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Originally posted by: noiseygirl

law ...interesting huh...
may or june long time yaar
go sleepy head😆

Originally posted by: rg0782

Chapter 4: Well I so love Rishbala relationship as kids...and Madhu my god...such a dramaqueen..

but wait...how could he refer to her as Chucky...I mean Madhu isn't that bad even...

I remember one of my friends used to call me chucky...and urggghhh I used to hate that name...😡😡😡

Madhu is really so cute...I wish I get a daughter like her...

These kids are really lovable...😳😳

Chapter 5: These kids really confuse me..sometimes they talk so maturedly that I forget what's there age...😆

I liked the brother sister jodi of Sulbala...so nice to have Sultan as Madhu's brother here...😆😆

So RK, Sultan and Madhu all want to be spies when they grow up...interesting...rather thrilling...

Now how was watching them?? If it isn't Rishu then I must say that person should also be a spy for he is good at eavesdropping...😆

Seriously.. was the funeral Sultan's?? I guess it was...and Aryan is Sultan's son right??

Chapter 6: Madhu was tortured?? How and by whom?? And yeah why was Madhu wounded and how???

Its really painful to see Madhu like that...

Hope everything sorts out soon...

Thank you. Well who was watching them...hmm... well I guess I can reveal that. I thought of either Rishu, Trishna or Mohan at that Point when Writing it.

Originally posted by: rg0782

Chapter 7 : Okay so I am considering Trishna as Sultan's wife...(quite natural) but why does Madhu call her didu?? They are of same age right???

Okay when there was someone on the door I really thought it would be RK...anyone but not Sultan...

Whenever I read this story i feel as if I am watching some full on action movie...

The way that actions sequence is written is really awesome...

Now I get Madhu has been wounded like this but who attacked them and why would anyone want to kill Sultan...😕

And what was Sultan speaking about Madhu being right...😕

And Ni I know u love cliffhangers as much as we readers hate...😆

BTW I think madhu got three bullets and yet she is alive while Sultan had only two and he will die??
Well Madhu is proving herself to be a cat...I mean jungli billi... cause only a cat has nine lives...😆

Another thing is instead of taking up the bullet for herself she could have just pushed Sultan away...yeah I know at that time one's brain doesn't work but still it would have been more intelligent to do that...😆

Don't take my comments to our heart, I am generally famous for writing rubbish...😆

Chapter 8: Okay so Sultan dies like this...and I thought...silly me...

It was an emotional moment for both Sultan and Madhu...

Now what accident is Sultan talking about???
With each update of yours, some questions get their answers but simultaneously the equal number of questions arise...

So sultan died...was he talking about RK before dying???

and felt so bad for Madhu...watching ur bother to die in front of ur eyes is the worst thing that can ever happen...

Yeah it is.

Originally posted by: rg0782

Chapter 9: Poor Madhu...everyone blamed her for being the reason for everyone's death...

Wow so another flashback ends here...

Ahh I so love this Madhu who is always ready with logical answers...

I am amazed with RK, he got bit nicely but u know he is one of a kind..never lets a single chance of romance to go unfruitful...😆😆

Maaannn...he is so possesive of her...

Now now now whyw as madhu tortured and by whom???? God RK thought that mark to be a hickey...idiot...

I expected some hot stuff to happen here but NI u just poured cold water to my dreams...they just slept like that...😭😭

No probs, we have the whole story for it...

And yes did you open a new thread??????