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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shasha1989

amazing update akku
thanks for pm

thanxx for reading shasha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nadia724

Interesting update but still mystery is not solved
Hope u reveal rks rural identity soon
Thanks for pm

😆ab kahe kee mystery😆
anyway thanxx
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Awesome...but i feel somethinggg fishy in Rk story...


actually na mee too😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Akku meri jaan...🤗thank you so much for the dedication...muaaahh!!!

toh hero finally line pe agaya aur ashiqei bhi dhikhana shuru kardiya...oh God..pattar phekne ki scene se mujhe na ek serious doubt aya hain...yeh tere RK ko ek baar bhi doubt nahi aya kya..ki agar koi pattar Madhu ko lag jaati toh..😲 aise pattar pheke jaa raha hain jaise koi pahad kamre mein kahada karna ho..😆😆😆

next update main yeh serious bandha koi shararat na kar jaye...
☺️☺️☺️

haan haaannn hogi thori shararat thori masti

dekho dekho

thank you so much didu
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Posted: 11 years ago

EPI24


he still sining me to come down

I shown him my hands ..as the gaurds are putside

He still saying me to come down

how - I singed

from pipes - he signed

from piped he gone mad how can i...

you mad I signed

trust me and come down he signed again

ghrrr I signed

a shameless smile from him

finally I started to go down from window..its scary..yaar I looked down..he is just saying come down come down..i swear if I found this a silly thing..for what I m doing much like this I will kil him...

Finally I reached down...

"now ...what!!" I said angrily looking toward him

"I love You" he smilingly said

"what the hell for this you make me to jump these 3 story building ghrrr" I angrily asked hehhe isn't it amazing the work to listen whom I was so mad ..when they are coming again and again its irritating me now

"nai nai...for something else..just sit " he said while covering his face with helmet and showing me the bike

"where we are going" I surprisingly asked

He smricks.." don't worry I will not drive you to my dau jee in this dress"

"R.K..."

"Madhu...just trust me"

Fine I trusted him and sat beside him..

He drove light ghost rider...and suddenly he applies break...I jerked toward him..

"what.." I m annoyed

"what..i was in hurry coz I have to drive you back to hostel again na..better hold me carefully and tightly" he said

I smiled...and I passed my hands in between his sholder one tighly clutching his stomach and another holding him near neck...this is the perfect couple position in bike..

He smricks again and we started our journey again..he stopped at a place

"from here your eyes would be closed by this cloth" he said

"enough of nautanki yaar ..what you are up to" I annoyed

"please..this is last nautanki" he says by making a cute face

"pakka" I asked and he nodded and..next moment my eyes were close from a tight black cloth

Finally after wait of 10 min..which were longest 10 min of my life he opened my eyes

Omg omg its beautifull..its full of candels all over on floor..but let me gyess what is this hmm

"what is this" I asked from him

"hmmm our swet small and simple home " he said loking smilingly deep;y into my eyes

"our home..i cant understand" I said

"ahh this is my blue print of our home which I will make at village when we will go there" he said

"really" I m very excited "lets see this" I said as I was about to enter inside a candle field.

"no..no..not like that" he utterd in haste

"what now!! Look you cant stop me fromenetring to my home" I said

"yaa yaa my home mistress I just mean not linke that" saying this he hold me up in his arms "like this" he said

I give expression..and he accepted and we.me in his arms entered in our home sweet home

"okee so biwi" he said aww he called me biwi wow so passionately he said "this is our living room" he entered futhur "this is our bed room" he entered further this is room which will be seprated by a door for our childerns" he said

"ya this side for maya and that side for arjun " I added

"ohh where will go meera then" he questioned

"arrey buddhu" I exclaimed "meera is very small now just a year old so she will sleep with us na in our bed room"

"arrey haan" he accepted "okee biwi here is your sweet and small kitchen"

"I need a bigger one..coz you will help me there too " I said

"then who will do office job"

"oh hello that's I don't care you have to help me...how can I handle maya and arjun and meera together..and arjun he is like you full naughty most difficult to handle."

"this whole is due to your laad pyaar understand " he said while putting me down

"oh hello.this is you who made him like that..dont say a word..and maya..who brings a dol for her every month"

"I so whats bad"

"whats bad !! I have to adjust them kitna kaam ho jata hai khana bacche ghar and tum you are a kid too"

"you!!!"

"what you!!" saying this we both turn aside in anger

Few second after we both brust into laughter..hahahahah no home no marriage.bacche ho gaye and larai b hahahahah

I hugged him in estacy.."I want this home as soom as possible" I said

"hmm as soon as I get enough money for dau ji's operation we will go to village and I promise we will have this home and same moment and I will make you happy always" he says hugging me tight

"yaa we will name this house on our name madhu and..." my mind tickled "oyee whats your name" I said removing his hand from my back

"what happen to you all sudden" he asked

"look as you told me everything but you haven't told me whats your name exactly is" I asked

He laughed and said "remember when you was behaving as dective and was tryng to know my reality" I nooded he continued" at the time if you ever read my full name you wont ever needed this"

"what you mean " I asked

"my full name is RAJ KUMAR KUNDRA..you was always knowing raj kumar only hence"

"ohh yaaa..then who is rishabh" I asked

"look..rishabh na my parents call me rishbah and my school name was rajkumar..hence" he said

"okee okee I got it" I said..

FEW DAYS AFTER

God help me out..i will kill you R.K...he said me to wait for him..as he is getting salary so will go to chaupati..its almost an hour I m waiting for him..and weather seems it will rain heavily too..i will kill him..who makes a girl wait for such..arrey yaar it started raining too..R.K. ghrrr

Now he is coming and I m almost wet now

"sorry sorry actually na wo urgent work aa gaya tha" he came as soon as he reaches to me covering his head with hand to protect from rain and I was full on fuming this time

"you know.." I was about to start but he interrupted

"Lets go from here first then we wil talk" he said

Hawww he haven't even listen to me..iski toh I have to blurt out a lot but he how could he...

"lets go to my room its near from this place" I said and draggd me to a small street which ends to a house where there he made me to entered a room..stuffs scattered here and there Carom table little blended

"eheh my room you " he said as he sees me loking awakwardly to the scattered things

Anyway I forgotten I was angry so I started " where were you..i was waiting for you almost an hour..i am full wet..why you made me wait like this" he was full bend and I was above him

"sorry" he said smilingly with his dimples

"sorry ..just a sorry..you na"I was angry

"madhu ..madhu..sorry na..look you are full wet so pls change else you will get cold" he said

"change..really..if my hubby has cloth center here..then how can there be a ladies dress" I taunted

"no no madam your hubby don't have any cloth center but you can still change" he said

"really ..what do you mean by this do you have any extramarital affait' I suspected him

"sorry mam..my BIWI is so stict..so I cant have this." Saying this he goes to cubbord and beings something and given to me saying "wore this and hang your dress to dry up"

"what is this" I puzzles

"look there is no difference between boy and girl dress this is lower and shirst bear with it for few hours then your dress will dry and bear that okeee" he said showing me the door

Okee that's not the problem I always wear lower and top...but this is shirst and that a male shirt..okee just for a hour so okay lets change

Thank god I have a cluture so I cluted my hair and changed my dress I hanged my wet clothes in the hanger there and came out ...

As soon as I came r.k. came from other side having two bowls In hand...without looking toward me he said "food is ready"

He is looking cam hot in black shirt and lower ahaannn

He looked towards me and it seems he lost...me too

He was stepping towards me...

I stepped back but he hold me by my waist and pulled me...our temple touched then nose..then...

I found little place...emarssed me I tried to go away from there but he cluthed my hand ..came near to me he put his hand flat on my belly ..he was behing me..he openes my cluture his nose was on my head..i can feel him..butterflies in me were raising ..i closed my eyes with his touch..i was shivering my legs were falling...he pulled me more close...by his palm flat on my belly...I turned back..

I cant hold myself anymore I hold his shoulder...I was looking down..he made me look to his eyes by holding my chin..i looked into his eyes...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy am th first, to all those who are next to mine



Beautiful update, and first time Akku trying romance, wow it was good, but stopped immediately as it started, liked the idea of RK and madhu in rk place.

The candle sketch reminds me of our rishbala candle scene.

And ur story seems more to be of Rajbala than Rishbala, and also our hero name goes with that.

Update next part soon.
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏 👏 👏

superbly amazing update miss.sparrow kuddos to u sooo romantic one!!!! 😳
I loved it alll!!! mazaaa agyiii!!!!
u left at cliffhanger huhhh now eagerly waiting for nxt part!!! Will they kiss??? or not!!!! I m dreaming... 😆
nd ya me second one!!! yiiipppeee!!!!! 🥳
Edited by My_VivJaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res/unres
Lol ...i forgot 2 unres
Yay ! I m third *dancing*
Awesome update di ...trying romance huh ? Cool ...n beleive me it was awesome
But u left on a cliffhanger ..not fair !
Waiting for d nxt update ...
Edited by shriyakadge - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aahhh..ur so bad...exacly twist pe ..huh..how could you 😆...
Anyways..im happy to see some romance atleast now...was waitign for this...

aakhir kiss hua ki nahi...nahi hua na..pakka no LIKE next time...

aur kuch bhi hoga tho comment bhi milega 😆

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