavo mere saath. Wo rk tumareliye layak nahi hai... tume aaj ek parcel milatha na ??!! (then only she remembers that she got some courier today, but forgot to open it. She sees the parcel)... usse kolo... (she does so... sees one paper, takes out that and reads...her hands start shivering and drops that paper down)

ye divorce paper hai. usme tum sign karo aur us kamina se bi sign lo. Badi garv se bola na, wo rk ki 'meri madhu kabi nahi badhalegi'... uska dil dhukana chaatha hoon, usse thodna chatha hoon... unko ye dhikana chaatha hoon, usse sirf unka surname nahi sab kuch cheenliya hoon.

tumare paas sirf 2 din ka time hai. Galathi se bi police ko ya rk ko ye baat bathaya toh, me rk ko maar daloonga. kuch galath karneki koshish maat karo. Mere aathmiyo tumara chawl, mansion ke paas aur jail me bi hai. tume patha hai me kiya kar saktha hoon''...cuts the line.

Madhu... is very much scared, confused and angry too. Tears stats rolling down from her eyes. She looks at their wedding photo with teary eyes

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Same day night, Rk in jail, is waiting for madhu as she used to bring food for him. Madhu comes there. Rk and madhu are as usual in the interrogation room . madhu starts serving the dinner and rk looks at her... she looks very sad and didn't speak a word.

Rk...''madhu... kiya huwaa??!! Aisa chup kiyu ho??!! '

Madhu... no reply.

Rk... 'madhu kiya huwaa??!! ... madhu kuch toh bolo. '

Madhu remains silent... starts crying

Rk...''madhu...''... wipes her tears and ...

Madhu... Suddenly hugs him very tightly and says ...'' Rk, me bas aisagi rehna jaathi hoon, tumare paas aur Ye raath bi kabi katham nahi hona hai''

Rk...'' tume ye sab dhek kar dar laktha hai kiya...ki me yaha hamesha keliye band hojaavoonga??!! ... Ya phir wo stupid lawyer ne kuch kaha tumse ki tune us lawyer ko paise dhene keliye koshish ki???!! ... madhu wo sab chodo. Me tume bilkul galath nahi samja. Agar me tumara jaha hotha toh me bi yahi kartha. Madhu, jo bi tumne kiya usme tumari galahti kuch bi nahi... Wo sirf ek patni ka jindha tha apna pati keliye. Me tume bilkul bi galath nahi samja madhu''

Madhu... still crying... 'muje bahut dar laktha hai. aisa laktha hai ki yahi hai hamara aakri raat hai saath me. '

Rk... 'madhu... aisi baate kiyu karthi ho??!!''... Looks at her confused.

Then... Rk... Holds her face and looks into her eyes deeply for a while... and says... 'muje kuch nahi hogaa. Me jaldhi bahar aajavoonga. Jaldhi sab kuch teek hojaayegaa''

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Next day, In rk mansion, madhu looks at the divorce paper. But she could not sign on that. She looks at the ganesh idol in their room and prays to save rk and their relationship.

Ph rings... she looks at the ph display private number'... she knows who is calling and attends the call.

Bhai...''sign kardhiya??!!''

Madhu...''nahi''

Bhai ... ' 😡😡 us kamine se iske (divorse) bareme baat ki ya nahi??!''

Madhu...''nahi... kabi nahi karoongi. Me kabi apne rk ka dil nahi thod sakthi.''

Bhai...'' Ohhh... Laktha hai, tume saadhaaran basha samaj me nahi aatha hai. muje kuch karke dhikana hai. ... inthazar karo, agle 1 gande me rk ka laash milega tume. '

Madhu...''aisa mat karo...pls. rk ko kuch mat ...''... he had cut the line long back.

She is tensed and scared too.

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In jail, few goons approach rk when no one watches them.

30 minutes after bhai's call, a ph call from joshi comes for madhu that rk got attacked by few prisoners and he is very serious in hospital.

She rushes to the hospital and sees rk very badly wounded and lying on the bed with many bandages on his hand, leg, and shoulder.

Joshi...''madam, rk sir kosh me nahi hai. Zyadha blood loss hogayaaa aur chot bi. Thoda critical condition me hai. doctors ne kaha ki 12 hrs ke andhar kuch nahi bolsakenge''... says with a sorry face and leaves the place

She falls down on her knees near rk's bed and starts crying.

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At night , hospital room , some one knocks the door.

Madhu notices that and looks at rk. He is still unconscious. She opens the door. It's bhai wearing doctors apron enters the room forcefully

Bhai...''yaha kiya kar rahi ho.??!! Mene kaha tha na, sirf 48 gande hai tumareliye. Isi waqt tum mere paas honi chagiye na, ab yaha kiya kar rahi ho??!!''

Madhu...''sultan tum sach me ek rakshash ho. Tum mere rk ke saah aisa kaise kar sakthe ho. Ab yaha aakar aisa kehthe ho...''

Bhai...''ye sab tumari wajase Huwaa. Agar tum rk ka dil thod kar, us divorse paper me sign karliya hotha toh muje kiya zaroorath hai ye sab karne ki ?! ... ab tumara time over... Chalo mere saath''. Madhu moves backwards in fear.

Bhai...''chalo madhu...'' He walks towards her. Madhu hits the wall behind her and stops. Bhai is about to hold her hand... one hand holds his from behind.

Bhai turns and is shocked to see rk holding his hand.

Bhai... '' 😲 😲 😕 tum??!!''

Rk...'' haan me hi hooon''

Madhu is surprised too and runs and hides herself behind rk.

Bhai...''tume kuch nahi huwaa??!! 😲 😕''

Rk...''rk ko chune ka ya usko chot pauchaneka ab tak kisiko tum nahi hai. tum kiya socha tum kuch gundoko bejoge aur wo muje maardhenge??!! ... Ye hospital, ye bandage, ye scene, ye sab ... mereliye tumara trap ki waja se nahi. Balki tumareliye mera trap ki waja se.''

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Flash back... night in jail, rk is confused why madhu was sad and crying last night. Why she behaved so different. Why she was so hurt?? He could see the pain and grief in her eyes... why??!! If she was afraid of being rk in jail, she should have been like this since beginning. But why now suddenly...

That time, Few goons come to the room where rk is and try to attack him. Rk gives nice punches and kicks to them. Joshi comes running by hearing the noise and shocked to see goons in rk's cell. And asks them who send them. They says ...'' We didn't see the person. Just we got a massage to kill rk. For that he gave us lots of money '' joshi puts them in a separate cell and comes back to rk...

Joshi...'' rk sir, aap teek toh hai na??!! ya kuch...''

Rk... 'me teek hoon joshi. Me sirf ye sochraha hoon, koun muje maarna jaatha hai aur kiyu??!! Mere marnese kisko kiya miltha hai ya mil saktha hai???''... starts thinking. Some how he feels some connection between madhu's crying and this attack... madhu's word ' rk, sultan zindha hai. ye mera weham nahi hai'... ... And his face suddenly becomes bright and says ...''joshi, agar mera shaq sagi hai toh wo aadmi jo muje marna jatha hai wo sultan hai. '

Joshi... ' par wo toh mar gaya''

Rk... 'aisa hum soch rahe hai. par yaad hai madhu kiya kehthi thi sultan zindha hai'. phir jab police madhu ke saath gaye the, tab wo nahi mila. Iska matlab ye toh nahi wo mar gaya. Agar wo zindha raha toh???!! '

'aap mereliye kuch karna hai. muje aapki madath chagiye. Mere isaap se aapka deportment se bi kisine sultan ko madhath kar rahe hai. warna, usko ye sab possible nahi hai. so iske bareme kisiko kuch nahi pathayiyegaa. jaisa me boltha hoon waisa kariye. ... He explains the plan...'' Is gundo ko bi aapka custody me rakiye''

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Back to present...

Rk ...'' jab tum jaisa gatiya aadmi ithna kuch soch sakthe ho, me kithna sochsaktha hoon??!!

Bhai...''tab tum baj gaye ho... par ab nahi''... tries to attack him.

Joshi comes in that time and arrest him, tries to take him away

Rk... 'one minute mr. joshi.''... he stops and looks at rk.

Rk gives two three punches on bhai's face and his nose and mouth start bleeding ( 👏).

Rk...''ye meri madhu ko taklif dhene keliye''... and holds bhai's hand and bends his wrist forcefully in the opposite direction. Bhai winces in pain. Rk dislocated his wrist joint ( 👏 ) ...''ye meri madhu ko chune ki koshish karne keliye. Aur bi bahut kuch baki hai, lekin abi mera mood bilkul bi nahi hai tume maarne ki aur tumara ye Gandhi chehra aur thodi dher dhekne ke bi. ''... Then tells joshi...''take him out''

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After joshi takes him out, madhu looks at rk and starts checking him, his hand, face,...

Madhu... 'rk... tume kuch huwaa toh nahi hai na??!! tum sa... sach me teek ho??!!''

Rk...''madhu ... madhu relax. Relaaaxxx. Me teek hooon. Muje kuch nahi huwaa. '

Still she continue to examine him...

Rk...''ch... mene kaha na kuch nahi huwaa''

Madhu hugs him and cries.

Rk...'' Tum bi na biwi, dhuk me bi roothi ho, kushi me bi rothi ho.''... wipes her tears.

Madhu...''rk, tume kaisa patha hai, sultan zindha hai??!! koyi bi meri baat par yakin nahi kiya... tum '

Rk...'' jab tum pehli bar kaha wo zindha hai, tab me police ko tumare saath bejne keliye kaha. Par wo bach gaya. police aur baki sab ko ullu banaya. Par tab se muje lagaa ki kuch toh gadbad hai. uske baad, jab tum muje milne jail me aayi thi us raath tab tumne mujse bahut bola. ... phir kuch gundo muje maarne aaye the... sab ko ekk saath milkar socha, toh jawab mil gaya. ''

Madhu...''par rk, Me toh tum se kuch nahi kaha...''

Rk... 'biwi, tum kuch nahi kaha. Par tumare ye aanke sab kuch bathadiya. Meri biwi ko samaj ne keliye muje uski labs (words) ki zaroorath nahi. Rk jithna bi bura ho, gusse me ho, kosh me na ho, par aapni biwi ki har emotions, reactions aur uski dil ... Sab kuch samajpatha hai. Me pehle bi kehchuka hoon ki 'tum zindha kisi aur shareer me, bas ithna sa phark hai hum dhonome 😳''

Madhu... Smiles and hugs him ...''tume kaisa patha tha wo yaha aayegaa??!!""

Rk...''muje nahi patha tha biwi. ek small calculation and thoda sa common sense... kiya hogaa agar uska aadmiyon muje maardhenge toh... That's all. Kanoon ko bi sabooth chaahiye. So, As expected, wo aaya aur pakada gayaa... us raath jail me, mene kiya kaha tumse ki... ''

madhu...''muje kuch nahi hogaa. Me jaldhi bahar aajavoonga. Jaldhi sab kuch teek hogaayegaa 😳''

rk...''haan... 😳''

Madhu...''par rk, wo inspector joshi kaise correct time par andhar aaye the??!!""

Rk... 'upar dheko..''... she does so. a camera is fixed in that room.

Rk...''usse joshi aur magistrate dhono dhek rahe the...isiliye.''

Madhu...''par rk... tum us sultan ko maara tha na, wo bi is me record...??!!''

rk...''nahi biwi. Rk ithna bevakoof nahi hai, kanoon ko is sabot chod ne ki''

madhu...''phir..??!!"

rk... 'us camera ka control mere paas tha. Jab me une maara tha tab camera ko band kardhiya.''

Madhu...smiles and hugs him back. 'tum kithna soch the ho!!'

Rk...'' Nahi toh??!! Tume kuch hogaa aur me sirf dhekthe rahoongaa??!!... haan ek aur baat hai biwi, naam hi toh hai na, RK,,,,, right kamina''...smiles and tightens his grip

Rk... 'par biwi, muje toh tum par bahut gussa aaya tha... kiya zaroorath thi uske saamne rone ki??!! Wo uthna baat kar raha tha par tum...?! unko zor se ek thappad dhena chahiye. Par ... Very bad biwi. laktha hai tumara sare thappad par BI sirf aur sirf mera haq hai. 😳😉 .''

Madhu...''me toh bahut dar gayi thi. Wo muje divorse paper me sign karne keliye kaha...''

Rk...''tume kiya lagaa, koyi tume kuch paper me sign karvakar tuje mujse alag kar sakthe hai??!!.

Biwi ye sab me tume pehle hi bathadhiya hotha toh, tum ithna nahi rothi. Jab tum mere bed ke paas ro rahi thi, muje chen nahi saka (could not tolerate). Man toh kar raha tha ki sab kuch tumse boldhoon. Par me sach boloon toh tum dar jaathi aur joshi bi muje request kiye ki muje emotional nahi hone ki... par madhu aayindha aisa roovo mat. Me tume aisa nahi dhek saktha hoon.. wadha karo. '' ... stretches his hand

Madhu...'' Wadha''... she holds his hand and kisses that

both hugs 😳😳

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i didnt get enough time to think proper dialogues for rk. so bear with my this episode and hindi as usual. hope you all will enjoy. bye... 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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yipee.. me first in ur post🥳

superb immagination kajal...we expected sth like this in our show but it didnt happen...thank you so much for this wonderful update dear...
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Super😊
Kasha yasha hota
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Originally posted by: shasha1989

yipee.. me first in ur post🥳

superb immagination kajal...we expected sth like this in our show but it didnt happen...thank you so much for this wonderful update dear...



thank you so much dear 😃
i'm very glad that you liked it 😳
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Originally posted by: lovermg

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thanks dear 😳
yes... cvs ruined everything... even the episode where rk plans to trap sultan and the final fight were nor done well by cvs... i expected so much form them that time.
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Awesome RM episode 👍🏼👏👏
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i always wanted to see something like this in Bhai track after RK gets arrested for fake sultaans murder but cv's as usual as always spoiled the entire track
Thanks to u today bcoz of u we got see n imagine our beloved DVD/Rishbala in this Marvelous n interesting track 😊
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Really loved the last part of RM 🤗
That Wada wala scene 😳😳 n those memorable Hugs of our beloved Rishbala 🤗🤗🤗
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tfs this lovely episode of RM n well deserved end of that expressionless Bhai 😡😡😡 with us dear friend 😳😛😊
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Keep up the Good Writing 👏👏

Next time please make post on Madhu's life after RK' revenge track i mean madhu becoming sucessful in her life even though RK leaves her disheartened 💔 n after realising his mistakes he again broughts her in his life 😳😳😳

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