Rishabala New OS: BONDED FOR LIFE

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hey peeps...How are you all...this OS I wrote as a part of OS competition..Got awarded as 2nd Runner Up for Best OS...thank You all for voting for my OS...LOVE YOU ALL...ofcourse DVD rocks..
Here is the OS...for all of you..once again...Hope you will njy reading it...and let me know your opinion...

BONDED FOR LIFE:


"OMG..Sultan..ur not ready. Everyone is calling you out there uff..."

"Wait Rishu..I'm the Dulha..I need to look dapper na.." said Sultan while admiring himself in the mirror

"Come on Bro...now it's too much.." said RK and pulled him along...

Sultan -Trishna...were performing the rituals...Suddenly...the chandelier was about to fall on him...Mallik (the Assistant of Mohan Kundra), rushed to him... pushed him aside. But unfortunately. It fell on him ...


"Papa...what happened to him"..everyone's attention turned to a young lady...with very innocent face and fair skin..petite form...in simple chididhar...was asking the hospital staff...Mohan patted her shoulder..she immediately started crying...RK looked at her...he is feeling bad about her...Radha(Mohan's wife)...took the gal in her embrace..she was sobbing...Sultan and RK were loitering here and there..while Trishna and family where in the mandap..they keep getting updates about Mallik's health..

After some 3 hours, Doctors declared Mallik as dead...Mohan's family completed the rituals for Mallik and with lot of compelling..brought Madhu to their home...as she don't have anyone other than her father...Mohan's family accepted Madhu as their own...

It's been a week ..but Madhu was the same gal..calm, quiet and lost in her own world...Radha-Mohan felt very bad.for her..infact they have decided to find a suitable match for her...to remove her solitude...


After few days...everyone where having their breakfast..since Madhu resumed going to college, Sultan-Trishna's marriage date is a confirmed. Slowly the wedding preparations have started...usually Sultan was the one who was very cordial to Madhu ..RK and MAdhu just exchange smiles...

That day Sultan was busy with his work so he asked RK to drop madhu to her college...they both sat in the car and he started driving...suddenly...he asked.


"Errrm... where do you study"

"St.Francis.."

"Ohh..cool. I know the address" said RK with a smile..she just smiled at him in response...to break the silence..."So...ur doing your Masters.." asked Rk..

"Yes"

"So...what's your specialization?"

"Hmmm..I am a psychology student" said MAdhu...which Made RK to look at her .. wow...Psycology.nice.

"Then you can help my mom in understanding..ME" he chuckled. For the first time ever he saw the beautiful smile on her face..he smiled inwardly...

The next few days..was eventful for RK and Madhu as they started getting to know each other well...as Sultan and MK are busy..>RK used to drop and pick up Madhu, as MK thinks..she is their responsibility. In all the ways..


"Sorry Radhaji..Nobody is ready to marry Madhu.." informed the Matchmaker

"What are you saying Sheila"

"everyone is more concerned about her bad fortune...she killed her mother while coming to this world..then her Father's property was gone..and then he himself...she is a curse...nobody will ever try to.."

Before she could finish..Radha heard sniffing..she turned her head and got shocked to see Madhu all in tears...before she could say something...she rushed into her room...

Radhaji warned the Matchmaker not to come and went to console Madhu..as she requested her to open the door but could only her loud sobbing of Madhu...

After some time..Rishu..knocked MAdhu's door..."Madhu..open the door...please talk to us..."

After some 30 mins of begging and threatening..she finally opened the door...RK got baffled to see her. Her puffed eyes, pale face and then that beautiful smile got vanished..she is looking like a living corpse...



The moment she saw him..he wiped her tears and she in an instance hugged him tight and started sobbing...he consoled her by patting her back..finally after some 5 mins..she regained herself and came out of his embrace...Rishabh looked at her for some 5 minutes and then held her wrist and dragged her along with him...

"Mom, Dad...I have to inform you guys something.."..all of them looked at RK and then at MAdhu..even Madhu was looking at him...questioninlgy..

"I will Marry Madhu" said RK...while looking at her...she got the shock of her life..Immediately Radha hugged him ..she broke down into tears...and patted his back approvingly..Mohan also hugged him and so Sultan...and Radhaji Hugged MAdhu...who was still in shock...she looked at RK who is looking at his mother..and then he looked into her eyes...the moment their eyes locked...Madhu nodded her head to yes..to the unheard question of Radha..on her opinion about this marriage.she came back to senses..but before she could react..Mohan Sultan lifted RK on their shoulders in happiness...Radha hugged Madhu tightly...


RK-Madhu's marriage was fixed along on the same date and time as for Sultan-Trishna...RK-Sultan were very busy with wedding preparations and their business...One day...RK took Madhu for shopping...they shopped for some hours..had lunch and then they headed to home.in all these Madhu was involved but not fully...she just respects this relation but...not sure about few things...RK understood her dilemma...after parking the car, he asked Madhu about the date..she smiled at him and left..


The marriage was a grand ceremony as both the Sons of MK, the great Business Tycoon got married...RK-Madhu looked heavenly in their bridal attire...


After the rituals, gruhapravesh...Madhu sat in the middle of beautifully decorated bed...she was nervous., anxious, etc etc...RK entered the room and sat beside her..he lifted her pallu...and admired her angelic beauty...he never thought she look this beautiful...she looked at him with teary eyes...he looked at her and hugged her tight..she cried for sometime...he soothed her as he know...she was thinking about Mallik...how he wished to do her Kanyadaan..how they used to discuss about her wedding...


A"Ssshhh...Bas Madhu...bas...chalo...go and get comfortable" said RK

She nodded her head and changed into kurta-patiala...even he changed his attire...they both lay on the bed...in silence...RK is in dilemma...whether he can at least touch her..in this situation..Madhu is confirming her dilemma...that RK got married to her because...he wanted to give her a new life and to make his mother happy...she gave a sarcastic smile to herself and closed her eyes by cursing her fate , yet again..

Next morning..Madhu took shower and was getting ready in front of the dressing table, the droplets from her hair...fell on RK's face which woke him up...suddenly...the moment he opened his eyes...he saw an angel...he blinked twice and admired her...suddenly madhu looked towards him ...smiled at him...before she could speak up...RK pulled her towards him and rolled on top of her.

"err...Rishu...who.." Madhu was searching for words...but before she could react...he looked into her eyes...and said."I LOVE YOU MADHU"...she in an instance looked at him...his eyes speaks volumes...

"The day...I realized that..ur the most lovable daughter..and the way you stood strong by fighting against your hurdles in life...I fell in love with you...the way you manage your life...the way you can suppress your anger and smile..the way you can take care of my family...the way you hide your feelings and try to make others comfortable...and the way you look at me with so much love..."..by now tears started flowing from her face...he wiped off her tears... and continued...


"When u cried your hearts out in my embrace...that moment I realized...that we are meant for each other...just think..You can open the door when Ma was asking you to. But you did it when I asked you to...whenever I see you cry. I feel like someone stabbed me in my heart...I was fool to took so long to realize my feelings for you...Madhu...I...

Before he could finish..Madhu locked his lips with hers...the kiss with full of emotions and love...soon it turned out to be a passionate one...they explored each other's mouth and poured their heart out...through the kiss...after like ages they broke the kiss...RK with teary eyes. Looked into those beautiful caramel eyes...which are showing love ...



"I LOVE YOU too RIshu...I don't know when how and where...but when evere I used to look at you I used to see both my parents in you..your affection, concern and your behavior with me...never made me feel alone...now I thank my fate for bringing you in my life...now can I scream and say..

"I LOVE MY LIFE...WITH MY RISHU..."...with that they started their sweet, romantic and love-filled life

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PRATHA1 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats Asha👏
I read this OS in contest thread, i voted for it too!
It's Cute & lovely OS!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful os dear!!
well deserved for 2nd runner up title!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey first of all Congorats to you dear!!
ur OS was mindblowing my most fav one!!! I myself voted it in Best OS category nd really happy u won it too!!!
Grt work dear!!! loved it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

Hey first of all Congorats to you dear!!
ur OS was mindblowing my most fav one!!! I myself voted it in Best OS category nd really happy u won it too!!!
Grt work dear!!! loved it!!!


Ohh..u voted it for best OS..thanks a lot dear..I am so happy...u peple like it...yayyy😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

beautiful os dear!!

well deserved for 2nd runner up title!!



Thank U...baby...yayy..im so happy that..u all liked it and voted for it 😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that is smthgn i feel proud of..Thank U...sweetu...yayy..im so happy that..u all liked it and voted for it 😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanq dear..i am happy yayayyay😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Congrats Asha👏
I read this OS in contest thread, i voted for it too!
It's Cute & lovely OS!


thanq dear...I am so happy u voted for it...Tyayy..im so happy that..u all liked it 😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS it is indeed 😳😛
Congrats for winning 👏👏👏

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