Rishabala TS: Forever to be yours Part 2 on page 5

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.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Beautiful End 😳

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bhavnajaiswal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Wonderfully written 👏👏
Yes it was pretty emotional n little bit of sad one also😳😳
well written 👏👏
Keep it up the Good Writing

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bhavnajaiswal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

thanks for the pm 😊

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Heema Somani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Amazing

Very emotional End

Thanks for pm and keep writing

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shruthi murali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Luvly luvly ts .nice one

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

WOW!! that was a beautiful ending...loved it...👏

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Azra Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awesome part
but plz dont end it like this :(

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jalebi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

OMG.. Thanks a lot😃😃

dear, i dont no to post pics so quoting on this post bcos this is exactly what i wanna say to u!! u really deserve a medal for writing such a beautiful story!!⭐️ after reading 1st part i was wondering how u'll end this story? how they will unite? will by any means one of them will come to the other ones world, which would be unbelievable! but u gave d right ending to the story & i find it very justifiable!!👏 yes, i agree the end was bit sad but together or apart 'true love is love'!😳 i loved how rk dint allow her to land, he dint act for his own sake but considered her & the pain she could suffer if she do so & promising her to be hers forever was just touching!!😳 i was li'l sad at d end but d last line of rk's of 'madhu able to sit in her side of cliff' brought smile in my face!!😃

it's one amazing piece of writing!! do write more of such wonderful stories dear!😳

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silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

It was wonderful but I didn't understood the end. She was not suppose to sit right then how she sat down maintaining her distance from the ground or she literally sat down. Rest it was beautifully written just explain me end my mind is not working properly. Thanks a lot and keep it up. 🤗