Rishbala OS: Lost Souls ( Last Part Page 39 ) - Page 34

Originally posted by: Crazy_Arshi

Awe beautifully written
it was Heart touching

Waiting for your next story Di 😉 😆

Dont give me more trouble pls 😆

Originally posted by: .Shree.

Dont give me more trouble pls 😆

You mean to say we shall let an awesome writer slip out of our hands. No, this is not possible! 😆

Amazing work dear...no body will say that this was ur first writing piece...the ending was too good...loved it to bits...😃😃

Originally posted by: drashtifan1

You mean to say we shall let an awesome writer slip out of our hands. No, this is not possible! 😆

Originally posted by: Ronita03

So nice

Originally posted by: rg0782

Amazing work dear...no body will say that this was ur first writing piece...the ending was too good...loved it to bits...😃😃

firstly i'm sorry i don't know how i missed to comment to the 2nd part. i read it long back & i thought i had commented but No! while checking my post i came to see on one commet where u have give 2 parts! so sorry for delay in commenting but in this i came to read the 2nd part again to know what's there in it!!

Originally posted by: madhurish

firstly i'm sorry i don't know how i missed to comment to the 2nd part. i read it long back & i thought i had commented but No! while checking my post i came to see on one commet where u have give 2 parts! so sorry for delay in commenting but in this i came to read the 2nd part again to know what's there in it!!

okay, coming to the update!

beautiful update!!

i loved it!!

even i asked for one more part & end the story in a happy note & u did it so thank u so much!!

Rk's dialogues were nicely wriiten & very touching!!

Glad the lost souls reunited!!

as i said in previous comment u r writing too good so keep writing Os/ts /ss/ff whatever in Rishbala & entertain us dear!!